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Post by Guest on Tue 16 Dec 2008 - 17:41

Okay, when you look at my picture please take into account a few things: 1. This is my first time drawing guns. 2. I know my hands are horrid, I can't draw them well. & 3. I'm not too good at porportion either.




Riful is Holding a Galil MAR, while 'Drea has a, well it was supposed to be a SIG Sauer P230, but, now, she has a mutant- type new gun that looks horrid. No Good No Good No Good sweat sweat sweat sweat

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Post by Kiskaloo on Tue 16 Dec 2008 - 20:01

It's a far sight better then I can do.

So I give it a Good .
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Post by Piero on Tue 16 Dec 2008 - 20:46

Do you have profiles for them? I'd be interested in knowing more about them.

Oh yeah, and just as a note, it's a heck of a lot better then I would have probably done.

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Post by ElfenMagix on Tue 16 Dec 2008 - 22:17

I like them. But when you have a female handler, it becomes Sorella (sp?)...
Now about that background stuff and story...

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Post by emperor on Wed 17 Dec 2008 - 1:12

Riful on the left reminded me Elsa!! Very Happy

Your porportion is nice.

Just try to trace over the Sig Sauer once and it'll be good.

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Post by Guest on Wed 17 Dec 2008 - 17:40

Thanks every one, I'm currentally working on the background and story. Elfen I was wondering about the sorella thing, so, sorry about that. Very Happy

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Post by Kiskaloo on Wed 17 Dec 2008 - 17:59

"Fratello" is the Italian word for "brother", even though it is applied to a male-female team. I suppose it is because the cyborgs were conditioned to consider their handlers to be their older brother, though only Henrietta seems to feel that way. It is also likely part of their cover when in public - in Florence, Jean introduced Rico as his sister.

"Sorella" is the Italian word for "sister", so by the above logic, if the handler is a female, the cyborg would be conditioned to think of them as their older sister.
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Post by Guest on Thu 18 Dec 2008 - 2:23

@Kiskaloo wrote:"Fratello" is the Italian word for "brother", even though it is applied to a male-female team. I suppose it is because the cyborgs were conditioned to consider their handlers to be their older brother, though only Henrietta seems to feel that way. It is also likely part of their cover when in public - in Florence, Jean introduced Rico as his sister.

"Sorella" is the Italian word for "sister", so by the above logic, if the handler is a female, the cyborg would be conditioned to think of them as their older sister.

Okay, Thanks Kiskaloo, you helped me alot!

Also after my final tomarrow I'm going to work on another picture of Riful and possibly Amadrea.

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Post by boomer_gonz on Thu 18 Dec 2008 - 2:37

I think I may have encouraged the confusion and for that I apologize.

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Post by Guest on Thu 18 Dec 2008 - 17:09

@boomer_gonz wrote:I think I may have encouraged the confusion and for that I apologize.

how so boomer?

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Post by ElfenMagix on Thu 25 Dec 2008 - 22:42

Blank entries have been made for them in the GsG OC Wiki...
Waiting for more art, info and stories to add to the entries.

There is even a blank one for you in the author's page.

See, you're almost famous! Evil


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Post by boomer_gonz on Thu 25 Dec 2008 - 22:45

Riful_Amadrea wrote:
@boomer_gonz wrote:I think I may have encouraged the confusion and for that I apologize.

how so boomer?

In The Alpha Effect: Part 2; Alpha and Omega are 'called' fratello even though they are in fact, sorella.

I used it as sort of a plot device as to where the signature title came from.

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Post by Guest on Thu 25 Dec 2008 - 22:55

@boomer_gonz wrote:
Riful_Amadrea wrote:
@boomer_gonz wrote:I think I may have encouraged the confusion and for that I apologize.

how so boomer?

In The Alpha Effect: Part 2; Alpha and Omega are 'called' fratello even though they are in fact, sorella.

I used it as sort of a plot device as to where the signature title came from.

Okay!

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Post by Guest on Fri 26 Dec 2008 - 1:34

Me and my sister messing around pretending to be my characters. I'm the one wearing green, she the one in pajamas.

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That's Riful..... sweat

Riful again.

My other character I made, Kilana.

Another Kilana.

Riful


both of them.

first joined mission.

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Post by Kiskaloo on Fri 26 Dec 2008 - 12:02

Good

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Post by ElfenMagix on Fri 26 Dec 2008 - 12:32

Thats cute! And well done.

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Post by Guest on Fri 26 Dec 2008 - 15:56

my mom was enjoying it too. when we were posing, we were pretending to shoot my brother......it was fun.

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Post by Kiskaloo on Fri 26 Dec 2008 - 16:16

I usually shot my sisters (with foam bullets), so I guess it is only fair that you get your revenge. snipe

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Post by Guest on Fri 26 Dec 2008 - 21:47

@Kiskaloo wrote:I usually shot my sisters (with foam bullets), so I guess it is only fair that you get your revenge. snipe

Well, he kept rolling around on the floor and jumping into pictures......I didn't hurt him, just scared him a little.

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Post by TTIO on Sat 27 Dec 2008 - 8:38

Aw, I feel sorry for him now...

I have a friend who's always doing this sort of thing to his brother. Now, I must go and help him in order to restore  the balance Razz

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Post by Guest on Sun 28 Dec 2008 - 1:49

@TTIO wrote:Aw, I feel sorry for him now...

I have a friend who's always doing this sort of thing to his brother. Now, I must go and help him in order to restore the balance Razz

Don't bother, he tackles me. and bugs me. and annoys me....and acts like a little kid!

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Post by TTIO on Sun 28 Dec 2008 - 10:54

Thats exactly what my friend's brother does. Whilst I doubt you're anywhere near as harsh as he is (he likes to get his brother in judo holds, headlocks, that sort of thing), I still end up feeling sorry for people like that some of the time... Course, when they're being their normal selves it flips over, but hey. 'Tis just.

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Post by ebitempura966 on Sat 1 May 2010 - 2:45

well, its a good thing when you try something new right?
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Post by tremec6speed on Tue 2 Nov 2010 - 22:57

Great work, I like the faces very nice! Very Happy
Trouble with hands and proportions?
Tell me about it! I do too and multiple perspectives is a pain for me as well! Puzzled


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Post by ebitempura966 on Wed 3 Nov 2010 - 11:00

@tremec6speed wrote:Great work, I like the faces very nice! Very Happy
Trouble with hands and proportions?
Tell me about it! I do too and multiple perspectives is a pain for me as well! Puzzled
yawyawyaw, its not a trouble at all, its all a pathway to be better, well you can increase props or perspective but you can observe it whether its all appropriate for you or not, so always consider that, just trust with times that will bring you more experience, for now just draw as like as you want riff ;D
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