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Post by Guest on Tue 30 Dec 2008 - 17:04

Here's a list of all of my fanfictions so far:

[Substitute Teacher]

Prologue


[Broken Brain, Healing Heart]

Compliment
Haunting
Nightmare
Daydream


[Oneshot(s)]

Tapestry


Substitute Teacher: What would happen if Claes was teacher for a day? (Humor)

BBHH: When events of consequence occur, past events of consequence tend to make a reappearance. Featuring Triela, Claes, Hillshire, and Pinocchio. (Action/Romance)

Tapestry: Exploring Claes's character.

Thank you for reading!


Last edited by TwistedRose on Sat 10 Jan 2009 - 3:26; edited 5 times in total (Reason for editing : Chapter four up!)

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Post by TTIO on Tue 30 Dec 2008 - 17:21

Awesome, I liked it Very Happy

So you know, I bookmarked it. I don't bookmark things that often (you should have seen how devoid of anything useful my bookmarks were before I reinstalled Windows and Linux) so that rates pretty well imo. Though I've no idea if that was OOC or not...

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He clasps the crag with crooked hands;
Close to the sun in lonely lands,
Ring'd with the azure world, he stands.

The wrinkled sea beneath him crawls;
He watches from his mountain walls,
And like a thunderbolt he falls.

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Post by Kiskaloo on Tue 30 Dec 2008 - 17:24

An excellent first start, IMO. Claes does enjoy her routine and even the loneliness, though at one point in the manga she did note she was a little jealous of the companionship the other cyborgs had that she didn't. Then again, her own aloofness plays against her, I think.

Claes is a tough one to write for, I have found. Yume no Kakera gave me fits and the current one I am working on (she plays a central role in a number of chapters) is really driving me up the wall because I am approaching subjects the manga hasn't really touched on, which will likely force me to fall back on the first season anime since it did touch it in a way in order to try and keep her reactions in-character (I generally prefer to confine my OC universe to the manga for personal reasons).

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Post by Guest on Tue 30 Dec 2008 - 17:26

I liked it, quite a lot to be honest. It didn't feel OOC to me, just that instead of seeing the "kind Claes" we usually see, I'm seeing the one that told off Angelica in the hospital. So, if this is how you write with a block, I can't wait to see how you do without it Good

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Post by Guest on Tue 30 Dec 2008 - 19:33

Thanks, reviews mean a lot to me... I think I'm going to start planning out my larger fanfiction, as soon as I catch up to the manga. *still hasn't finished Volume 7*

The central characters will probably be my favorites: Triela, Hillshire, and Claes, of course. Eh, I'll probably have a Pino flashback or dream, too, because I just love Pinocchio and I'm still mourning. Cry

*opens up Word to start prewriting*

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Post by Kiskaloo on Tue 30 Dec 2008 - 20:07

Rico is the one I find the most frightening to write (which is why I really haven't put her in any stories outside of a minor supporting role). Kara is closest to Henrietta, so I should write more with her, I suppose, but Triela's age and maturity make her one of the easier ones to write, which is why she featured prominently in Public Relations.

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Post by Guest on Tue 30 Dec 2008 - 20:58

Yeah, I'm not looking forward to writing Rico...For what I'm planning I have to get all of the fratello involved, all at once. I hope I'm not pushing it too far, because I sincerely doubt my ability to write dialogue with so many people.

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Post by Guest on Sat 3 Jan 2009 - 5:20

New fic(s) up!

I know I'm going to regret starting two at once, but...

Broken Brain, Healing Heart
Substitute Teacher

The latter is probably going to be a sort of block for Writer's Block...writing humor is like handing my muse an energy drink. Nuke

Also; the title, "Broken Brain, Healing Heart" for some reason just does not sit well with me. Any suggestions?

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Post by boomer_gonz on Sat 3 Jan 2009 - 5:48

Amen Sister!!

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Post by TTIO on Sat 3 Jan 2009 - 6:31

I like them Very Happy

Since I don't know what the plot as a whole is going to be, I can't really give any suggestions on the name however...

My favourtie bit from the second one:
“Don't piss me off.”

Triela looked up from her notes for a millisecond, then copied down what Ms. Johansson said. “Don't...piss...off...”



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Post by Guest on Sun 4 Jan 2009 - 4:50

I need to stop staying up so late. It's almost three AM here and I tend to be bad-tempered on less than six hours of sleep.

But I wanted to get this up, considering that the first chapter was (seemingly Wink ) plotless. I present the second chapter of Broken Brain, Healing Heart:

Haunting

And now I will try to catch some ZZZ's.

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Post by TTIO on Sun 4 Jan 2009 - 6:38

The guard's face remained expressionless. “It's !-- page { margin: 0.79in } P { margin-bottom: 0.08in } --—”


Ok, despite it being a mistake (probably the conversion into HTML), I found that funny Very Happy

But as a whole, it worked really well. Good job Good

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He clasps the crag with crooked hands;
Close to the sun in lonely lands,
Ring'd with the azure world, he stands.

The wrinkled sea beneath him crawls;
He watches from his mountain walls,
And like a thunderbolt he falls.

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Post by Kiskaloo on Sun 4 Jan 2009 - 11:59

Indeed. Nice to see the "Ice Princess" thaw a little. Good

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Post by Guest on Sun 4 Jan 2009 - 14:10

@TTIO wrote:
The guard's face remained expressionless. “It's !-- page { margin: 0.79in } P { margin-bottom: 0.08in } --—”

Ok, despite it being a mistake (probably the conversion into HTML), I found that funny Very Happy

But as a whole, it worked really well. Good job Good

*wordlessly throttles computer*

I swear, that's happened so many times on other fanfictions it's not even funny...

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Post by TTIO on Sun 4 Jan 2009 - 14:25

Try a different word processor, that might fix it. Personally, I use a mixture of OpenOffice and Liquid Story Binder. Overall, you're probably best off using Openoffice as it uses the .odt format by default (which has full support on FF).

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He watches from his mountain walls,
And like a thunderbolt he falls.

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Post by Guest on Sun 4 Jan 2009 - 14:34

I've been using OpenOffice, and that only happens when I have to cut and paste things, which is what happened there. It's fixed, but I'll keep an eye out for it in the future.

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Post by TTIO on Sun 4 Jan 2009 - 17:13

Strange... Anyway, OpenOffice ftw! Very Happy

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Ring'd with the azure world, he stands.

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He watches from his mountain walls,
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Post by Guest on Tue 6 Jan 2009 - 19:17

Third chapter up!

Nightmare

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Post by Kiskaloo on Tue 6 Jan 2009 - 19:24

Read it this morning (I have an alert set up for your stories). Smile

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Post by Guest on Tue 6 Jan 2009 - 19:42

Any critique for it? I know it wasn't my best, but somehow it got stuck at the quality it is now. -.-

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Post by Kiskaloo on Tue 6 Jan 2009 - 20:04

TwistedRose wrote:Any critique for it? I know it wasn't my best, but somehow it got stuck at the quality it is now. -.-

I enjoyed it as I enjoyed all your other stories. Good

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Post by TTIO on Wed 7 Jan 2009 - 12:32

I liked it Very Happy And if you're expect your writing to get even better, then I need to get email alerts for your stories Wink

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He clasps the crag with crooked hands;
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Ring'd with the azure world, he stands.

The wrinkled sea beneath him crawls;
He watches from his mountain walls,
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Post by Guest on Wed 7 Jan 2009 - 14:15

They're very good. I'll keep an eye out for updates, because if this isn't your best, I can't wait to see it. Keep it up! It is awesome!

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Post by Guest on Sat 10 Jan 2009 - 3:25

Finally, Chapter Four!

Daydream

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Post by TTIO on Sat 10 Jan 2009 - 8:05

Again, an awesome chapter Very Happy

I would say, though, that it would be better if you put the translation in near/next to the German, as opposed to at the end. I didn't realise there was a translation, so I ended up using Babelfish myself Wink

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He clasps the crag with crooked hands;
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Post by Kiskaloo on Sat 10 Jan 2009 - 11:23

Indeed!

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Post by Kiskaloo on Mon 10 Aug 2009 - 22:40

I saw your Avatar: The Last Airbender story, TR. I liked it!

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