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Post by Triela on Tue 7 Jul 2009 - 2:39

OMG REALLY?? Triela ACTUALLY revived her OC!?!?!? Is it POSSIBLE!? @_@

Yup it is!! ^_^

Here is the finished product. This is her finished character design. YAY!! ^.^


Gunslinger Girl OC Savyna by ~KalasRaven on deviantART

I created Savyna a while ago and I never created a design that fit her while keeping with Gunslinger Girl's style. Finally after all this time I FINALLY came up with this.

Savyna is a British 11 year old. A small plane containing her and her family crashed as they were leaving Italy on their way home from vacation. She was the only survivor of the crash. The Social Welfare Agency picked her up and they made her into a cyborg, saving her from death.

Savyna is a very nice person, and tries hard to please her handler, Alex. Being new, Savyna isn't that experienced so she looks to the other girls, mostly Triela for guidance. She loves music and is fascinated with dinosaurs. (She asks her handler to get dinosaur related things for rewards and christmas presents.) Her conditioning is such that she isn't in love with her handler like Henrietta, but she isn't defiant like Triela. She has devotion and respect for her handler, but has a clear mind if asked to do something she knows is wrong. (She wouldn't have shot Emilio like Rico for example.)

Savyna's main weapon in the UZI.

Her clothes are casual in this picture. When she goes out on a mission she usually wears comfortable shorts for easy movement a shirt and combat boots.

I HAD to put dinosaurs in there. I suppose Savyna is who I would be if I were a cyborg. ^_^

Drawing her handler now. >.<

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Post by Sakura on Tue 7 Jul 2009 - 2:44

Yay you finished your OC! I think she looks great! Looking forward to how her handler looks!

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Post by rusty-spring on Tue 7 Jul 2009 - 2:45

Awesome, very cute outfit she's got. Very Happy

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Post by hydra282 on Tue 7 Jul 2009 - 11:47

She looks great Very Happy
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Post by Triela on Tue 7 Jul 2009 - 20:59

Thanks guys!! I hope to post my handler's picture tonight once I finish coloring it. I hope I didn't make him too young looking, cuz all the guys I make have to be hot! XD

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Post by rusty-spring on Tue 7 Jul 2009 - 21:09

Triela wrote:Thanks guys!! I hope to post my handler's picture tonight once I finish coloring it. I hope I didn't make him too young looking, cuz all the guys I make have to be hot! XD

It's ok, all the guys I end up drawing end up being young looking bishounen as well. Razz

Probably some side effect of only drawing females - I'm sure you'll do fine, so hurry up and show us. Razz

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Post by Sakura on Tue 7 Jul 2009 - 23:03

Nothing wrong with young looking bishounen. Razz

All your art is awesome, Triela. Looking forward to it. Wink

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Post by Triela on Fri 15 Oct 2010 - 21:46

New material FINALLY! Just finished it! :3


Savyna and Triela by ~KalasRaven on deviantART

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Post by Alfisti on Sat 16 Oct 2010 - 8:54

So when are we going to see or hear more of your OCs hmmmm? We're still waiting to see a handler Razz

Looks good mate. From a critical standpoint Triela's head should probably extend back a bit more, and cut in toward her face higher up. I don't know what your skull's like, but if I feel the back of mine it doesn't really start to cut in across the top of my scalp till an inch or so above my eyeline. Add the bulk of hair ontop of that and...

Still, sweet stuff. Dino shirt's kinda cute too.

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Post by ElfenMagix on Sat 16 Oct 2010 - 10:18

Congrats, Triela!
Its a start.

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Post by Triela on Sat 16 Oct 2010 - 10:42

Thanks Alfisti. I knew some of the things where wrong halfway through coloring it, so i couldn't go back. I hate when that happens. -_-;;

Yeah. I know I'm really slow with my OC, but put my homework and my real original characters from my own comics above this. I hope to finalize her handler soon.

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Post by Alfisti on Sat 16 Oct 2010 - 10:51

Triela wrote:Thanks Alfisti. I knew some of the things where wrong halfway through coloring it, so i couldn't go back. I hate when that happens. -_-;;
I know that feeling, I hate that feeling. It's like when you look up and realise you've been working on the wrong layer of Photoshop for half an hour. But because you've been a good little illustrator and saved regularly there's nothing you can do about it.

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Post by tremec6speed on Sun 31 Oct 2010 - 9:42

Cool art! What are they saying to each other?
I can imagine an interesting interchange.
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Post by ACH on Sun 31 Oct 2010 - 10:30

Seem's Like a lot of Artistic Hands have worked again, YAY. First theres ebitemp, Then Me, then Tremec and Triela, Ill Probably take another month before I get a new one out but this is quite nice!

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Post by Triela on Sat 2 Jul 2011 - 2:49

I know I don't update this that often, and you guys still don't know much about her, but I still wasn't happy with my design for Savyna. I'm getting better with character design and wanted to do a complete overhaul on her design. I kept some stuff, but she looks like a who different person now, also one that I'm proud of.



I gave her a softer look, more innocent. I think I might rewrite some of her characteristics as well. She looks kinda shy.


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Post by Alfisti on Sat 2 Jul 2011 - 7:01

Triela wrote:and you guys still don't know much about her...
No, we don't... still waiting on a full dossier. Wink

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Post by Professor Voodoo on Sat 2 Jul 2011 - 10:37

Nicely done.

Savyna actually got a one-liner mention in one of my stories (hope you don't mind).
From episode six...
He was not the only adult agency member in the dining hall, but there were far fewer than there had been at lunch. By contrast there seemed to be many more cyborgs present for the evening meal. That was just an illusion though...there were still the same number of cyborgs, but at lunch they had only been stopping in to grab a quick bite and rush off to their afternoon training. Now that the day was over they lingered sociably over dinner, some going for seconds, all chattering with their friends. Elio was lucky to find an empty table.

Marisa had been part of a group listening to Savyna dissertate on the various distinguishing features of ceratopsian dinosaurs, but she excused herself when she noticed her handler sit down. This was nothing abnormal, and was not considered discourteous among the cyborg girls, all of whom would have done the same upon seeing their beloved handler.

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Post by tremec6speed on Sat 2 Jul 2011 - 14:21

Cool art Triela, as always. Savyna's expression looks very interesting. My take is like she's exhibiting a cautious smile. Smile
EDIT: Just wanted to mention the cool Avatar Triela!
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Post by Triela on Fri 13 Apr 2012 - 0:26

I have finally done it! A character design that I want to stick with. I absolutely adore it!!! I'll have to rewrite Savyna's personality. I have ideas for her handler too! Very Happy


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Post by Nachtsider on Fri 13 Apr 2012 - 0:33

This look is better than the innocent look. She gives off a spunky vibe, which I like.

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Post by Triela on Fri 13 Apr 2012 - 0:34

Thanks. I like this better too. And it only took me three years to figure out what she looks like! XD

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Post by Alfisti on Sat 14 Apr 2012 - 5:18

Nice Triela, I'll back what Nacht said... also, I'm really liking the bold, sketchy-looking line style you're using.

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Post by Professor Voodoo on Sat 14 Apr 2012 - 10:01

Triela wrote:I have finally done it! A character design that I want to stick with. I absolutely adore it!!!
I see you didn't forget the dinosaur (I liked that facet of her personality). Well done...looking forward to her updated profile!

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Post by tremec6speed on Sun 15 Apr 2012 - 1:36

Great art, looking forward to seeing more! head bang
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Post by tremec6speed on Mon 2 Jul 2012 - 16:35

If you're still accepting offers for your art, maybe a couple of pictures for me of my fratello Salvatore und Helen in exchange for some $? Smile
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Post by Triela on Mon 2 Jul 2012 - 18:14

Sure! You can post the specifics in the tread I posted in the gallery for my commissions, or just send me a PM. ^_^ We can work out the details from there. :3

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Post by tremec6speed on Tue 3 Jul 2012 - 15:18

Cool I'll do it tonight and thanks! Smile
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