Staying up late without a computer to shape my thoughts = GSG/Evangelion crossover idea

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Staying up late without a computer to shape my thoughts = GSG/Evangelion crossover idea

Post by Splintered Soul on Sun 21 Feb 2010, 21:53

Since my computer was refusing to work, I had some time to write the old fashioned way. About 2 in the morning or so, I found the following segment flowing onto the paper.

Claes found that japanese boy, Shinji, in the vegetable garden, contemplating a half-grown squash. “If you’re hungry, staring won’t make it grow any faster.” she said, interrupting his reverie. He looked up, startled and embarrased enough to refuse to meet her eyes for more than an instant before returning them to the ground, as if in fear it might fall away if he stopped keeping an eye on it. Claes stood there a moment longer before giving up on conversation and returning to her task. She filled up a watering can and started to work her way around the garden, skirting around the motionless Shinji the way she did the fruits and vegetables. “I’ve been reading about Japan since your team came here, but you can’t learn everything from books alone.” Claes stated, not really expecting a response. “Have you ever been to Kyoto? The Imperial Palace?”

Shinji looked up again, holding Claes’s gaze this time. “I only know they exist from my classes…Father’s always busy with his work…so is Misato-san…and I wouldn’t be allowed to leave NERV on my own.” He murmured softly, sounding more resigned than sad that he’d never been able to see such important landmarks when he’d lived around them all his life.

“I can understand that….” Claes replied after a moment, thinking. Maybe the two of them had something in common, since they’d both been shut away their entire lives, and had lived and learned only through reading whatever they could. Then, she had an idea. “I could lend you some of my book while you’re here then, if you like, but you can help me with this first.” She pushed the watering can into his arms with a slight smile. “Go fill this up, please.”


Anyway, I think it would be interesting to throw the Neon Genesis Evangelion cast in with the SWA, since they both kind of fall into the same "bespectacled men heading sinister government organizations that use emotionally scarred children and teenagers to do their dirty work" mold, and if you take away NERV's giant robots and angels and Kabbalistic nonsense, I could easily see the two organizations working together in a mutually-exploitative manner for a while.

Thoughts? Comments? I don't know if I want to do anything more elaborate with it yet, though I do have some half-finished vignettes with other characters I will probably complete sometime soon. Anyone think I should turn this into a full story?

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Post by Nachtsider on Sun 21 Feb 2010, 21:59

I think a crossover would work, if only you could create a special AU version of Evangelion to cross GSG over with. One more grounded in realism. Think of how Chris Nolan 'realized' the Batman mythos.

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Post by Splintered Soul on Sun 21 Feb 2010, 22:08

Yeah, I figure one more Evangelion AU wouldn't be noticed with there being 6 or so official ones, like most mega-franchises. The Batman connection is solid. XD

I was thinking NERV could become a deniable-asset organization working in much the same capacity as the SWA so that they could conveniently share space for a while.

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Post by Kiskaloo on Mon 22 Feb 2010, 06:31

If Shinji thought Asuka and Misato were hard-asses, he's really in for a shock from the girls and women of the Agency.

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Post by crazyidiot78 on Mon 22 Feb 2010, 17:03

I love the idea, it has good potential. Just think of Asuka ticking off Triela, or if the OC characters are included Kaji trying to hit on Kara, or Petra, (a cannon character). Lol that would be amusing.

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Post by Splintered Soul on Mon 22 Feb 2010, 20:59

I think I'm going to have to tone down Asuka's bitch-factor a bit to keep her from pressing any of the girls' beserk buttons. Well, at least until it would be the right time to have it happen. Mwahahahaha.

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Post by Awinnell on Mon 22 Feb 2010, 23:52

Asuka in the manga's no where near as much of a bitch as in the anime

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Re: Staying up late without a computer to shape my thoughts = GSG/Evangelion crossover idea

Post by Splintered Soul on Tue 23 Feb 2010, 08:39

Hmm, might be worth taking a peek at it then, although from what I hear the manga's pretty AU.

EDIT: Thanks for pointing it out. Asuka knows kung fu apparently. XD

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