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Post by tremec6speed on Tue 14 Jun 2011 - 12:37

Thanks Elfen magix, I appreciate it. I kinda ruined Elsa's expression somewhat after I initially had it good. I thought to myself: 'let me just change this a bit'.
I can't tell you how many times I've done that, mess something up just
'cause I wanted to change a certain part of the drawing......

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Post by ElfenMagix on Tue 14 Jun 2011 - 19:39

Welcome to the world of art, Tremec6speed. Where artists produce art they think is not good enough and some try to improve it. Been there!


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Post by tremec6speed on Sun 26 Jun 2011 - 2:00

I tried my hand at Professor Voodoo's fratello: Elio and Marisa.
I had a particularly tough time trying to draw Elio, but me thinks I more or less got it right.....maybe.
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Post by Kiskaloo on Sun 26 Jun 2011 - 2:25

Excellent

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Post by tremec6speed on Sun 26 Jun 2011 - 2:53

Very Happy Thanks, Kiskaloo!

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Post by Alfisti on Sun 26 Jun 2011 - 5:10

Sure Mari... sure.

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Post by theprodigalson on Sun 26 Jun 2011 - 5:27

Nice Tremec! Elio is looking sharp.

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Post by tremec6speed on Sun 26 Jun 2011 - 5:48

thanks theprodigalson! yeah what ever went down, Elio already has that look........ Holier-than-thou

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Post by tremec6speed on Sun 26 Jun 2011 - 6:01

Salvatore and Helen in route to a mission, the hapless cyborg wonders what
is going through his mind now.......


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Post by Professor Voodoo on Sun 26 Jun 2011 - 6:40

@tremec6speed wrote:I tried my hand at Professor Voodoo's fratello: Elio and Marisa.
I had a particularly tough time trying to draw Elio, but me thinks I more or less got it right.....maybe.

It's terrific! Love the "explanation" from Marisa...I don't think Elio is buying it. I might have to incorporate the bracelet you've given her into future works.
Salvatore and Helen in route to a mission, the hapless cyborg wonders what is going through his mind now.......
Great set of profiles...the opposing angles (Salvatore looking down, Helen gazing up) could mean so many different things.

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Post by Officer_Charon on Sun 26 Jun 2011 - 15:10

The bracelet looks like it might be a hair-tie of some flavor...

Also, Elio is looking like a dapper, older Adam Savage in this version... which only makes him 20% cooler...

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Post by tremec6speed on Sun 26 Jun 2011 - 15:39

Thanks Officer and Professor (always thank the nice officer first! sweat )
I appreciate everyone's comments and of course critiques!
Very Happy
I think I drew the bracelet subconsciously. I drew a similar one on Ayden as well. I did it with out really thinking about it. (maybe they borrow stuff from each other? Could be.) Smile
I've been thinking about drawing a typical day scenario for S&H.
(I like more Gunther and Ayden, but I'm still molding them in my mind. I better hurry though, because at this rate by the time I finish my story of those two, the series will be long since over!)
A typical day for Helen and Sal. Hmmm.... I wonder how that compares with other fratellos?
Monty and Jethro, Fernando and Rachael stand out right away in my mind I guess because of their location and general mission type and because of their being an actual father daughter team, respectively.
(not to mention that nether M&J or F&R slap the snot out of their junior agents)
I dunno, any thoughts on how a typical day compares (or doesn't) with the others?
For example, Jay Valentine and John Darme don't have cyborg partners. How's their typical day?
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Come to think of it, do we already have a thread on this subject?


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Post by Professor Voodoo on Sun 26 Jun 2011 - 19:33

@tremec6speed wrote:For example, Jay Valentine and John Darme don't have cyborg partners. How's their typical day?
Puzzled
At this point in his story Officer_Charon's John does not have a 'borg...he's learning the ropes as a support agent like Amadeo & Georgio.

Jay is a cyborg...his handler is Priscilla. A typical day for him seems to consist of trying to avoid his fawning, overprotective "big-sister"...trying to catch Allison's eye...and dealing with the affections of his sidekick/mascot/tag-along, Rico.

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Post by ElfenMagix on Sun 26 Jun 2011 - 19:51

Very well done on both, tremec6speed! Great work indeed!

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Post by tremec6speed on Mon 27 Jun 2011 - 2:16

Professor Voodoo wrote: "Jay is a cyborg..."
AARRGGHH!!!
A thousand pardons Jacen Starslayer!! bang head
I confess that while I have read several stories of my fellow members,
there are some that I have not yet read. Embarassed
I'm truly sorry.
(thanks Professor, for helping a fool) NO
(luckily my comment in the thread: 'OC dorm rooms' still makes sense) sweat
Thanks ElfenMagix for the compliment, I appreciate it!
While at work today, I was thinking about an inspection of the facilities by
(can't recall this name, (here I go again) the government official that wanted to close the SWA down after Lauro got ventilated) I was imagining how canon and OC members might be instructed to behave in front of these people, but then they arrive not as originally scheduled but out of the blue hoping to catch the 'borgs (and their handlers) by surprise! I dunno, it seemed pretty interesting.
(which was all good until I realized I wasn't getting any work done)
Anyways concerning my big goof up, I'll be more diligent in the future and read everything before opening my trap! just whistlin' Razz
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Post by Alfisti on Mon 27 Jun 2011 - 3:29

@tremec6speed wrote:While at work today, I was thinking about an inspection of the facilities by
(can't recall this name, (here I go again) the government official that wanted to close the SWA down after Lauro got ventilated) I was imagining how canon and OC members might be instructed to behave in front of these people, but then they arrive not as originally scheduled but out of the blue hoping to catch the 'borgs (and their handlers) by surprise! I dunno, it seemed pretty interesting.
Personally I think that would make for a rather excellent bit of reading.

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Post by Kiskaloo on Mon 27 Jun 2011 - 12:47

@tremec6speed wrote:While at work today, I was thinking about an inspection of the facilities by
(can't recall this name, (here I go again) the government official that wanted to close the SWA down after Lauro got ventilated)...

That is Giulio Draghi – Chief of Special Operations, Section 1. I expect his beef with the cyborgs is his team was there first, but now Pieri Lorenzo and his "magic cyborgs" of Special Operations, Section 2 gets most of the glory and accolades.

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Post by tremec6speed on Mon 27 Jun 2011 - 15:29

Alfisti wrote: 'Personally I think that would make for a rather excellent bit of reading.'
Thanks, what I like most about that idea is how many different ways it can go. That is, every member can show what his or her characters were doing at that point which can be a story in and of itself or in combination with other OC/canon people. It might be as chance for group collaboration?
Kiskaloo wrote: 'That is Giulio Draghi – Chief of Special Operations, Section 1. I expect his beef with the cyborgs is his team was there first, but now Pieri Lorenzo and his "magic cyborgs" of Special Operations, Section 2 gets most of the glory and accolades.' Hmm....interesting. I imagine in this latest (final?) battle against Dante, the press may not have been completely cordoned off and gotten some tasty pics of the action thereby finally showing to all of Italy the rumors that have no doubt been spreading perhaps by Padania themselves.
Still as others have mentioned, there should still be plenty of life for the girls outside of their fight against terrorism. (well, one can only hope sweat )
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Post by Alfisti on Tue 28 Jun 2011 - 3:27

@tremec6speed wrote:Thanks, what I like most about that idea is how many different ways it can go. That is, every member can show what his or her characters were doing at that point which can be a story in and of itself or in combination with other OC/canon people. It might be as chance for group collaboration?
Might be worth putting together an introduction and some background and throwing it up in the "Collaborative Stories" area?

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Post by tremec6speed on Tue 28 Jun 2011 - 23:02

Alfisti wrote: 'Might be worth putting together an introduction and some background and throwing it up in the "Collaborative Stories" area?'
Glad you like it Alfisti, I'm all for it, any others want to give it a um, *shot*?
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Post by Officer_Charon on Tue 28 Jun 2011 - 23:27

I hold my Glock every day... sometimes several times a day!

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Post by Professor Voodoo on Wed 29 Jun 2011 - 4:43

@Officer_Charon wrote:I hold my Glock every day... sometimes several times a day!
Thanks for the warning. That's the last time I look into a squad car as I pass by on the bike.

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Post by Awinnell on Wed 29 Jun 2011 - 6:45

@Officer_Charon wrote:I hold my Glock every day... sometimes several times a day!
is this the reason why ?



no offense meant ! (even if i am 4000 miles outside his jurisdiction !)

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Post by Officer_Charon on Wed 29 Jun 2011 - 12:02

....... Well, I HAD intended it to be a witty, albeit crass metaphor.... but since we want to go THERE...

*chuckles wryly* Although, to be fair, I DID walk into it. *grin*

Voodoo, you're one of those bloody sport bike racers that I'm not allowed to chase, aren't you? Grrrr..... *chuckles*

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Post by tremec6speed on Thu 8 Sep 2011 - 0:21

Ok Thanks to the thread: If Cyborgs Rulled The World, I stopped doing these dumb doodles and am now doodling different stuff. Specifically, sketchin' Claes preparing to kick SWA butt! (quality's no better I'm afraid) hee hee!
Go figure

EDIT: My Claes drawings came out no good as I explained in the thread 'If Cyborgs Ruled The World'...... bang head


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Post by Professor Voodoo on Thu 8 Sep 2011 - 2:59

I thought Claes came out just fine. You could have gone darker on the hair to give it a glossy look but heavy pencil strokes really aren't your artistic style.

As for Ayden's adventure; Epic Win Tremec...she's going to have nightmares whenever the other girls want to watch Star Wars.

Triela: What are you doing cowering under that table, Ayden? Cyborgs are supposed to be fearless, remember?

Ayden: (points timidly)

Triela: Holy Crap! Move over Ayden, there's more than enough room for two in there!

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Post by theprodigalson on Thu 8 Sep 2011 - 11:03

I thought Claes looked great myself. If you mean the drawing as a whole: yes, it definitely came off as silly. It wasn't bad by itself, but if that wasn't what you wanted it to be I could see why you would stop it.

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Post by tremec6speed on Thu 8 Sep 2011 - 12:16

My bad, I should have been more specific about the Claes drawings. Oops! I meant to say the sketches I was referring to were the ones I was working on for the thread: If Cyborgs Ruled the World' in which Claes prepares for her assault on the SWA compound fell well short of what I intended.
My mind was racing, but my drawings were not up to par with the images in me head.
(I'll be posting those soon, my schedule's crazy)
Anyway, thanks for the compliments guys, even when my drawings leave me disappointed, it's cool to get positive feedback! It's a pick me up, believe me. Smile
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Post by Nagneto on Thu 8 Sep 2011 - 19:51

Those are some pretty good sketches.

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Post by tremec6speed on Thu 8 Sep 2011 - 21:11

Thanks Nagneto. I gotta ask, is Nagneto a reference to Marvel comics villain:
Magneto? Just curious. Puzzled
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Post by Schaschanist on Fri 9 Sep 2011 - 14:22

One little question: Are your OCs always eating?
Every time i see them, they are liking their lips.

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Post by tremec6speed on Fri 9 Sep 2011 - 15:47

@schaschanist wrote:One little question: Are your OCs always eating?
Every time i see them, they are liking their lips.
LOL
That's true, you're right Schaschanist, I gotta stop drawing my crew eating.
Normally it's only Ayden, who has a love affair with all things food, but I had drawn that group shot right after my birthday so I kind of imagined my fratello teams enjoying my cake!
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Post by Nagneto on Sun 11 Sep 2011 - 2:09

@tremec6speed wrote:Thanks Nagneto. I gotta ask, is Nagneto a reference to Marvel comics villain:
Magneto? Just curious. Puzzled

It's a mockery of the idea of such a character. A spit in the face of man's soaring ambitions and selfish desires.


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Post by tremec6speed on Sun 11 Sep 2011 - 16:17

Ahh... I see. Yes Indeed
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Post by tremec6speed on Sat 8 Oct 2011 - 16:59

Hello peoples! Once again I posted some drawings of me widdle cyborg, Ayden
more or less inspired (the eyes mostly) on drawings from a couple of sources:
[url=http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=manga&illust_id=11252578]
One of the characters I borrowed the eyes from was of a tale in which a little girl walks around this weird library and eventually gets swallowed up into a book. I also tried drawing eyes from an anime which featured a character named Marika, a pink haired loligoth kid. It's a series about science.
Also if you look up Demon Squeezer and see a demonic babe named Diabolus, that's who I pictured as Evil Elsa's mom!.... 'nuff said.
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Post by tremec6speed on Sun 20 Nov 2011 - 1:13

What pray tell, could Gunther have done to make the little synthetic clone weep? What deviltry could make the pint-sized experimental weapon of the future cry like this?!

Answer: He reduced her Junk Food Spending Allowance from 25 euros a week to 20 in an effort to reduce her rampant before, during and after mission 'just gimmie a minute, it's only a quickie treat' snack attacks.

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Post by tremec6speed on Sun 20 Nov 2011 - 1:40

Silliness aside, this is how I imagine Gunther looking at Ayden most times.
Expressionless, emotionless studying her seemingly at random for a few seconds then looking away without a word, going back to his own business.
Ayden always feels a little uncomfortable by this as she has compared his behavior to that of other handlers and understands that most adults don't act like that.
(not suggesting he's a perv or anything, just mentally not quite right, for lack of a better way of putting it) Don't know why, but characters with mental instability appeal to me for some reason.... just whistlin'

I tried drawing his eyes and nose roughly the same as Lauro, but Gunther parts his hair off to the side instead of the middle like his brother. Also, I drew his eyes a bit bigger to denote his younger age.


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Post by Alfisti on Sun 20 Nov 2011 - 3:17

Nice mate, you've got a real skill for picking up the shadows across someone's face.

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Post by tremec6speed on Sun 20 Nov 2011 - 4:01

Thanks Alfisti! I try to focus on that without 'aging' the person, so to speak.
(especially when I'm trying to draw a young girl, sometimes end up having her look like she's in her twenties) Sad
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Post by Alfisti on Sun 20 Nov 2011 - 4:20

@tremec6speed wrote:Thanks Alfisti! I try to focus on that without 'aging' the person, so to speak.
(especially when I'm trying to draw a young girl, sometimes end up having her look like she's in her twenties)
Heh, I hear you... ageing people correctly can be a pain. I find I can do old people, or young people... but hitting that "middle age" is a pain in the behind. Razz

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Post by tremec6speed on Sun 20 Nov 2011 - 14:57

@Alfisti wrote:... but hitting that "middle age" is a pain in the behind. Razz
Couldn't have said it better me self! Smile
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Post by ElfenMagix on Sun 20 Nov 2011 - 21:42

Great work, Tremec! You show their true character there.
Question- how old is Ayden?

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Post by tremec6speed on Sun 20 Nov 2011 - 21:57

Thanks ElfenMagix! Smile You know I've never really thought about it believe it or not! I just thought of her as very young, but I guess the age I feel most comfortable with is eight.
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Post by Schaschanist on Sun 20 Nov 2011 - 22:22

Just one Question:
Why did i only see the actual pictures of you, tremec?
I did not see any of the other pictures you posted in this thread, just black space, a gab instead.
What happened to them? Why were they not displayed?

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Post by Odon on Mon 21 Nov 2011 - 2:39

They have vanished into the netherworld between what was, and what is...

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Post by tremec6speed on Mon 21 Nov 2011 - 6:39

I did post them Schaschanist, it's just that after about roughly two weeks, I like to take my drawings down. I've never really like posting for long periods of time. sweat
(Although the Netherworld explanation is cooler by far ) head bang
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Post by ElfenMagix on Mon 21 Nov 2011 - 22:33

@tremec6speed wrote:Thanks ElfenMagix! Smile You know I've never really thought about it believe it or not! I just thought of her as very young, but I guess the age I feel most comfortable with is eight.
8 Sounds about right. Past the Little Girl Stage and "Not yet a Tween" (a period of 9/10 - 12/13).
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Post by tremec6speed on Wed 23 Nov 2011 - 1:40

Wow, 'preciate it Elfen! I drew some stuff for CI, as part of his story. Hope you like those too! I haven't posted them here 'cause me thinks he's gonna include it on the story itself. (they're on DA) Smile
I like to think that if the psychiatrist at the SWA were to have some therapy sessions with Gunther, he could do a world of good. In my version of events, Lauro's brother was beaten badly and regularly by their father, so he took Gunther with him. (these beatings are what brought about his problems)
So I guess I'm not saying he is completely insane or anything, just that after his big brother died, his world took a nose dive so to speak. I think of him as an emotional kettle under pressure. Lauro lived in an apartment and Gunther felt better there, but Lauro was out most of the time and the younger brother's difficulties were never addressed.
Years later, after he finds the truth about who is responsible for taking his only anchor to a more or less normal life, he flipped and took it out on Ayden, even though years later, he would come to regret having offed the mechanical weapon, who had plenty of issues of her own to deal with.
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Post by ElfenMagix on Wed 23 Nov 2011 - 20:21

Give me a complete report on all this and I'll post it on the GsGOC Wiki.

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Post by tremec6speed on Thu 24 Nov 2011 - 2:46

Thanks again, Elfen! I'm grateful for that. The information is on my 'Better late than never' thread, dealing with both fratellos. If you want, I can post the info here?
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Post by Professor Voodoo on Thu 24 Nov 2011 - 17:59

@tremec6speed wrote:What pray tell, could Gunther have done to make the little synthetic clone weep? What deviltry could make the pint-sized experimental weapon of the future cry like this?!

Answer: He reduced her Junk Food Spending Allowance from 25 euros a week to 20 in an effort to reduce her rampant before, during and after mission 'just gimmie a minute, it's only a quickie treat' snack attacks.Razz
Elio: (waiting less than patiently) Damn it man will you just give the lass a tea biscuit or something so we can get started?! The Padans will have gotten old and died before we get to raid this safehouse!

Nice work as usual, tremec...I think my favorite element of the Gunther portrait is the tightly pursed lips. It seems he's aggravated about something, but has decided its not worth bringing up and arguing about.

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Post by ElfenMagix on Thu 24 Nov 2011 - 23:29

@tremec6speed wrote:Thanks again, Elfen! I'm grateful for that. The information is on my 'Better late than never' thread, dealing with both fratellos. If you want, I can post the info here?
You can post them here and I'll copy it there.

I notice that you dont have an account here, thought you did. Like one for your stuff?

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Post by tremec6speed on Fri 25 Nov 2011 - 15:01

Thanks Professor! That drawing just came out right: for me that means, minimal erasing and frustration! Smile
After Elio complains, Gunther finally hands her a tasty tea biscuit while Ayden makes the classic 'Sad Soulful Eyes' at him, then winks at Elio while Marisa roll her eyes thinking "This kid's got all the adults in her pocket!" As for the Gunther portrait, what he does not wish to bring up is the fact that while on a mission, after he went in the glove compartment to get a map, four mini muffins rolled out! (Ayden quickly caught all before they hit the floor).
Thanks Elfen, I've been wanting to makes some drawings specially for the site featuring not only both fratellos but my baddies the Phalanx, which I'm now thinking would be cooler if I interpreted them as as something other than terrorists with bombs but rather, 5 techno freaks that terrorize with robots of different kinds so that while they can be a threat directly, their fav. mode of operating is through 'bots of their own. Bong
Finally, I have re-written the Gunther and Ayden gist, now I gotta just review and update any changes on the Salvaltore, Vinson, Helen fratello.
Running a bit late today on several important stuff I gotta do (including getting my butt to work), but I promise to rock and roll on this tomorrow. Then I'll go ahead and post it here. Thanks Elfen, I actually have been thinking about getting my OC folks there, just never got around to it.
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Post by tremec6speed on Sat 26 Nov 2011 - 5:44

Ok Elfen, I have my two fratello's basic plot and description.
First fratello: Helen cyborg, Salvatore Battaglia handler, Vinson Sverre another agent within the SWA
that pities the girl because of the harsh treatment of her 'older brother'. Vinson is a very kind and patient man, also highly capable and efficient. Salvatore is a wealthy man that has connections and uses them to join the agency for personal reasons. He demands perfection from the cyborg and rarely if ever has anything good to say. Distrusting of everyone, he wants the cyborg to be like him and has her stay in her room apart from others as much as is possible. 'Tore resents the mechanical child for being close to Vinson and as a result, her personality reflects Vinson's influence more than his own. Sal ups the meds, but somehow the child always draws closer to the kind, patient man as if they knew each other from a previous life, confounding the conditioning doctors.
I have one of two endings for these three people. The first is that the cyborgs out lives her handler as well as her father. Salvatore's jealousy and hatred for Vinson come to a head, so he patiently waited for a mission in which he would require assistance, choosing Vinson to join them only to abandon the man at a crucial point. After a fierce firefight, Vinson lied mortally wounded, surround by several dead terrorists. Back at the agency's infirmary, Vinson passed away with the mechanical child by his side weeping. Jean witnessed how emotionally attached the little cyborg was to her friend and decided to have her memory erased. It took several cyborgs to drag her to the conditioning room as Helen cried out not to make her forget!
In order to complete his victory, Salvatore used his extensive connections within his political, military and business circles to find anything that could discredit the fallen agent. (Battaglia was only too aware of the chat among other agents saying how Vinson would have been by far a superior big brother than he)
However instead of finding dirt, he uncovered the Agency was misinformed concerning the cyborg's past!
The mother and her husband had indeed died in the same accent that severely hurt the child, but reports of Helen having no other family to contact was in error. In fact one family member not only still lived, but worked right in the compound, Vinson her father.
Now Salvatore had been a bitter man because the only parent he had, his father had been brutally murdered when he was a boy by an unknown individual the police could not identify or apprehend.
The realization that now he had taken on the role of murderer to another child left him devastated.
He used his connections once more to leave the agency, taking Helen with him! Living alone apart from the rest of the world using his wealth to help her live a normal as life as was possible, the child slowly began to recover from the medication. Meanwhile Lorenzo and Jean were furious that this individual could simply get up and go taking the cyborg with him as if he were a tourist becoming bored of his stay in the service of the agency! In fact however, Salvatore was a broken man eaten away by his guilt. In time the girl began asking questions as her mind revealed more and more. When the subject of Vinson came up Salvatore could not look her in the eye. Eventually the perpetrator of the crime confessed ready to be torn apart by the mechanical weapon. Instead she stared at him in silence, then cursed him to die alone. He was indeed found months later in his home lifeless, a man consumed by his shame. Helen went on her own eventually drifting back to the agency where she once had met the man she now understood was her father and who cared for the solitary cyborg far more than her mother ever done. After all, she was the product of an affair that meant everything to Vinson, but only a small step in the social ladder for the lady in question. When their brief relationship resulted in a pregnancy, she considered abortion. Encountering an influential man smitten by her looks, she quickly left her partner for someone more useful to her. Vinson went to the grave unaware of his daughter's existence. Now she kept an eye on the place that meant much her, periodically coming to the agency's rescue only to disappear again, like a kind of high tech guardian angel. Her story ends when she comes to the agency's rescue one last time after a wealthy backer decides Padania alone cannot accomplish their mission and hires mercenaries who plan an all out assault. The Agency goes to intercept Padania's supposed major hideout which is in reality a bait by the mercenaries to strike hard at the SWA's operatives. However having learned at the last minute that this enemy base is but a ruse she attacks the mercenaries before they can spring their trap! Their location revealed, the fratello teams regroup and focus on their true adversary. The day is won for the heroes, but Helen pays with her life.
Second ending: Salvatore finds out who killed his father and hunts him down! After a fierce battle, Sal beats the man into the ground, leaving the individual unconscious, and as Battaglia is about to finish him off, Helen who has been present in order to prevent anyone from intervening, steps forward and puts her hand on his shoulder announcing that its over, he's won. Afterwards the cyborg would say she could not explain what made her do this action. Sal is physically and emotionally spent and on his knees, panting. He leaves the man there, the cyborgs words sinking deep because it brought back memories long forgotten of his father years earlier making a similar statement when ever his son went off the deep end, obsessively striving to reach a goal.
From that point on, Salvatore Battaglia is a completely different man, as his only reason for existence
was to avenge his father's death. He had learned to hate those around him, the world in fact and ultimately himself. Now there was a strange feeling he had never before experienced: peace. It was like the old Salvatore died in that moment and his true self was allowed at last to emerge from a self imposed imprisonment. In this version, Sal had already ordered information on Vinson with the intention of discrediting him after his death. Seeing that Vinson is Helen's actual father, and with his hate forever a thing of the past, he now shares this information with both and uses his influences within the government to release both cyborg and agent from their obligations to the SWA, living happily ever after. Sal also left the secret establishment, no longer needing it to cover his intended murder of the man that took his father away. A young man in his early thirties, Battaglia never married but lived content to use his fortune to help others less fortunate, fondly remembering the mechanical child who refused to learn how to hate.
Second fratello: Handler Gunther deSica and synthetic replica Ayden:
Terren Deadra Lavenge is the original Ayden. A child locked up in the basement of an SWA's genius inventor/engineer's home for being out of control.
The child was remorselessly evil.
One night, the house burnt down taking the genius down with the villainous child.
At the agency's lab, he had been in the process of modifying the machine that through nano tech regenerated the cyborg's 'flesh'. It was to create a new and better fighting machine. One based on his own daughter! A synthetic clone based on Terren's DNA but with alterations that would make her a nigh-stoppable killing crew of one. The wonder inventor died before he finished his project.
Not long before this occurred, Elsa turned Lauro into cemetery fertilizer. At the funeral only one member of the family attended, a young man named Gunther. He was Lauro's younger brother. Visibly devastated by his brother's passing, Ferro, Precilla and Olga felt bad for the man and after learning that he had no employment, got him a job in the secret organization. At first he did menial tasks as Lorenzo and Jean had reservations about having a teenager agent aboard. He quickly demonstrated great skills in fighting and weaponry. It turns out the man had the ability to imitate to a T whatever he saw the first time and even understood the mechanics of what he did 90% of the time, so he was quite intelligent. With these abilities and with an innate interest in all things science and technology, Gunther had observed on several occasions the man making his special construction. In the mean time, he moved up the latter with more involved missions. The uber intelligent engineer had grown accustomed to having the quiet man hang around although they rarely spoke. One time, Gunther even got to see the schematics. The idea was to make a girl that had the abilities of the cyborgs but also could heal better than any human! The speed of which this synthetic person would be able to heal was to be much faster than an ordinary human. Plus, the experimental individual could also heal in places a regular person could not, like the brain. However, after the demise of the inventor, it looked like the project would have to be permanently shelved as the tech team could not continue the genius's project. (the schematics had mysteriously disappeared)
However, Gunther who was known to have hung around the braniac several times was allowed to see what if anything he could accomplish. his superiors were stunned yet delighted at his ability to finish the goal of the outstanding member of the tech team. When the machine came to life, it performed the task it's master had set before it. It created a girl based on the little terror that had been the inventor's kid sister. The child was programmed to see as her brother the first person she laid eyes upon, just as the genius had intended! As fate would have it, Gunther was that man. So now that he was paired with his own mini mighty max, he became part of an unwitting fratello.
Now Lauro's younger sibling might have been pretty intelligent as well, but he had his problems too. There were psychological problems that the man dealt with. Both brothers lived with a father who took a particular disliking to Gunther shortly after Lauro moved out on his own. It seemed there was nothing Gunther could do right and paid for his mistakes with brutal 'lessons'. However when the older brother learned that Gunther was getting badly beaten on a regular basis, he took him out of there and gave his dad a piece of his mind, knocking several of the old guy's teeth in the process!
It became apparent that the years alone with his violent father had given more than a few mental scars as well as physical ones. The boy would not be able to fit in school and as a result, Lauro chose to let him live in his apartment, supplying the kid with books to learn. The child was like a sponge!
Not only did he absorbed all he read, he also had the uncanny ability to learn from his brother simply by observing his behavior.
Thus Gunther was able to train Ayden, his synthetic sister well. The SWA never did tell Gunther the truth about his brother's passing, explaining the terrorists were responsible for his death.
A mentally unstable man, his mind was like a pressure cooker about to spill his stew the moment another emotional upheaval rocked his fragile world. Lauro had been his anchor of stability. He was coming along, improving and no doubt would have on day reached the point were he could live on his own, but alas things did not work out that way for him. One day he discovered the truth concerning the death of his older sibling, at which point he flipped like a pancake and became convinced that Ayden was Elsa's relative bent on killing him just as deSica had his brother!
Thus, one night Gunther took Ayden to the park were Lauro met his end and after making a brief declaration (more like a rant) about how the spirit of his brother could not rest until justice was done, he proceeded to make the child one with the soil. After which, he then escaped to Spain as he had hastily planned, never to be seen again by the agency. Finally, he sabotaged the machine that created Ayden, so as not have another like her come after him, as he believed would happen if he did not take steps to prevent the mini monster from being re-created. As time passed, once the emotional storm died down, he would reflect on his actions and experience regret as he came to the conclusion that the little child was innocent and in fact had lived a brief but very turbulent life herself.
Battaglia age 32. height 6 ft 190lbs Self made millionaire has connections with both corporations and government.
Vinson age 38 6'2" 200 lbs A quiet man, he was a soldier then later a police officer, always considered by those who knew him as a man capable of achieving more than he did but content to live a simple life. He quit the force after his fiancee left him, wanting to put distance between himself old life, but not knowing where to go. A friend and fellow agent within the SWA told his superiors about him since he knew they wanted candidates for handlers . Jean contacted Vinson after learning his background.
Helen age 10 height typical for her age Helen's mother was Vinson's former fiancee who after marrying a wealthy banker in her native Norway, took a European tour only to die in her luxury sedan along with her husband in Italy. Helen barely survived.
Gunther age 18 height 6 ft 190'bs Brother of Lauro, he joined after Ferro, Precilla and Olga attended Lauro's funeral and witnessed a broken young man. They managed to get him a relatively minor job there, but he quickly climbed the ranks.
Ayden age 8 height typical for her age Synthetic copy of another child named Terren Deadra Lavenge
who was viciously evil and locked in the basement for being out of control since the day she could walk. Her father was a genius inventor who made Ayden.
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Post by tremec6speed on Thu 19 Jan 2012 - 6:03

A few sketches in which My OC Ayden is about to gulp down some OLD gummy worms she found lying around a cup board.
Ferro: Ayden, no put those down they've been there forever!
Ayden: What do you mean? I don't know what you're talking about.
Ferro: You've stashed them in your back pocket. I saw that!
Ferro: Ayden, AYDEN!
Ayden: *gulp!* (gulps them down before Ferro can grab them out of her hand)
Ferro: I'm going to tell your handler Gunther to up the meds full tilt!
NO
Happiness is a belly full of Quickie Treats and basking in the sun for this little girl.
In another thread we were discussing pets of the GSG, well Ayden does not have pets per say, but she does befriend various bugs that inhabit Claes Garden....
A couple of close ups of Ayden.
Another surprise search and destroy mission by Ferro in which she raids Ayden's room in search of illegal.... junk food!
Ayden: Uh oh!
Ayden: *whew* She missed them!
Costume party. There's a new sheriff in town!
Also, Ayden the amateur witch in training.
My cyborg Helen paired up with....Jose?
Actually, that was supposed to be her handler Salvatore in a rare wistful moment remembering his dad. Helen absorbs those rare occasions like a sponge as she gets a peek into the man that normally verbally abuses her and beats her to get the job done, yet appearing in such instances strangely....human.
Triela is thinking up a practical joke to play on Helen who despite being 2 years older than Ayden is more naive.
Meanwhile Elfen's character Rachel is looking on thinking: 'Ok muchacha loca, what are you up to now?'
Triela is dressed up in funky stripped pants and white boots she'd never be caught dead wearing if Dante himself threatened her, but hey, all's fair in fan fiction! Razz
Check out the anti-corporate tee Helen's sporting! Wink
Finally, a botched up mission by Ayden who was supposed to corner and eliminate a single target, but instead went hay wire and slaughtered all in the room because the location was reminiscent of a place locked away in the dungeons of her mind. Memories of a girl she was cloned after, one named Terren LaVenge who was closed off from the rest of the world because of her evil in a dark, dirty basement. A place not unlike where the little droid was entering setting free frightening memories. These images and feelings were mostly buried by the Conditioning Drugs, but released here with disastrous results.
When her handler Gunther catches up and sees her failure, she knows
what will follow: Her handler never yells, insults or demonstrates any emotion what so ever, something that unnerves the pint-sized operative. Instead he takes in what occurred and will no doubt write a report detailing how off the child was from achieving her mission goal. Expressionless, the 'big brother' simply nods and motions his partner to follow him back into the car. After which his report will signal yet another trip to the conditioning doctors who will try yet another chemical cocktail in an effort to keep her synthetic brain more reigned in. The kid has to be strapped down during these sessions as the response to many of these experimental doses tend to leave Ayden with violent spasm and convulsions. She's much too strong to be held down by the staff, hence the strap down.
LaVenge.
LaVenge's face is ugly enough to turn Medusa to stone!! Wuh?


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Post by ElfenMagix on Thu 19 Jan 2012 - 21:07

Nicely done, Tremec! Great story there! Love it!

BTW, Tremec, I finished putting Ayden and Gunther on the Wiki. I just need a couple of pictures of them for the wiki, if you like! (See the Wiki Update thread)

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Post by tremec6speed on Thu 19 Jan 2012 - 22:53

Wow thanks Elfen, I really appreciate it! You bet I'll be checking them out.
I hope you liked how Rachel came out. Smile
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Post by ElfenMagix on Thu 19 Jan 2012 - 23:50

@tremec6speed wrote:Wow thanks Elfen, I really appreciate it! You bet I'll be checking them out.
I hope you liked how Rachel came out. Smile
Its based on what you wrote up above.

Rachel came out well. I like it.

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Post by Alfisti on Fri 20 Jan 2012 - 7:07

Always cool to see new work out of you mate.

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