my drawings

Always cool to see new work out of you mate.

Great job there Treme love the art work

Thanks guys, it's nice to know you like my stuff despite the obvious goof ups! Some pictures come out so easily like Rachael's face, one try, and boom! just the way I wanted it, yet others took several tries but never really 'spot on' as the Brits say!

The more I think of Schaschanist's cool goth cyborg Emilie, the more I like the notion of someone expressing herself like that. Makes me a bit jealous that I didn't come up with that idea myself! Anyway, I think of her as mysterious girl with a very unique personality.
I imagine my own cyborg, Helen being unnerved somewhat watching Emilie from her room haunt the grounds at night every now and then.
I wondered who might Emilie gravitate towards? Perhaps 'The Tearless Grief' Beatrice?
Finally, a close up of the Emilie with a conditioning doctor looking on. Thinking of Schas's girl, I wonder if the staff considers her choice of wardrobe a quiet way of making a statement which might be seen as worrisome perhaps?
I imagine Jose and Jean discussing that as well as my own 'cy-droid' Ayden,
who tends to lose it every now and then only to revert back to her sticky-sweet self once more.
Here she is having been given the task of intercepting an enemy car which she promptly does, but accomplishes this by jumping on the hood, headbutting the windshield, reaches in and grabs the steering wheel with an iron grip, forcing the car into a building! Uh, job well done?
Hillshire caught the 24 flu and in his delirium asked My Evil Handler Salvatore to instruct for a day. Initially I was going to put thought bubbles on the girls, but I think their faces tell their reaction well enough.
I only drew three because of the angle, but it's a full class. Pictured are Henrietta, Marisa and Triela.

John: You know, I need to hang out with this Salvatore chap... he sounds like he's got his head in the right place!

Elio: ...Darme, a word in your ear?

Priscilla: D:

tremec6speed wrote:The more I think of Schaschanist's cool goth cyborg Emile, the more I like the notion of someone expressing herself like that. Makes me a bit jealous that I didn't come up with that idea myself! Anyway, I think of her as mysterious girl with a very unique personality.
I imagine my own cyborg, Helen being unnerved somewhat watching Emile from her room haunt the grounds at night every now and then.

Awesome work, mate. i really like the expression. You really caught the mood others would think about her.
Especially the second one, with that old leafless tree it looks like she is on an old graveyard.

tremec6speed wrote:Finally, a close up of the Emile with a conditioning doctor looking on. Thinking of Schas's girl, I wonder if the staff considers her choice of wardrobe a quiet way of making a statement which might be seen as worrisome perhaps?

Interesting point. I also was wondering what the docs would think of her style and behavior and how they would rate that.

I dont know about that schas considering some of the other stuff they have seen the girls wear in the past (I'm thinking of petra and the other OC)

Great stuff, tremec.

Thanks peoples, I appreciate it!
John likes Sal's um, colorful method of teaching? Cool!
Glad you liked my drawings of Emilie Schas, I was worried my interpretation might be off somewhat. True about the wardrobe CI, I didn't think about Petra as well as other agents/cyborgs in the OC world as well.
I guess the fan fiction version of GSG would give The Agency considerably more to think about in terms of how to deal with the fratellos!

tremec6speed wrote:I guess the fan fiction version of GSG would give The Agency considerably more to think about in terms of how to deal with the fratellos!

Treme I think that's the understatement of the year.

Nice mate.

I think that the doctors have probably gotten used to the fact by now that most of their charges have... problems

Yeah I think you guys nailed it! We have introduced more headaches to the staff than they can deal with at times.
Also I'm going to be changing my entry into the wiki soon concerning the origin of Ayden because it occurred to me that if she was designed after a girl who was evil, there should be a better reason or explanation as to why LaVenge was the way she was. Therefore instead of Doctor Lavenge trying to make Ayden a kinder, gentler version of his evil daughter who was simply born that way, I'm thinking more along the lines of having him be the evil one! This way Terren his daughter, was a initially kind girl which he adopted for the nefarious purpose of experimenting on her with chemical cocktails and nano-bot injections until he fashioned her into his own interpretation of the Doctor Jekyll and Mister Hyde story. Imagine this specialist looking all harmless and what not, working in the SWA when in fact he's a monster that warped his adopted daughter into a hideous creature. He saw the prisoner in the basement as his guinea pig and Ayden would be the result of his experimentation. Right under the nose of his fellow colleges he would eventually carry out his own plans for Ayden! Unfortunately for him, after his 'daughter' was transformed into something otherworldly, she exacted her revenge upon the good doctor burning down the prison that should have been her home, taking the cause of her torment down with her. At least that part of the tale I'll keep the same. That and some other info I want to add to the fratello like Gunther's full name: Gunther Roghan DeSica.
I want to draw in the not too distant future the SWA piecing together little by little who Doctor LaVennge truly was after the burnt remains of Terren is discovered and ultimately connecting the dots with Ayden. I can picture the girls also putting together the little cy-droid's past among themselves and when Ayden walks into the room, how they might change the conversation, because Ayden herself is not aware that she is the product of a criminal.
Perhaps Henrietta and Angelica might shy away from her thinking she after all is not really like them anyway.

Cool stuff as usual, tremec. My favorite of this batch has to be the 4th one down (Emilie the goth cyborg). Using simple pencil strokes you managed to give it a soft, flowing look...keeping it light-feeling by not overdoing it.

Ayden seems to be taking her job a bit seriously today. She's gonna be heartbroken when she has to spend the night in the SWA hospital...the food there sucks.

Henrietta & Marisa (actually, I thought Elsa at first glance, but I'm always happy to see my character get a cameo) look dismayed at Salvatore's cascade of expletives. While that's 100% believable for 'Etta I think Mari might be secretly taking notes...filing away creative curse words for future use.

Salvatore may expect an e-mail from a disgruntled Elio...

lolz Elio, Fernando, Jean, Lorenzo, Etienne, Jose, etc, and ultimately Hillshire will have a word or two this guy! Glad you liked my pictures Professor, that's cool imagining Marissa taking notes! Plus I apologise to Schas for misspelling Emilie. I've corrected my posts. (Particularly sorry for the misspelling on the pictures)

Marisa undercover in school. Her mission is simple: The principle is a Padania sympathizer. Wait till he comes out after classes and proceeds to the far side of the parking lot where his car is. At which point, Elio's partner is to put the Kibosh on him! However as she waited, two wise guys who were kept after school spotted the little red head and began flirting!
Dumb ass #1: Hey, baby you new here?
Dumb ass #2: Maybe she's the shy type.
Dumb ass #1: Nice legs, I own a moped with racing stripes, just sayin'.... maybe we can cruuuuuse!
Dumb ass #2: Yeah right, his mommy keeps the key to it until he does his homework first then he can ride!
Dumb ass #1: Shuddup!
Dumb ass #2: You shuddup!
Marisa: *mumbling to herself* Why do I always get the morons?
I tried to draw Marisa making an effort to zone out the clowns, before she got good an pissed!

First Rachel, now Marisa. What is it with boys?!!

tremec6speed wrote:Marisa undercover in school. Her mission is simple: The principal is a Padania sympathizer.

Marisa: Why do I always get the missions where I have to go to school!?

Aisha: I got one too.

Rico: I had to go to a boys school once.

Marisa: It still sucks. At least I got to kick some boys asses. Dumb jerk bragged about his moped. Hello...my hand...um...father has a 1000cc Ducati ST4S!

What doesn't suck is the drawing, tremec...I always get a kick out of seeing how others portray Marisa. It looks like she's trying really trying hard not to blow her top and ruin the mission by pulverizing those two boys.

Thanks Professor, Marisa is a cool character because she got spunk a plenty! Cool Elfen I forgot about that one, can't wait to see more of those comics, I miss them.

For Marisa, I think this counts as deity-level self control

Nice mate.

Thanks Alfisti!

Schaschanist's cool character, Emilie was on my mind even as I try to finish my Hunters in the Dolomites short contribution and catch up to the new stories you guys have been writing, which I enjoy greatly. I hope to write as well as you guys some day, this site is a great learning experience as well as making long distance friends and enjoying our shared interests in GSG.
Anyways, first is Emilie, The Professor's spunky Marisa und me own crazy Ayden undercover to sell poison cookies to Padania but wouldn't cha know it, Ayden can't control herself and figuring having an enhanced healing system the most she'll get will be the RUNS!!
Also I was thinking about Schas's saying how Emilie has this ability to stir men's hearts with a look that can be described as innocent yet disarming.
I tried to capture that as she sells her deadly treats to the evil terrorists all the while Ayden looks on wondering why adults get all woozy like that?!

Thanks Kisk!

tremec6speed wrote:

Looks good, tremec. Her facial expression is goldy.

tremec6speed wrote:

Do i get it right and you tried to capture Emi's bad guys convincing innocent expression in this pic?

Wow, this is excellent!

That second one of Emi is particularly awesome... and, well: trust Ayden to be eating the merchandise

Pic 1:

Emilie: So Ayden ate the poisoned cookies...Ayden got sick...and somehow this is our fault?

Marisa: *sigh* Yeah, that's usually how it goes.

Pic 2:

As usual, a really good job at creating a relatable expressions. I particularly like how you do lips...I'm never happy with the way my moths turn out.

Schas wrote: "Do i get it right and you tried to capture Emi's bad guys convincing innocent expression in this pic?"
Um, y-yes?
Thanks MP5, Alfisti and Professor! I have a hard time with mouths too, as well as many other aspects of drawing such as wrinkles in clothing.....man that's hard!

tremec6speed wrote:Schas wrote: "Do i get it right and you tried to capture Emi's bad guys convincing innocent expression in this pic?"
Um, y-yes?
Thanks MP5, Alfisti and Professor! I have a hard time with mouths too, as well as many other aspects of drawing such as wrinkles in clothing.....man that's hard!

Nice.
Can't wait to see what comes next, tremec.

Thanks Schas, I'm doing quick sketches about Ayden gettin' jealous an tryin' to do same, failing MISERABLY!!

Great work there, Tremec. Love it, always.

I'll see what I can do about the comix. I'm currently rebuilding what was lost last year.

Thanks Elfen, hope you can bring them all back, you're comix are great! Among the sketches I've been working on recently is a short tale that more or less picks up where you left off on your classic Meshie getting into Mr. Skull story.

A few quick half finished drawings and doodles.
It seems these days I just don't have time for much else.


Earlier I posted Schanchanist's Emilie/cyborg who was sent with Marisa and Ayden to give poison laced girl Scout treats to the terrorists. Emi had no problem convincing them to buy more than enough to wipe out that nest of evil doers. My cydroid/synthoid Ayden handled that with her very own brand of class und distinction...... riiiight.
*
Ferro wants to get closer to Ayden, with gifts, friendly chats and even occasional trips to stores and restaurants, bringing her eventually to the point where she can substitute as handler because the agent does not feel Gunther is right for her. Having mental problems, Ferro figures he will be detrimental to the child-weapon, ultimately making the little girl become as disturbed as him. Since Ayden's synthetic brain does not allow the conditioning drugs to make her experience the puppy love the other girls do, Ferro saw an opening to take her away from from her handler.
At first Ferro figured accomplishing this would be easy, child's play even, but here she sees Ayden is in need of psychiatric help as well and won't be so easy to take her under her wing. There will be a short story about this later, with more pics to follow.
(Ayden became aware of the fate the girl whom she is genetically patterned after and wanting to be able to say that she like the cyborgs once had a family, she refers to this girl named Terren Lavenge as her sister) She also knows how her 'sister' died.....burned alive in the house where the SWA scientist Dr.LaVenge who adopted her for the sole purpose of experimenting on her. The girl was imprisoned in the Doctor's basement, periodically injected with nano drugs and eventually morphed into something inhuman. She then broke free of her shackles and set the house on fire, preventing her 'father' from leaving to insure their mutual end.

* I've always liked Bernardo, handler to Beatrice. After Bea died, I wondered about him having a gen 2 older cyborg, one that takes a liking to another handler!! Even though this girl 16 years old, named Garsendis
does in fact feel the chemical closeness to her Bernardo, she develops an emotional attachment for another man. This proves to be quite difficult on the young girl as she is torn between what the drugs would have her feel and what her own stubborn free will experiences. How to approach a man that already has a cyborg of his own?
Gar will have to figure that out.....carefully, for Marisa would not be amused if she were to find out!!
Story will proceed somewhat slowly as I get more of that precious commodity called time!

Great stuff. I'm totally jealous!

Thanks Taerkitty, I appreciate it!

this will ease my drawing, thanks for the reference of Ayden Trems, really Lav'd it!!!!

n_n

Wow, you've been busy.

The idea of Ayden burning her doll to "personalize" it is haunting. Really great job!

Thanks KuroNeko and Professor, I haven't had as much time to draw as I'd like and ended up putting up some half-finished stuff, but then again we all probably don't have as much of that every now and then right? lol

Nice tremec. Going to echo what Voodoo said about the doll, but I'm intrigued by the new girl as well.

Thanks Professor Voodoo and Alfisti, The Prof. and I have had some interesting correspondence about Gar and Elio as well as Marisa's reaction to this intruder! I'll have to go about it slowly as I've never attempted a story like this.... (plus I suck at writing period! lolz)
Kuro, can't wait to see your cool take on Ayden!
Alfisti recently gave me permission to draw Monty and Jethro! I'm going to have to take my time, drawing Alfisti's fratello, especially Jethro. For some reason he seems to me like he might be particularly challenging to interpret his facial features.
KuroNeko, if it's ok, could I try drawing Victoria Malashenko? You wrote she somewhat resembles Angie, cool!

I love the burning doll bit as well. I'm sure you'll do a great job at writing. After all, you've got some great ideas, and that's the hardest part.

Wow thanks Taerkitty!
The way I see it, the more I write, the (hopefully) better it'll get! lolz

Quick sketces they may be, but they're well-done, and are full of life and action.I'll echo Kitty's observation about your wealth of ideas, and add a comment I've made before: you're a gifted essayist, and that's a big step toward writing engaging fiction.

Words don't do your drawings justice. Nicely done and your new OC and handler relationship sounds interesting. I also want to see more of Ferro trying to befriend Ayden.

Thanks, The ScarredMan and Crazyidiot78!
I hope to publish fiction not related to GSG someday. I'm really grateful for your kind words and support guys, I mean it.
I do have some more sketches of Ayden shyly entering her boss's office, asking Gunther DeSica if he needed anything, yet before he replies, Ferro seeing the door open, enters his office smiling, leaving the expressionless handler a note won from Lorenzo and Jean through a heated debate, announcing her increased involvement with the child-weapon.
Whisking her away, the man is left watching while the little girl being escorted out the door, looks back at him, hoping he will defy the piece of paper. Food and gifts are then cheerfully given to the minor.
Ayden simply does not know who to respond, feeling awkward and nervous. Ferro is confident however, the little one will eventually embrace her overtly friendly, good natured behavior, knowing full well emotional expression is beyond the man's capability. His Achilles's Heel, she intends to exploit it to the fullest.
Mind you, I am not trying to portrait Ferro as a villain, quite the opposite, what she does, she does with the best of intention. She knows the handler has mental problems and seeks to prevent any harm coming to his partner because of it. In fact the very idea for this story was to imagine how Ayden could avert her fate of ultimately being killed by her handler after Gunther inevitably finds out the truth as to his brother's death: not Padania, his own mechanical partner murdered him, sending him into full blown madness and coming to the irrational conclusion that Ayden is a distant relative and indirect accomplice to Elsa deSica!
Ferro fails in the end, by pure chance as it were, because for all the attention and gifts awarded, towards the end of the day, Ayden walks down the corridor only to be pulled in by more laughter. However this amusement she has heard before: the humor spawned from ridicule to her handler! Agents have joked previously at Gunther's expense, though not to his face. Shock is added to her reaction when she views Ferro among them enjoying the cruel humor and even participating in a few jokes of her own! Quietly, she now walks back to her handler's office experiencing regret and shame that she actually briefly mused about Ferro being her handler instead of her odd teacher. Ayden's enhanced senses pick up breathing signaling he has not left for the day. Walking slowly, the child views the man in a rare moment: asleep, slumped over the desk. In one hand he is still loosely holding an old photograph. Her curiosity building, she nears, the image revealing her own handler, but as a child himself with a smile broader and far more wonderful than any her would be best-friend exhibited! Next to him is another person, a teen putting his arm around her 'big brother'. "This must be Lauro." She thinks, as she decides then and there never to consider turning away from her mentor/strange special friend. "We are family," the child mutters, "you and I are different from the rest, both rejects- (she's heard the technical staff chatting amongst themselves, about how the cydroid was inherently flawed and consequently of limited use) -and that's why you'll always be my big brother.
I love you Gunther."
Thus sealing her fate....

Wow.

You really have to tell this tale, dude.

Thanks ScarredMan, I'll be posting some new pictures while juggling the Garsendis story too, it'll take a while, but I do hope to do it before too long!