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Post by Thescarredman on Thu 29 Nov 2012 - 20:38

Quick sketces they may be, but they're well-done, and are full of life and action.I'll echo Kitty's observation about your wealth of ideas, and add a comment I've made before: you're a gifted essayist, and that's a big step toward writing engaging fiction.

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Post by crazyidiot78 on Thu 29 Nov 2012 - 23:46

Words don't do your drawings justice. Nicely done and your new OC and handler relationship sounds interesting. I also want to see more of Ferro trying to befriend Ayden.

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Post by tremec6speed on Fri 30 Nov 2012 - 0:57

Thanks, The ScarredMan and Crazyidiot78! Very Happy
I hope to publish fiction not related to GSG someday. I'm really grateful for your kind words and support guys, I mean it. Embarassed
I do have some more sketches of Ayden shyly entering her boss's office, asking Gunther DeSica if he needed anything, yet before he replies, Ferro seeing the door open, enters his office smiling, leaving the expressionless handler a note won from Lorenzo and Jean through a heated debate, announcing her increased involvement with the child-weapon.
Whisking her away, the man is left watching while the little girl being escorted out the door, looks back at him, hoping he will defy the piece of paper. Food and gifts are then cheerfully given to the minor.
Ayden simply does not know who to respond, feeling awkward and nervous. Ferro is confident however, the little one will eventually embrace her overtly friendly, good natured behavior, knowing full well emotional expression is beyond the man's capability. His Achilles's Heel, she intends to exploit it to the fullest.
Mind you, I am not trying to portrait Ferro as a villain, quite the opposite, what she does, she does with the best of intention. She knows the handler has mental problems and seeks to prevent any harm coming to his partner because of it. In fact the very idea for this story was to imagine how Ayden could avert her fate of ultimately being killed by her handler after Gunther inevitably finds out the truth as to his brother's death: not Padania, his own mechanical partner murdered him, sending him into full blown madness and coming to the irrational conclusion that Ayden is a distant relative and indirect accomplice to Elsa deSica!
Ferro fails in the end, by pure chance as it were, because for all the attention and gifts awarded, towards the end of the day, Ayden walks down the corridor only to be pulled in by more laughter. However this amusement she has heard before: the humor spawned from ridicule to her handler! Agents have joked previously at Gunther's expense, though not to his face. Shock is added to her reaction when she views Ferro among them enjoying the cruel humor and even participating in a few jokes of her own! Quietly, she now walks back to her handler's office experiencing regret and shame that she actually briefly mused about Ferro being her handler instead of her odd teacher. Ayden's enhanced senses pick up breathing signaling he has not left for the day. Walking slowly, the child views the man in a rare moment: asleep, slumped over the desk. In one hand he is still loosely holding an old photograph. Her curiosity building, she nears, the image revealing her own handler, but as a child himself with a smile broader and far more wonderful than any her would be best-friend exhibited! Next to him is another person, a teen putting his arm around her 'big brother'. "This must be Lauro." She thinks, as she decides then and there never to consider turning away from her mentor/strange special friend. "We are family," the child mutters, "you and I are different from the rest, both rejects- (she's heard the technical staff chatting amongst themselves, about how the cydroid was inherently flawed and consequently of limited use) -and that's why you'll always be my big brother.
I love you Gunther."
Thus sealing her fate....

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Post by Thescarredman on Fri 30 Nov 2012 - 22:09

Wow.

You really have to tell this tale, dude.

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Post by tremec6speed on Sat 1 Dec 2012 - 1:58

Thanks ScarredMan, I'll be posting some new pictures while juggling the Garsendis story too, it'll take a while, but I do hope to do it before too long! Smile

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Post by tremec6speed on Tue 13 Aug 2013 - 2:46

The story with Garsendis might have to wait a bit, but I will get to it eventually.
Ah, Kuroneko's Victoria. A cutie indeed!
She's wondering if borrowing from
 Petra's wardrobe might be a tad too revealing for her handler, what with the mini skirt an all. Embarassed
Trying to be be as inconspicuous as possible, Victoria tugs at the skirt to lower it to no avail! 
Marisa practices 'The Monty Look' while a younger Elio Alboreto  (30-ish) stands by.

Rachel: The terrorists in that van can't get away from your modified Harley, Daddy. Can't wait till we catch them up!
Fernando: Don't get too eager, we don't know what they're packing inside.

Afterward with the mission accomplished, the successful fratello relax back at the compound.


It is kind of chilly here love, worry not though, I have head gear that will help, we can take turns wearing it.


Er, no thanks skipper, I'll manage.
The classic duo the Avengers, along side The Blackers. Jethro exchanges an innocent smile with Mrs Peel.


*

Danger abounds with Monty ready to open her own can of Whoop Ass, yet Jethro seems unimpressed by the enemy.
(note: I had originally stated the previous sentence wrongly, the way I wrote it, it sounded like Jethro was unimpressed with Monty's fighting style, I meant Blacker felt no fear at the opposition) Embarassed 


Some questions, handlers would rather not deal with.


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Post by Alfisti on Tue 13 Aug 2013 - 7:07

Nice mate.

That last looks a little out of character for Monty (usually it's Jethro doing something silly and Monty being unimpressed), to be honest, but otherwise: love it.

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Post by MP5 on Tue 13 Aug 2013 - 9:46

It's always a treat to see your drawings.

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Post by Kurosaka "Ery" Erika on Tue 13 Aug 2013 - 10:05

@tremec6speed wrote:Ah, Kuroneko's Victoria. A cutie indeed!
 She resemble Angelica in every term ;except her hetechromian eyes (which her handler persistently object of her eyes being changed Razz)
the only difference of her and Angelica is Victoria is more matured compared to Angelica.

-i've read this post today, and i realized that i forgot that you wanna draw her-

i might be sharpening my pencils right now, since my new DSLR camera is ready for posting any picture that i could draw right now
first up; Ayden and Monty Razz

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Post by tremec6speed on Tue 13 Aug 2013 - 10:48

@Alfisti wrote:Nice mate.

That last looks a little out of character for Monty (usually it's Jethro doing something silly and Monty being unimpressed), to be honest, but otherwise: love it.
 Oops I didn't express myself right, sorry. I meant that while Monty was ready to take down the enemy, Jethro was unimpressed with the opposition. They didn't intimidate him at all. (Monty was not scared either for that matter, but I thought it be cool to show Blacker totally disregarding the opposing agents, unnerving them)
(I guess the way drew Monty preparing for battle was a bit over the top. I was actually picturing in my mind a scene from the Avengers when I came up with this drawing, where Ema Peel kicked ass and the stance she might have, that was my inspiration)
I was really tuckered out putting up these pictures, started writing my story (quick fanfic) at about nine thirty last night and continued till past 4 AM! I ended up calling out of work today, good thing my boss is not a GSG fan, or I'm done! sweat


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Post by tremec6speed on Tue 13 Aug 2013 - 10:53

Kuroneko wrote:
@tremec6speed wrote:Ah, Kuroneko's Victoria. A cutie indeed!
 She resemble Angelica in every term ;except her hetechromian eyes (which her handler persistently object of her eyes being changed Razz)
the only difference of her and Angelica is Victoria is more matured compared to Angelica.

-i've read this post today, and i realized that i forgot that you wanna draw her-

i might be sharpening my pencils right now, since my new DSLR camera is ready for posting any picture that i could draw right now
first up; Ayden and Monty Razz
Sounds cool, eager to see your work! Hmmm, Monty and Ayden.... A cyborg/cydroid fratello? lolz Razz 
Monty: Ahh, no......
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Post by tremec6speed on Tue 13 Aug 2013 - 10:55

@MP5 wrote:It's always a treat to see your drawings.
 Thanks MP5, I appreciate it! Very Happy
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Post by Alfisti on Tue 13 Aug 2013 - 21:56

@tremec6speed wrote:
@Alfisti wrote:Nice mate.

That last looks a little out of character for Monty (usually it's Jethro doing something silly and Monty being unimpressed), to be honest, but otherwise: love it.
 Oops I didn't express myself right, sorry. I meant that while Monty was ready to take down the enemy, Jethro was unimpressed with the opposition. They didn't intimidate him at all. (Monty was not scared either for that matter, but I thought it be cool to show Blacker totally disregarding the opposing agents, unnerving them)
(I guess the way drew Monty preparing for battle was a bit over the top. I was actually picturing in my mind a scene from the Avengers when I came up with this drawing, where Ema Peel kicked ass and the stance she might have, that was my inspiration)
I was really tuckered out putting up these pictures, started writing my story (quick fanfic) at about nine thirty last night and continued till past 4 AM! I ended up calling out of work today, good thing my boss is not a GSG fan, or I'm done! sweat
 Haha, got it.

Don't worry, you're not the only one who winds up in bed way too late as a result of GsG stuff either...

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Post by tremec6speed on Tue 17 Sep 2013 - 2:07

My attempt at drawing Topgear's fratello Jim and Jaimebel as well as Frederic.sweat
The last pictures show Henrietta on loan from Jose to complete a mission. Jaimebel and 'etta let Jim know the en-devour went well.
Jim: Excellent ladies, let's head back to base!


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Post by tremec6speed on Tue 17 Sep 2013 - 2:14

Crazy Ayden quick pic.


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Post by topgearbrzgt86 on Tue 17 Sep 2013 - 10:40

Jim, Jamiebel and Frederic: We approve. Good 

Jamiebel: My hair could've been a bit longer, but I could claim to having a haircut. Razz 

Jim: Yes Indeed And he made us look like Jethro and Monty. Love that.

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Post by tremec6speed on Tue 17 Sep 2013 - 17:10

Thanks Topgear. You're right, the hair should have been a tad longer. bang head 
Glad your fratello liked the pictures!
'etta: mine looks like I gained weight.
Me: oops!
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Post by topgearbrzgt86 on Tue 17 Sep 2013 - 17:24

@tremec6speed wrote:Thanks Topgear. You're right, the hair should have been a tad longer. bang head 
Glad your fratello liked the pictures!
'etta: mine looks like I gained weight.
Me: oops!
sweat
No probs, Tremec.

Jamiebel: (to 'Etta) Not to me, it doesn't. You look as cute as ever. Very Happy Razz

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