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Post by ACH on Thu 19 Aug 2010 - 11:45

Her goes my in battle draft of ELIZA
This shows her with a ponytail.
And reveals her interest in Old Weaponry (Particularly WWII Weapons)

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Post by boomer_gonz on Thu 19 Aug 2010 - 12:55

NOTE: Written in jest

Alpha: No, no, and fuck no. Eliza cannot use my Browning M1918-A2 with the short-barrel and the double drum magazine.

Eliza: Pleeeease. -puppy dog eyes-

Alpha: Sorry, that only works for Kara. Here, you an use one of the old stock refurbished ones I have.

Eliza: Better than nothing.....I guess.

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Post by ACH on Thu 19 Aug 2010 - 12:58

You just gave me a great idea for my next draft! drinkin'

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Post by ACH on Thu 19 Aug 2010 - 17:18

My god I must have been half asleep when I made this thread/topic coz this was supposed to go in the OC Artwork section. Guh?

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Post by Kiskaloo on Thu 19 Aug 2010 - 20:23

!Achtung! wrote:My god I must have been half asleep when I made this thread/topic coz this was supposed to go in the OC Artwork section. Guh?

Moved it for ya.

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Post by Alfisti on Fri 20 Aug 2010 - 8:33

I know I commented on this in the chatbox, but again: nice work.

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Post by ACH on Sat 21 Aug 2010 - 15:04

Here we go!
Shes a bit mad at me coz I dont know how to do Combat Trousers.
But here is ELIZA in COMBAT ATTIRE well at least her upper body is.

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It Does appear that reusing paper is a bad idea.


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Post by Kiskaloo on Sat 21 Aug 2010 - 15:08

Looks good! Good

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Post by ACH on Sat 21 Aug 2010 - 15:24

Thanks Kisk.
Others please tell me what you think.
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Post by Five_X on Sat 21 Aug 2010 - 15:38

I wish I could draw, let alone as well as you.

Clean that up a little and ink it, and it'll look great.

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Post by Awinnell on Sat 21 Aug 2010 - 16:32

why a PPsH ? the Soviet army stopped using them fairly quickly after the war

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Post by ACH on Sat 21 Aug 2010 - 21:28

I havent update her profile yet but its supposed to be one of her Vast Collection of WWII Era weaponry. Il get to updating her profile later! First I need a Haircut.

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Post by ElfenMagix on Sat 21 Aug 2010 - 23:01

Interesting....

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Post by Alfisti on Sat 21 Aug 2010 - 23:45

Yeah... reusing drawing paper generally isn't a great idea. I know if I make a mistake during the pencil stage of doing a comic page, and I'm not too far into it, then I'll just tear the page out and start again. Erasing too much eventually destroys the surface of the paper and makes the ink bleed weird. That's one of the reasons I'll often sketch straight with pen, can't erase so no issue

Drawing looks good man, if a bit stiff. I think that could be solved though if you dropped the gun off the horizontal so that it's not quite so perpendicular to her body. The other thing I've noticed is that you seem to draw weapons quite small. I don't know how tall Eliza is, but these girls are generally smaller than an adult, so guns are going to look larger against them.

Still, nice one.

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Post by MP5 on Sat 21 Aug 2010 - 23:54

It's probably just me, but that second pic makes me think of Toradora's Aisaka Taiga:


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Post by ACH on Sun 22 Aug 2010 - 0:10

TAIGA AISAKA! XD

@Alfisti: Yeh I get what ye mean about the PPSH size! Granted the PPSH is quite Small. Its about the Size of an -MP5-

Ive made it larger now since I also noticed its a wee small.

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Post by Awinnell on Sun 22 Aug 2010 - 4:11

lol as far as the combat trousers go,you could make your Handler a Strike Witches fanatic,so Pantsu all the way !

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Post by ACH on Sun 22 Aug 2010 - 8:35

That could Work except she doesnt have a handler.

LOL I now cant take that image off my head :S (Dirty Thoughts, Begone!)

Besides If I do that. She'd Be 34'erd in no time.

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Post by Awinnell on Sun 22 Aug 2010 - 8:57

Rule 34 has no exceptions !

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Post by ACH on Sun 22 Aug 2010 - 9:17

"If it Exist, Theres Porn of it"

At least Im deleying the effects ROTFL

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Post by ACH on Sun 22 Aug 2010 - 14:07

WOOT! PILLOW COVER ELIZA!
Yes Ive gotten a it lazy with the hair and yes she Does Sleep with her Guns.

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Hang on wont this actually get her 34'erd sooner?
Anyways try taking a guess on what she slept with (Somehow that sentence sounded weird)


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Post by ACH on Mon 23 Aug 2010 - 1:27

:S
A comment about the pillow cover tho <-From Me->
Its hellishly hard drawing a Fanservice-y cover of ELIZA while
someone (read:boomer) is having a conversation with me that involves
some echi occurences that centered on her :S

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Post by Awinnell on Mon 23 Aug 2010 - 1:40

!Achtung! wrote::S
A comment about the pillow cover tho <-From Me->
Its hellishly hard drawing a Fanservice-y cover of ELIZA while
someone (read:boomer) is having a conversation with me that involves
some echi occurences that centered on her :S

and thus rule 34a was invoked, if porn of it doesn't exist someone will make some !

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Post by ACH on Mon 23 Aug 2010 - 2:04

XD so True!

And Worse yet It also involved Alpha

Hawt!

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Post by boomer_gonz on Mon 23 Aug 2010 - 4:52

I don't remember it being Ecchi. LOLZ-y yes; ecchi no.

Although that appears to have been the effect anyhow. sweat

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Post by ACH on Mon 23 Aug 2010 - 9:23

XD. Anything that involves a Girl lacking clothes is Echi to me.
Well thanks for the LOLZ tho.

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Post by ACH on Tue 24 Aug 2010 - 9:26

Is it me or Have I drawn the BAR a wee small again?
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Post by Alfisti on Tue 24 Aug 2010 - 10:32

!Achtung! wrote:Is it me or Have I drawn the BAR a wee small again?
:S
Well, if she's only 5' tall... possibly. I dunno, the BAR isn't a weapon I'm massively familiar with so...

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Post by ACH on Tue 24 Aug 2010 - 10:44

I have Drawn it a bit too small again :S
The BAR is about 4 ft long!
and I quote Boomer "The BAR is just a BIG ASS Gun"
Ya know He's Right (Ive only based my drawing with memories of the gun in COD2) Biggest Gun Ive held was a H&K 416 and an M16. Anyways Im gonna redo it in a bit!

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Post by ACH on Tue 24 Aug 2010 - 13:31

Now its been fixed!

Holy Crap! The BAR is a Big Ass Rifle

Ive Scaled it properly now compared to Eliza.

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Post by ACH on Thu 26 Aug 2010 - 10:50

Im sad to say that new artwork is put off coz of a simple problem, I ran out of Graphite "lead" Sticks for my Pair of Rotring 0.5 Tikky's. Ill Get to it in time but as again dont expect much :S

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Post by ebitempura966 on Mon 30 Aug 2010 - 8:18

her spot is soo yummy to elli (OwO) that's the feelin of sniper, her position is too open wiode, but nice design of oc's and good sketch of the brick Smile

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Post by ACH on Wed 1 Sep 2010 - 8:24

AAAWWWWW!!!!!!

i havent put anything up recently. Sorry for that folks im just tied up a bit (figuratively)

Anyways heres some Lolz fer you.

[Allison and Eliza in the garage]
[Jay is outside eavesdropping]

What Jay is hearing:

Eliza: Is this all right??

Allison: almost. Just a little bit farther.
[sound of Eliza straining]
Allison: Whoa! thats a bit too far.

Eliza: Uh! Sorry, Its kinda hard to see from under here.

Allison: Right now jiggle it, JIGGLE IT

Eliza: Im jiggling like a bugger

Allison: STOP. Thats the spot. YES!

Eliza: Yeah! Uh! now what comes after this?

[Meanwhile. Outside]
JAY: Hawt!
[Brian coming over to the garage and sees Jay]
Brian: What are you doing there? (While proceeding to the garage door)

JAY: STOP! DONT GO IN THERE!
[Brian opens the door]
JAY: NOOOOOOOOO!
[Everyone looks at Jay] Puzzled
JAY: Sees what really is going on

[Allison and Eliza is Assembling a Caterham R500 Superlight and is currently installing the engine with Eliza underneath the car]

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Post by Alfisti on Wed 1 Sep 2010 - 8:41

Brian: (picking up a handful of washers seemingly discarded on the floor) Aren't these supposed to be in the car?

Allison: Weight saving measure.

Eliza: Yeah, keeping in line with the spirit of Lotus' designs we're seeing if we can cut the Superlight's weight down even more.

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Post by Kiskaloo on Wed 1 Sep 2010 - 12:46

@Alfisti wrote:Eliza: Yeah, keeping in line with the spirit of Lotus' designs we're seeing if we can cut the Superlight's weight down even more.

Leave enough of them out, and the Lotus should dynamically shed weight with every bump and corner as more parts fall off. Smile

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Post by MP5 on Wed 1 Sep 2010 - 18:44

Brian: Ok, now see, there's weight-saving, and then there's compromising structural integrity. Put these back in.

Allison and Eliza: Awwww....

Fiona: (Charging in hurriedly) Guys! I have a twincharging kit!

Allison and Eliza: All right!

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Post by ACH on Mon 6 Sep 2010 - 20:54

STILL NOTHING, DANG! Im running dry. (recent work got ruined by juice spill)

But to liven things abit heres a vid.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IcadPLBH0b0

Or for some action heres:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4jHmVwFMeNQ&feature=related

Hope my next work goes better.

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Post by ACH on Tue 26 Oct 2010 - 14:40

After more than a month of being Idle, Ive finally drew something worthy to be posted here!

This shows how my art style has evolved over that month or so

ELIZA here listening to some tunes while taking cover behind a tree, Armed with a Sturmgewehr 44.

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And there it is! She's not really paying much attention is she?

I may have gone overboard with the details here but yeh! It happens.


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Post by Kiskaloo on Tue 26 Oct 2010 - 14:50

Looks good! Good

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Post by Officer_Charon on Tue 26 Oct 2010 - 15:01

I like it!

Also: is that an StG44 with a rail-system? My mind, she is blown! *grins*

She looks so happy... like she's been camped out, waiting on a Padania to flee, and suddenly she's got the kill order from her handler. (Yes, I know that's an iPod, but still. *chuckles* It first seemed to me like she's whistling a happy tune to herself as she sees the dirty appearing.)

Eliza: "And if they show up, I can empty the mag on them. Such bliss! Such joy!" *sign pops up next to her, saying "GRUNT HEAVEN"*

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Post by Alfisti on Wed 27 Oct 2010 - 0:16

@Officer_Charon wrote:She looks so happy... like she's been camped out, waiting on a Padania to flee, and suddenly she's got the kill order from her handler. (Yes, I know that's an iPod, but still. *chuckles* It first seemed to me like she's whistling a happy tune to herself as she sees the dirty appearing.)
Could be an iPhone, then it's also a hands-free set. Wink

Looks good Acht, I see you got the sneaker issue sorted.

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Post by Professor Voodoo on Wed 27 Oct 2010 - 0:58

!Achtung! wrote:After more than a month of being Idle, Ive finally drew something worthy to be posted here!
Very slick drawing...love the details on the weapon, kneepads & sneakers. Given that the drawing maintains a very light feel I don't think you've gone overboard at all.

Looking forward to your next!


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Re: !Achtung!'s OC draft works

Post by tremec6speed on Sun 31 Oct 2010 - 6:46

Excellent work! 1st pic, top notch action shot! In the second pic posted, you really made your character Eliza look very cute! Third, looks like Eliza is competing with Triela: (I think it was in the 1st or 2nd book that shows Triela sitting, holding her rifle with similar, er, attire?!) Embarassed 4th shot, I can imagine a hail of bullets whizzing by, but this cool cyborg shrugs it off because she's having too much fun kickin' butt! head bang Are you watching Mr. Aida? I hope you consider incorporating this girl in your stories!
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Re: !Achtung!'s OC draft works

Post by ACH on Sat 26 Mar 2011 - 23:13

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ELIZA: Look at that masterpiece.... The only thing nagging me is how you didnt give me a gun..
!Achtung!: This is the first time I didnt....


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Re: !Achtung!'s OC draft works

Post by Professor Voodoo on Sat 26 Mar 2011 - 23:50

!Achtung! wrote:ELIZA: Look at that masterpiece.... The only thing nagging me is how you didnt give me a gun.
This girl is more concerned about the lack of a weapon than the fact that you nearly showed the entire forum what kind of underwear she prefers?

Very ornate outfit and dynamic pose. Top notch stuff as usual !Achtung!

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Re: !Achtung!'s OC draft works

Post by tremec6speed on Sun 27 Mar 2011 - 0:05

Nice eyes! The whole drawing is cool, but I dig the expression of the eyes most! cheers

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Re: !Achtung!'s OC draft works

Post by Kiskaloo on Sun 27 Mar 2011 - 0:20

@Professor Voodoo wrote:
!Achtung! wrote:ELIZA: Look at that masterpiece.... The only thing nagging me is how you didnt give me a gun.

This girl is more concerned about the lack of a weapon than the fact that you nearly showed the entire forum what kind of underwear she prefers?

That's why she wants the gun. Wink

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Re: !Achtung!'s OC draft works

Post by Alfisti on Sun 27 Mar 2011 - 0:27

As the others have said: nicely done, particularly with the odd angle and dynamic pose. If anything it could possibly use some more definition in the shading of the folds in her skirt, but otherwise: really good work.

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Re: !Achtung!'s OC draft works

Post by ElfenMagix on Sun 27 Mar 2011 - 1:38

Very well done, Ach!

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Re: !Achtung!'s OC draft works

Post by ACH on Sun 27 Mar 2011 - 11:55

It has gone well has it?.. I have to stress that It turned out quite different from what I intended... My art style has gone in another direction somewhat different from before.....again

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