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Post by ebitempura966 on Mon 25 Oct 2010 - 8:26

yo,yo,yo, i just use my old thread to start up this thread, soon i will attach my 3 main character plus their handler, villain, rival, and in the future, ill add comic strips :gunslinger girl-sorgono una:

gunslinger girl
sorgono una

While the main force of swa assassin cyborg dealing with padania, the secret division searching of the supplier of padania and the personal money storage to decrease padania mobility in terrorizing Italy and help the government to save more money from padania damage itself.

and one team will stand agains un- well known enemy with their dangerous people inside, and fight in other country to solve the illegal funding to padania

sasha, maria and miko will begin their journey and fight like the other cyborg with their handler,and the other secret division cyborg.


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Post by Alfisti on Mon 25 Oct 2010 - 8:36

Man, you need to start just a single thread to put your drawings in... because I'm starting to loose track of where all your stuff is.

Nice pic mate, you're pose work is getting better and better each time I see it. Probably could use a few more stretch lines across her top with her arm in that position though.

I don't know a lot about knives, so her loadout looks pretty good to me. Sweet stuff.

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Post by ebitempura966 on Mon 25 Oct 2010 - 8:38

@Alfisti wrote:Man, you need to start just a single thread to put your drawings in... because I'm starting to loose track of where all your stuff is.

Nice pic mate, you're pose work is getting better and better each time I see it. Probably could use a few more stretch lines across her top with her arm in that position though.

I don't know a lot about knives, so her loadout looks pretty good to me. Sweet stuff.
well al, i will compile all the materials after finish my story, yet i have enough with the cyborg char and start for the bad guy, thx for the suggestion
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Post by Professor Voodoo on Mon 25 Oct 2010 - 8:39

I agree with Alfisti about consolidating into one art thread but more importantly, very impressive. The highlight for me is the shading work you've done on the creases.

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Post by ebitempura966 on Mon 25 Oct 2010 - 8:47

@Professor Voodoo wrote:I agree with Alfisti about consolidating into one art thread but more importantly, very impressive. The highlight for me is the shading work you've done on the creases.
thx to the great acdsee that help me a lot with this and HB lead user problem, (im not promoting)
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Post by ACH on Mon 25 Oct 2010 - 9:02

!WOW!

This is amazing work here ebitemp! I love It!

And yeah posework is great(cant say the same for me....much to Eliza's Dismay)
It will be very bloody when these two bring out dual wielded sharp implements on the enemy
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Post by Alfisti on Mon 25 Oct 2010 - 9:11

@ebitempura966 wrote:well al, i will compile all the materials after finish my story, yet i have enough with the cyborg char and start for the bad guy, thx for the suggestion
Well, I still think you would be better of having one thread for all your artwork now, it makes it easier for people to chart your progress and see what you're doing. I keep all my OC development work in one thread for that same reason It also means that you do not need to keep explaining what you are doing over and over again. Razz Another upside is that having a single thread makes it easier for those of us giving you feedback to relate one picture to another and to relate our comments back to what has already been said.

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Post by ACH on Mon 25 Oct 2010 - 9:29

[looks at primary/secondary weapons] 0.o
Is it just me or does Ebitemp and I have rather similar taste in weaponry.

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Post by ebitempura966 on Mon 25 Oct 2010 - 10:44

@Alfisti wrote:
@ebitempura966 wrote:well al, i will compile all the materials after finish my story, yet i have enough with the cyborg char and start for the bad guy, thx for the suggestion
Well, I still think you would be better of having one thread for all your artwork now, it makes it easier for people to chart your progress and see what you're doing. I keep all my OC development work in one thread for that same reason It also means that you do not need to keep explaining what you are doing over and over again. Razz Another upside is that having a single thread makes it easier for those of us giving you feedback to relate one picture to another and to relate our comments back to what has already been said.
again, quote again, i think ill follow your suggestion al
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Post by ebitempura966 on Mon 25 Oct 2010 - 10:48

oh to inform u guys, its a rare chance that i could open this site, my mom is patrolling around, well i try my best to play dirty XD Run!
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Post by ACH on Mon 25 Oct 2010 - 11:46

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Post by Officer_Charon on Mon 25 Oct 2010 - 15:21

inb4 underage b&. *chuckles*

Looking good there, bro! Only caveat: her pose looks rather, well... posed.

If she were about to swing the knife in that manner, perhaps her legs would be more bent and torso twisted more, for maximum snap?

That being said, fantastic eye for detail! I love how crisp she came out.

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Post by FearTheLASERFACE on Mon 25 Oct 2010 - 18:17

What happened to the SHOTGUN?.....I said, SHOT, GUN!....SHOTGUN damnit!

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Post by tremec6speed on Sun 31 Oct 2010 - 6:54

Both art looks great! Sasha coming for the kill and Eliza about to trash who ever tried to flee! head bang cheers
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Post by ebitempura966 on Sun 31 Oct 2010 - 12:00

@tremec6speed wrote:Both art looks great! Sasha coming for the kill and Eliza about to trash who ever tried to flee! head bang cheers
trash -_-, waiit.... isnt eliza is concrete piercer ?!, it makes the mission more easier
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