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Post by MP5 on Sun 31 Oct 2010 - 21:20

"Like all bad ideas, this one started in the chat."

If you have lemons, this is the basket to put them in. Be sure to wrap them in a spoiler tag before posting, and if you're going to comment, spoiler tag if you're quoting from the story.

Sexy, silly, sad, happy, hilarious, or heartwarming, feel free to post those stories here! I'll start, in fact.

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“Turbo Lovers”

“This is nice.” said Jay, breaking the silence.

“What was that?” asked Allison, pushing her headphones off.

“I said that this is nice.” repeated Jay, removing his own headphones.

“What is?”

“Moments like these, just you and me, together.”

“You're such a hopeless romantic—and that's why I love you.” said Allison with a smile, leaning over and kissing her boyfriend's lips. “Hey, listen—it's our song.”

As Jason Mraz's 'Lucky' played over their headphones, Jay and Allison resumed their lounging in the former's dorm room on a sunny spring Saturday afternoon. It was rare for either of them to have plenty of time to just unwind and relax—missions had taken up most of their time, and after nearly losing each other in two separate incidents, they were resolute to spend as much time together as humanly possible. They lived on borrowed time, had discovered love while on borrowed time, and now they had to make the most of it, plagued by the niggling worry that one day, perhaps tomorrow, or a week, or a month, or a year from this moment that one of them (or both of them) would no longer be around. This was why above all else, time was the most precious treasure either of them could receive. And moments like these were how they liked to spend it.

“I love you so much, Jay.” said Allison as the song ended.

“I love you too, Allison.” replied Jay. The Sansa Fuze MP3 player that their headphones selected the next track, which began with a synthesizer's notes opening the song, followed by a driving beat and electric guitar. Allison recognized this song; Jay did not, and this provided an opportunity for the former to cause some... enjoyable mischief with the latter. She quickly hit the 'pause' button and spoke to her beloved.

“Jay, can you do something for me?”

“Sure... what is it?”

“Close your eyes and listen to this song with me. This is a really good song.”

“Why do I have to keep my eyes closed?”

“Just do it, please? It's easier to focus on the song that way.”

“All right, I guess.”

“And keep them closed, all right? That's the best way to really enjoy this song.”

“If you say so.”

With a smile, Allison unpaused the song as soon as Jay shut his eyelids, intent on focusing on the music. Allison had much different intentions, however, and she smirked mischievously as the song got underway proper. The vocalist's lyrics flowed into Jay's ears almost ominously—and in a sense, they were exactly right.

”You won't hear me...”

Allison moved from her spot on the floor next to Jay's bed and turned so that she was face-to-face with the American, who was still listening intently to the song. Quietly, she undid the button and zipper on her jeans, slipping out of them and leaving her bottomless save for a pair of orange lace boyshorts.

“...But you'll feel me...”

Allison brought herself back down, this time straddling her boyfriend's lap as gently as possible. Jay's face twitched as he felt the extra weight atop his thighs, but he continued listening to the song as Allison had instructed.

“Without warning, something's dawning, listen...”

Jay found himself flinching at a series of tingling sensations that were assaulting the area around his collarbone, making their way up his neck, stopping just at his cheeks.

“Then within your senses, you'll know you're defenseless...”

Jay's skin pebbled up a little as he felt moist, hot breath along his neck, and his enhanced sense of smell caught what he thought for a moment was the scent of high-octane petrol. Allison had to be very close to him, but before he could reach out and feel if she was indeed in front of him, the weight on his thighs increased sharply (but not painfully) and his arms were suddenly pinned to his sides as he felt a familiar pair of lips meet his own.

“How your heart beats, when you run for cover...”

Jay's pulse shot up as he melted into Allison's kiss, the pair's noise-canceling headphones leaving their kissing the only audible sound in the room. Jay finally disregarded his girlfriend's instructions and opened his eyes as she finally pulled away, a wisp of saliva bridging their lips momentarily, and as they looked into each other's eyes, Allison grinned and placed her forehead against his, mouthing the next lyrics.

“You can't retreat, I spy like no other...”

Jay accepted it as a challenge, and responded in kind, pulling Allison in and this time engaging her in a more passionate kiss. Their lips separated and rejoined fervently, their tongues more than once exploring each other's mouths. Their heartbeats quickened, their bodies flushed with more warmth as they allowed their hands to roam each other's bodies, moaning in pleasure and approval as they kissed and touched each other, their hands causing electric sensations of excitement to course through their very beings.

“Then we race together, we can ride forever...”

As Allison pulled away from one particular kiss, her lips momentarily sucking gently on Jay's tongue, she wrapped her legs around Jay's back and pulled him closer to her, digging her fingers into his back through the fabric of his t-shirt. As she explored his mouth with her tongue a second (or was it third?) time, she elicited a noise of surprise, her eyebrows arching in surprise before her muffled yelp turned into a long, satisfied moan. Jay had responded by bringing his hands down her back before wrapping around her pert, supple buttocks, partially exposed by the short length of her boyshorts, the American's hands giving both cheeks a gentle but firm and drawn-out squeeze that drove Allison wild with pleasure.

“Wrapped in horsepower, driving into fury...”

Their passions flared, and it wasn't long before Allison took hold of her lover's t-shirt and removed it from his person, revealing the toned physique she had gotten up close and personal with once before. Her own shirt had to come off, too, revealing her slim curves and an orange bra to match her boyshorts. The loss of clothing exposed them to the soft breeze coming through the slightly-opened window, causing their skin to pebble with more goosebumps, heightening the sensations they felt.

“Changing gear, I pull you tighter to me...”

Deftly, Jay's hand snaked its way up the smooth expanse of Allison's back and in one smooth motion, he unclasped her bra, letting her breasts fall free, nipples quickly standing erect from the sudden stimulation. She took off her bra completely, and moved to press herself closer to Jay. Instead, he reached a hand up and gently caressed her left breast, sweeping his index finger over her nipple, causing Allison to moan in surprise and pleasure once again while in the midst of kissing Jay.

“I'm your turbo lover!
Tell me there's no other!
I'm your turbo lover!
Better run for cover!”

During the chorus, Allison struck back, unbuttoning Jay's own pants and pulling them off of him to leave him in his boxers, revealing evidence of his positive response to where things were going. Jay responded by laying Allison onto her back and planting a flurry of kisses from her cheeks, down the side of her neck, around and in between her breasts, trailing down the flawless expanse of her stomach, before stopping just above the waistband of her boyshorts. His ministrations had the effect of Allison releasing a contented moan from the depths of her being. She then gasped as Jay planted a few more tantalizing kisses on her inner thighs, causing her boyshorts to moisten slightly in a particular spot. Unable to take anymore and impatient to get to the main course of their tryst, Allison pushed one of Jay's headphones aside and spoke huskily into his ear, lust and desire evident in the almost ragged breaths of her aroused voice.

“Screw this foreplay bullshit...better yet, screw me. Now!

Allison quickly got her wish as her lover lifted her onto his bed and quickly pulled off her boyshorts, finally leaving her completely nude save for the headphones she still wore. In lust-driven haste, Jay also removed his boxers, his manhood at full attention. Easing himself atop Allison, he moistened the tip of his erection against his girlfriend's wet loins before slowly plunging in, Allison's womanhood engulfing his length, the two of them gasping in pleasure before Jay started moving slowly, building the pace to a steady rhythm, all the while enjoying themselves, surrendering to the ecstasy of their union.

“We hold each other closer, as we shift to overdrive,
and everything goes rushing by, with every nerve alive.
We move so fast it seems as though we've taken to the sky
Love machines in harmony, we hear the engines cry...

I'm your turbo lover!
Tell me there's no other!
I'm your turbo lover!
Better run for cover!”


Through the third verse and second chorus, Allison and Jay moved together in a steady rhythm, eventually changing to a standing position where Allison's back was pressed up against the wall momentarily before Jay supported her with his hands on her buttocks as she wrapped her legs around him and he began thrusting upwards into her vigorously, Allison's breasts bouncing with each stroke as she held on for dear life.

“Oh god, Jay, don't stop!” pleaded Allison through moans and cries of pleasure.

As the song went into a guitar solo, Jay and Allison turned and moved back to the bed, the boy holding his lover's legs to his shoulders as he increased the frequency and force of his thrusts. Pleasure welled up inside the two teens as the final verse of the song began, leading to the climax in more ways than one.

“On and on we're charging to the place so many seek
In perfect synchronicity of which so many speak...”

“Allison...” grunted Jay, struggling to maintain his rhythm. “I'm gonna--”

“Me too, Jay. We'll do it together!”

“We feel so close to heaven in this roaring heavy load,
And then in sheer abandonment, we shatter and explode!”

As the final verse ended, Jay thrust one final time, deeply into Allison's womanhood as they both climaxed, silencing each others screams of ecstasy with a deep, prolonged kiss while he spilled his seed into her and she engulfed him in her love juices. As the chorus played one more time, the spent lovers collapsed upon each other, their breathing labored, their bodies covered in sweat, but all the more satisfied for their efforts. Jay lay panting for a little while next to Allison, whose breasts rose and fell steadily with her breathing, covered only by the thin spread of Jay's bunk bed. Both eventually found strength to push off their headphones, and Jay finally broke the silence.

“You were right, Allison. That really was a good song.”

“Told you.” replied the girl with a grin. “You know, I know a couple of other songs like that.”

“Save 'em for later. Can we just spoon for the rest of the afternoon?”

“That's fine, too.”

Allison snuggled up to Jay back-first, and she turned her head to kiss him gently before she settled her back against her boyfriend's front, and Jay wrapped his arm around her. The two were soon napping peacefully. The headphones connected to Allison's Sansa played their song, 'Lucky', once again, a result of the MP3 player having been set to both 'repeat' and 'shuffle'. Nevertheless, it was a perfect lullaby for the couple, who had just shared a spontaneous expression of passion.

Britney Kensington, feel free to make any suggestions, comments, or critiques. Very Happy

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Post by Nachtsider on Sun 31 Oct 2010 - 21:56

Goddammit. I was expecting a side-splittingly funny twist ending.

Still, it's pretty good porn. Tasteful. Just a word to anyone wanting to post stuff in here - keep the stag legal.

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Post by Kiskaloo on Sun 31 Oct 2010 - 22:02

Nachtsider wrote:Still, it's pretty good porn. Tasteful. Just a word to anyone wanting to post stuff in here - keep the stag legal.

Too late when you consider Danjo's and boomer's work. Wink

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Re: The Section 2 Smut Locker

Post by Nachtsider on Sun 31 Oct 2010 - 22:14

Sigh. Talk about being out of the loop.

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Re: The Section 2 Smut Locker

Post by Professor Voodoo on Sun 31 Oct 2010 - 22:33

Claes: (knocking on the ceiling above) Hey! Keep it down up there! (mumbling) Damn Series Two's...

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Post by MP5 on Sun 31 Oct 2010 - 23:14

Nachtsider wrote:Goddammit. I was expecting a side-splittingly funny twist ending.

Still, it's pretty good porn. Tasteful. Just a word to anyone wanting to post stuff in here - keep the stag legal.

They're Legal-ish.

What kind of funny twist ending were you expecting, though? Comments about how long they were actually at it?

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Post by Kiskaloo on Sun 31 Oct 2010 - 23:18

Well the Age of Consent in Italy is 14, so Jay and Allison are legal. And Triela's dream about having sex with Alpha would have been legal if it actually had happened.

Italian law also allows a 13 year old to have sex with someone up to age 16, so Britney and Paulo (?) having sex is okay, but as for her other partners...

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Post by Danjo3 on Mon 1 Nov 2010 - 2:41

MP5 wrote:Britney Kensington, feel free to make any suggestions, comments, or critiques. Very Happy
Britney: Well, MP5, it was very nice… I suppose… but I tend to be… you know… a little more subtle. But don’t let me put you off or anything. Like Nach said, it’s a little pornish, but who am I to talk, right? I’m Britney. Anyway, keep up the good work.

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Post by MP5 on Mon 1 Nov 2010 - 7:16

Danjo3 wrote:
PS@Kiskaloo - Britney and Paulo never had sex.

As I remember, it was Brit and Stefano.

Britney: Well, MP5, it was very nice… I suppose… but I tend to be… you know… a little more subtle. But don’t let me put you off or anything. Like Nach said, it’s a little pornish, but who am I to talk, right? I’m Britney. Anyway, keep up the good work.

Allison: I think he put that there for my sake... somewhat against my better judgement, I have to ask you out of sheer curiosity; what would you have done in my place, and can I take notes? *pulls out a pen and notepad* I mean, if you will, critique my performance. What could I have done to make it more enjoyable for Jay?

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Post by MP5 on Mon 1 Nov 2010 - 7:54

Nachtsider wrote:Goddammit. I was expecting a side-splittingly funny twist ending.

Hmmm. Maybe, Nacht, I'll set another one to some Flight of the Conchords:


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Post by Danjo3 on Mon 1 Nov 2010 - 9:55

MP5 wrote:Allison:I have to ask you out of sheer curiosity; what would you have done in my place, and can I take notes? *pulls out a pen and notepad* I mean, if you will, critique my performance. What could I have done to make it more enjoyable for Jay?
Britney: Actually, when I said subtle, I was referring to Dan’s writing style, not the physical act of sex it’s self. As far as Jay is concerned, I wouldn’t even worry about it. At his age, all you have to do is just lay there and he’ll be thrilled.

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Post by ElfenMagix on Mon 1 Nov 2010 - 10:38

Rachel: ROTFL

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Post by Kiskaloo on Mon 1 Nov 2010 - 11:09

Danjo3 wrote:Actually, when I said subtle, I was referring to Dan’s writing style, not the physical act of sex it’s self. As far as Jay is concerned, I wouldn’t even worry about it. At his age, all you have to do is just lay there and he’ll be thrilled.

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Post by Aisha_Hikari on Tue 9 Nov 2010 - 11:07

Aisha: *Face grows redder and redder until she finally passes out.* @////@

Kenichi: Ah crap, how did she get in here? Sorry about that, and great story! *Picks up Aisha and wonders how to explain this to her*

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Post by Alfisti on Tue 9 Nov 2010 - 11:09

Aisha_Hikari wrote:Aisha: *Face grows redder and redder until she finally passes out.* @////@

Kenichi: Ah crap, how did she get in here? Sorry about that, and great story! *Picks up Aisha and wonders how to explain this to her*
Sounds like someone needs to have that talk.

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Post by Aisha_Hikari on Tue 9 Nov 2010 - 11:16

Kenichi: *Looks around* This is so not what I signed up for..Maybe Jose can explain it to her. He's told Henrietta right?

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Post by Alfisti on Tue 9 Nov 2010 - 11:54

Aisha_Hikari wrote:Kenichi: *Looks around* This is so not what I signed up for..Maybe Jose can explain it to her. He's told Henrietta right?
Monty: Somehow I doubt it. Besides; your cyborg, your awkward problem. If you're really desperate, try Ricci.

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Post by ElfenMagix on Tue 9 Nov 2010 - 12:13

Alfisti wrote:
Aisha_Hikari wrote:Kenichi: *Looks around* This is so not what I signed up for..Maybe Jose can explain it to her. He's told Henrietta right?
Monty: Somehow I doubt it. Besides; your cyborg, your awkward problem. If you're really desperate, try Ricci.
Rachel: Ricci? As in Allessandro Ricci? No Way! It would be like sending that little lamb to the wolves! Just lay her on the bed and put an ice pack to her had and maybe she wont remember what she saw. If she does then explain it as something "grown ups do." You know, give her a few years and she'll learn about sex on the streets, just like everybody else.

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Post by Alfisti on Tue 9 Nov 2010 - 12:21

ElfenMagix wrote:Rachel: Ricci? As in Allessandro Ricci? No Way! It would be like sending that little lamb to the wolves! Just lay her on the bed and put an ice pack to her had and maybe she wont remember what she saw. If she does then explain it as something "grown ups do." You know, give her a few years and she'll learn about sex on the streets, just like everybody else.
Monty: I never said it was a good option. I just said it was an option.

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Post by Aisha_Hikari on Tue 9 Nov 2010 - 12:40

Kenichi: I'll tell her about it if she asks. Who knows, maybe passing out made her forget about it. *Is really hoping that's the case*

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Post by Professor Voodoo on Tue 9 Nov 2010 - 14:20

Elio: My cyborg still thinks boys are gross and to be honest I wouldn't mind it a bit if she kept feeling that way until the day she dies.
Alternately, you might try erasing the last few hours of her memory, mate.

Kenichi: Does that actually work?

Michele: I'd advise against it. Marco didn't feel like explaining the birds & the bee's to Angelica and kinda screwed up her head by doing that a few too many times.

Kenichi: How bad?

Michele: Near the end she thought Tuesday was a color.

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Post by ElfenMagix on Tue 9 Nov 2010 - 14:57

Professor Voodoo wrote:Elio: My cyborg still thinks boys are gross and to be honest I wouldn't mind it a bit if she kept feeling that way until the day she dies.
Rachel: Marisa's 11? Give her a year or two when she starts to get her cycle going and she'll get an interest in boys. No doubt she's probably will be ask Cleas for her Love Romance literature... you should check your little cyborg's room every so often, especially under the pillow, bed and behind the dresser.

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Post by SPARTAN 119 on Wed 10 Nov 2010 - 0:24

Professor Voodoo wrote:Elio: My cyborg still thinks boys are gross and to be honest I wouldn't mind it a bit if she kept feeling that way until the day she dies.
Alternately, you might try erasing the last few hours of her memory, mate.

Kenichi: Does that actually work?

Michele: I'd advise against it. Marco didn't feel like explaining the birds & the bee's to Angelica and kinda screwed up her head by doing that a few too many times.

Kenichi: How bad?

Michele: Near the end she thought Tuesday was a color.

Sometimes I wonder which is actually more damaging to a child, finding out about sex or adults freaking out about the fact their innocent child is now "tainted" with the knowledge of human reproduction?

Michele: In Angelica's case, I'd say the latter of the two.
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Re: The Section 2 Smut Locker

Post by Professor Voodoo on Wed 10 Nov 2010 - 0:45

SPARTAN 119 wrote:
Sometimes I wonder which is actually more damaging to a child, finding out about sex or adults freaking out about the fact their innocent child is now "tainted" with the knowledge of human reproduction?
I know it's completely unrealistic for me to keep my character in the dark about such matters (especially since her pre-cyborg conversion mother was a herion addict hooker) but eventually I do plan on making it a plot element in a future story.
ElfenMagix wrote:Rachel: Marisa's 11? Give her a year or two when she starts to get her cycle going and she'll get an interest in boys.
To Elio's enormous relief I stick to the notion that cyborgs never age, physically or emotionally. Marisa was 11 the day she was activated, she'll be 11 the day she dies.

Elio: And that means the only cycle I'll ever have to deal with has an engine and two wheels.

Triela: Umm, Mr. Alboreto...I'm having female issues...a whole week early, and Hillshire is out of town and I can't find Priscilla, Olga or even Ferro so...could you drive me to the store for some, products?

Elio:

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Post by Kiskaloo on Wed 10 Nov 2010 - 0:58

Kara was sexually active before her conversion and knows it (the Medical Staff told her when she asked, but her memories of her boyfriend have been wiped), but personally I believe the girls are all made sterile as part of the process (just to prevent accidental pregnancies).

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Post by MP5 on Wed 10 Nov 2010 - 1:18

Professor Voodoo wrote:


Triela: Umm, Mr. Alboreto...I'm having female issues...a whole week early, and Hillshire is out of town and I can't find Priscilla, Olga or even Ferro so...could you drive me to the store for some, products?

Allison: *grumpily* Come with me... I'm headed there anyway...

Triela: You, too?

Allison: Yup...

Triela: So that's why you punched Jay in the solar plexus for no apparent reason and then apologized profusely...

Allison: I feel bad I did it, yet somehow, it felt good that I did it... you think us Gen 2's don't have your problems? If anything, our mood swings are much more violent.

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Triela: You, also?

Annette: Indeed. This is what is called the McClintock effect. Crudely put, put enough females in the same space for a certain amount of time, and their menstrual cycles synchronize.

Allison: Great... The Period has now become an excuse to carpool...

Meanwhile, in the boys' dorm...

Scott: Girls an synchronize their menstrual cycles? Somehow, that is oddly fascinating and revolting at the same time. Guys don't have anything like that, do we?

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Post by ElfenMagix on Wed 10 Nov 2010 - 1:30

Kiskaloo wrote:Kara was sexually active before her conversion and knows it (the Medical Staff told her when she asked, but her memories of her boyfriend have been wiped), but personally I believe the girls are all made sterile as part of the process (just to prevent accidental pregnancies).
So was Rachel. But for the girls to be sterile and still have a cycle (as per Triela having her period) would mean having their tubes tied (of course, it means having the fallopian tubes cut, separated some distance and then the ends tied). Its viable option, but one Fernando would kill the medical staff if he were to have found out. Lucky for them the procedure is reversible when caught early (a couple of years or so, before scaring and blockages become too big of an issue to reverse the procedure). Before he dies, he does want Rachel to give him at least 1 grandchild when she grows up.

Furthermore, when Dr. Frankenstein created Francesca, making her sterile was not an option, but saving her life was. Thus she is still intact and can get pregnant.

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Post by Alfisti on Wed 10 Nov 2010 - 1:57

Professor Voodoo wrote:Elio: And that means the only cycle I'll ever have to deal with has an engine and two wheels.

Triela: Umm, Mr. Alboreto...I'm having female issues...a whole week early, and Hillshire is out of town and I can't find Priscilla, Olga or even Ferro so...could you drive me to the store for some, products?

Elio:
Jethro: *stage whispering to Elio* At least you can get away for a bit if need be. I'm stuck with mine for better or worse.

Monty: *looking up from her work* I heard that.

Jethro: *now looking cheeky* Sometimes I think this is what being married must be like.

Elio: No, I'm sure married couples bicker more.

Monty:
I think you two should be quiet now if you know what's good for you.

Elio: On second thoughts, just buy her the ring.

Monty: *pointing to the door* OUT!

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Post by MP5 on Wed 10 Nov 2010 - 2:06

Alfisti wrote:
Professor Voodoo wrote:Elio: And that means the only cycle I'll ever have to deal with has an engine and two wheels.

Triela: Umm, Mr. Alboreto...I'm having female issues...a whole week early, and Hillshire is out of town and I can't find Priscilla, Olga or even Ferro so...could you drive me to the store for some, products?

Elio:
Jethro: *stage whispering to Elio* At least you can get away for a bit if need be. I'm stuck with mine for better or worse.

Monty: *looking up from her work* I heard that.

Jethro: *now looking cheeky* Sometimes I think this is what being married must be like.

Elio: No, I'm sure married couples bicker more.

Monty:
I think you two should be quiet now if you know what's good for you.

Elio: On second thoughts, just buy her the ring.

Monty: *pointing to the door* OUT!

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Post by ElfenMagix on Wed 10 Nov 2010 - 2:32

ROTFL X2!



Rachel: Daddy... I'm all out of pads... again.
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Rachel: I think Francesca dont have any either...
*Fernando gives Rachel another 20Euros for her to go buy them as well.*
Rachel: And auntie Juanita dont have any either, I asked...
Fernando (handing her his wallet with his money and credit cards): ALRIGHT ALREADY!!! JUST GET AWAY FROM ME!

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Post by crazyidiot78 on Wed 10 Nov 2010 - 7:58

ROTFL cheers
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Post by Robert Frazer on Wed 10 Nov 2010 - 10:07

Avise has turned in for the night. He shifts about in bed for a while, wrapping the duvet around him comfortably - but before he drifts off to Nod he realises that the rustling and shifting against his skin isn't coming from his own movement. He lifts the covers and looks down himself.

AVISE: ...Agapita?

AGAPITA: Mmm... yes sir?

AVISE: What are you doing?

AGAPITA: Well, sir, I was catching up on my Bible reading like you told me to, and I was trying to find ways to apply it to my actual life. I've just reached the Song of Songs, and it seemed a practical place to start.

AVISE: ...

AGAPITA: ...?

AVISE: ...Very good, Agapita. Carry on.

AGAPITA: Yes, sir!

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Re: The Section 2 Smut Locker

Post by Professor Voodoo on Wed 10 Nov 2010 - 15:42

ElfenMagix wrote:
Kiskaloo wrote:Kara was sexually active before her conversion
So was Rachel.
I had the impression that the extent of Rachel's sexual experience was non-voluntary...which really doesn't fit the classic definition of sexually active.

While we're on the topic...here's the most tasteless thing you'll read all day. I'm serious, I'm a sailor and even I consider this crude, but hell, this is the thread for it...
Spoiler:
A man calls his doctor and says "Doctor, I need some birth control for my 9-year old daughter."

The doctor is shocked. "Your 9-year old daughter is sexually active!?"

The man thinks for a second and replies "Nah...she just kind of lays there like her mother."
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Post by Nachtsider on Wed 10 Nov 2010 - 16:54

I freely admit it, Voodoo. I lol'd.

About the whole sterility issue. For all we know, the conditioning drugs induce sterility in the cyborgs. Simple and convenient. No need for tubectomies or what-have-you.

SPARTAN 119 wrote:Sometimes I wonder which is actually more damaging to a child, finding out about sex or adults freaking out about the fact their innocent child is now "tainted" with the knowledge of human reproduction?

Michele: In Angelica's case, I'd say the latter of the two.

1. See pic below.
2. Mentally replace the dad with Marco, the mom with Patricia, and the son with Angie.
3. ?????
4. LULZ

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Post by boomer_gonz on Wed 10 Nov 2010 - 17:12

LMAO!!! They even got the family picture in the background.

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Post by ElfenMagix on Wed 10 Nov 2010 - 17:50

Professor Voodoo wrote:
ElfenMagix wrote:
Kiskaloo wrote:Kara was sexually active before her conversion
So was Rachel.
I had the impression that the extent of Rachel's sexual experience was non-voluntary...which really doesn't fit the classic definition of sexually active.
For the joke - I'll give it to you. Considering Yu's work as Jewel Box, its right up there!

As for Rachel... Yes she was raped multiple times at a young age. But explained many times, a rape victim could become a soscial shut in or a sexual extrovert, she because the latter. She has had several boyfriends who she was active with in the shorttime she had before becoming a cyborg. In short she was a freak, with a sexual appitite that rivals Fernando (which he keeps hidden and under tight control). During her time as a non-cyborg human, even though she loved and wanted her god-father, she was out there testing the limits of her sexual urges mainly because he wont for her. Now that she is a cyborg, things are still the same with the exception of her going out for thrills sorta speak. With every hug, kiss and sleep over, Rachel uses such contact to lower her urges she might have for him. Hard to explain, but that is how it is for them.

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Post by jedoZhidin on Fri 12 Nov 2010 - 17:54

Luce was in a sexual relationship with her handler before she was converted.

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Post by ElfenMagix on Fri 12 Nov 2010 - 19:52

jedoZhidin wrote:Luce was in a sexual relationship with her handler before she was converted.
Considering how the SWA works, this is highly improbable.
The SWA tries to keep a cyborg's past invisible to her and this erases her memories as much as possible. Then there is keeping any past elements that she might encounter away from her. A handler who has a sexual relationship before she became a cyborg is an element that she will be in contact all the time and is an element that the SWA does not want.

Mind you, other authors have had their fratelloes in a sexual relationship (often an abusive one). But they have never had any contact before becoming cyborgs.

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Post by Kiskaloo on Fri 12 Nov 2010 - 20:25

If they are in a sexual relationship as a fratello, then it might be a good idea for the cyborg to remember that they were in one before her conversion because the handler is obviously going to remember.

On the flip side, we know that the docs cam bury any memory pretty deep, so if the handler didn't want to the cyborg to know they were in a sexual relationship prior to conversion, that's not going to be a problem (at least early in her life as a cyborg).

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Post by jedoZhidin on Mon 15 Nov 2010 - 1:02

Normally to bond a cyborg to a handler requires conditioning. It is generally accepted that the more condition a cyborg has the shorter thier potential maximum lifespan. Thier attempting to use thier prevuis relationship to bind her to him without having to condition her to both be loyal to him and to supress the relevant memories. Thus they can strengthen the conditiong in other areas without increasing her maximum dosage. Thus increasing her maximum potential lifespan. The Cyborgs are to damn expensive to constantly build, so they want to get all they can out of her for as long as they can.

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Post by ElfenMagix on Mon 15 Nov 2010 - 2:34

jedoZhidin wrote:Normally to bond a cyborg to a handler requires conditioning. It is generally accepted that the more condition a cyborg has the shorter thier potential maximum lifespan. Thier attempting to use thier prevuis relationship to bind her to him without having to condition her to both be loyal to him and to supress the relevant memories. Thus they can strengthen the conditiong in other areas without increasing her maximum dosage. Thus increasing her maximum potential lifespan. The Cyborgs are to damn expensive to constantly build, so they want to get all they can out of her for as long as they can.
Actually, that is not true.

First off, the cyborgs are erased when needed (Rico was not erased and remembers her past totally, Henrietta and Petrushka were erased because they thought and even tried suicide before they became cyborgs). They they are programmed with what they need to 1) operate the cybernetics, 2) operate as killing machines without remorse or depression and 3) and and all functional information they may require: Language, weapons, a new persona, emotional response to handler and mission requirements, new memories if needed, etc. Second Generation cyborgs are more programmed with information than the first.

Conditioning is used in 2 parts: 1) Keeping and maintaining the operations of the cybernetics with their bodies and brain, keeping it pain free. 2) reinforcing the loyalty and programmed response going. Even the minimally dosed cyborgs are still has some loyalty tied to them due the drug used. This is shown in V11. When Triela was going through withdrawal, she still had Hillshire in her mind and heart and thinking how dumb she was acting in running away. Her cybernetics failing because of the lack of the drug but it was still working on her loyalty. If it weren't for Roberta finding her, she would have been dead in the street with her last thoughts being of Hillshire.

Conditioning is not used to suppress memories. It is for the cybernetics first and loyalty factors second.

When a government selects a weapon for its arsenal, the first thing they ask is lifespan if the product vs. its effectiveness during its lifespan. The First Generation cyborgs were only meant to be anywhere between 5 to 10 years. Second Gens are double that, proving that they never get shot. As weapons, they are to be maintained and repaired when needed. They need to be built and programmed to be as such. There is no love put in here outside that of their handlers. In the early works of BitterSweet Fools, Pre2000 GsG and under the name of Jewelbox, Yu has had them in sexual situations with their handlers before.

You need to define what kind of sexual relationship this fratello is in, and conditioning be damned, that cyborg needs to take her medicine like everyone else or face failure during a mission and be killed. Now, minimum conditioning dosage depends the cyborgs' height, weight and how much of her body was replaced as well as how strong is that loyalty issue is to be set. You can be in a sexual relationship with somebody, but to tell them that they have to kill somebody or there wont be any more loving, they just might all the police on you. A sexual relationship does not guarantee anything. In fact, placed in this situation you just might scare that person away.

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Post by jedoZhidin on Mon 15 Nov 2010 - 2:43

Still working out the kinks. Plus my characters backgrounds are still being witten up, rather small rewrite for her's, nothing big. For future refrence If I have my facts wrong please correct me. I'm still learning these things.

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Post by Alfisti on Mon 15 Nov 2010 - 8:06

jedoZhidin wrote:Normally to bond a cyborg to a handler requires conditioning. It is generally accepted that the more condition a cyborg has the shorter thier potential maximum lifespan. Thier attempting to use thier prevuis relationship to bind her to him without having to condition her to both be loyal to him and to supress the relevant memories. Thus they can strengthen the conditiong in other areas without increasing her maximum dosage. Thus increasing her maximum potential lifespan. The Cyborgs are to damn expensive to constantly build, so they want to get all they can out of her for as long as they can.
Though my views of how the conditioning works differ slightly Elfen's take, the key points are pretty much the same. I think the major thing you're running into here is that you're mixing up the initial brainwashing and programing process with the chemical medium utilised to maintain the girls' functionality. Things such as loyalty to the agency, loyalty to handler, supression of memories and in the case of the 2nd Gens; tactics and weapons knowledge and so on are in my view instilled during that initial process. After that the actual drugs the girls take on a regular basis effectively grease the bearings, let their brains interface cleanly with the cybernetics. It's the damage that these drugs do and the build up of them in the brain that will eventually kill the cyborgs. It doesn't really help that the term "conditioning" is bandied about in GSG quite a lot regarding anything to do with the girls' minds.

In large enough doses the conditioning drugs, to my mind at least, can suppress emotions and pain as well as, to some extent, free thought (which would link into "emotions" anyway). Hence why Rico, on her higher dosage always seems a little zoned out. I think they also, to some extent, prevent the girls from questioning their existance and generally help keep the initial brainwashing in place. However, how heavily each girl is dosed with these drugs, as Elfen pointed out, has little to do with how the initial brainwashing was undertaken.

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Post by ElfenMagix on Mon 15 Nov 2010 - 12:30

jedoZhidin wrote:Still working out the kinks. Plus my characters backgrounds are still being witten up, rather small rewrite for her's, nothing big. For future refrence If I have my facts wrong please correct me. I'm still learning these things.
Easier to get the anime and manga.

Its good that you are writing them up. If there are then its easy to fix.

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Post by tremec6speed on Sat 20 Nov 2010 - 1:03

Lauro whose E V I L E guile knew no limits fixed his attention on Olga who he had learned in the grapevine was unhappily married! Muh-m-muhahahaha!
Of course at first the beautiful Russian resisted his advances full of self confidence, but eventually she proved no match for his conviction and entrancing comments, like a verbal web to a butterfly.
One night, she indeed gave in to him.
Not long afterward Olga declared her intentions to leave the agency as soon as permitted, a look of intense guilt written on her face as she hastily proclaimed her desire to do something else with her life.
Agent Olga had always been on good terms with the Chief Lorenzo who found her evasion for concrete reasons most suspicious.
Rumors tend to move at a speed defying most laws of physics!
Before long, stories were being whispered among the adults concerning the impeccable agent who seemed to appear nervously uncomfortable around others who themselves were hitched. One day Elsa de Sica overheard one of the now many versions of the story floating around and her reaction was of deep internalized anger/pain.
When the child cyborg out of the blue asked Olga for advice in firing her handgun, The Russian operative KNEW something was amiss. This living murder weapon was not one to ask anyone other than her beloved 'Brother' for help of any kind, so with a feeling of unease at the request, she proceeded slowly while the cyborg gritted her teeth for attack......

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Post by crazyidiot78 on Sat 20 Nov 2010 - 9:05

So the real reason Elsa killed Lauro finally comes out. cheers
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Post by tremec6speed on Sat 20 Nov 2010 - 16:12

"So the real reason Elsa killed Lauro finally comes out. "
Me: Ahh...heh heh....uh huh huh...!(insert Beavis and Butthead laughter)
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You got it Crazyidiot78, I figure that's a good a reason as any for that mean machine. snipe Guh? Very Happy
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Post by tremec6speed on Sun 21 Nov 2010 - 0:43

Here here MP5, keep up the good work!
2 thumbs up for *Music and cuchi cuchi*!
head bang
dancin\\'
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Post by MP5 on Sun 21 Nov 2010 - 0:49

tremec6speed wrote:Here here MP5, keep up the good work!
2 thumbs up for *Music and cuchi cuchi*!
head bang
dancin\\'
lol

Thanks, I guess. If I ever work up the courage to write anything more like this, it will be most certainly music-themed. Though I might try branching out into humor at one point or another.

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Post by MP5 on Sun 21 Aug 2011 - 2:23

A new entry, this one focuses less on smut and more on humor factor. Still, assume it's NSFW.

Spoiler:

Why Monique Blacker Avoids the SWA Compound as Much as Possible: Reason #34

"Monty, wait up!"

Monique 'Monty' Blacker had just begun to walk away from her handler's desk when Carmelita Pucci got to her feet and went to catch up. Both were holding documents freshly drafted and printed from their workstations.

"Heading to the copy room?" asked Carmelita.

"I thought that much would be obvious." Monty deadpanned.

"You mind if I come with?"

Monty said nothing and motioned for the Tejano girl to walk with her as they ambled towards the copy room.

"So, if I may ask, what have you been given?" Carmelita inquired.

"The guv had me draft up an intel report from our notes; Lorenzo wanted the pages collated and in color for the briefing. You?"

"Apology letters. Lots and lots of apology letters." replied Carmelita sheepishly, holding up a single page. "About a hundred of these to start."

"If you have that many to make, and they're already in form letter for convenience, then I do believe you need to talk with someone about Vincent." Monty noted with an ounce of what could have been genuine concern for her officemate. "That, or administer sedatives to him."

"I know, but like the saying goes, 'Boys will be boys...'" Carmelita sighed. "Besides, this is just so that I have a stockpile."

"Vincent is a grown man. He should learn to act like one."

"You're preaching to the choir, Monty... He's like a two-year-old, though: He's the source of most of my stress, but if someone tried to take him away from me, that someone would die horribly for even laying a finger on him."

"Says you. I'm not crazy about being in the proximity of small children, much less a 26-year-old hyperactive manchild."

The two continued walking, and Monty sighed out of the blue. "God, I really wish they'd put the bloody copier in the middle of the office instead of its own room."

"Why's that?" asked Carmelita.

"Well, for one thing, it'd be more accessible, even if it meant queuing up sometimes, and secondly, it would mean an end to all the quickie shagging that goes on behind that door when it's locked."

"Wait..." said Carmelita. "People have sex in the copy room?"

Oh, this poor, naive girl, thought Monty. "Yes, Carmelita. It's one of the biggest office-setting cliches played out in real life."

"I don't believe you. How can you tell?"

"Well, the first thing that tips you off is any pleasured moaning or groaning you hear coming from behind the walls. Then everything goes quiet for a bit before a bloke and a bird (usually) come out as a pair. The bloke usually has his hair out of place and some new wrinkles on his clothes, maybe some lipstick on his collar, and the bird is buttoning up and adjusting herself and has hair like yours at the end of it all. Finally, when you go in the room, there's this distinct smell of musk, sweat, and cheap perfume all melded together in one nauseating package."

"Back up a bit there." said Carmelita, both of them pausing their stride. "Did you say hair like mine? Are you saying I have 'sex hair'?"

"It's not just *me* saying you have sex hair. Other members of the staff say you have sex hair. In fact, that's their little nickname for you."

"Well, not all of us can have low-maintenance hair like you, Monty. My hair just seems to fall into this... unkempt mess."

"You don't have to change your hair just because you have an unofficial nickname."

Before Carmelita could continue, she and Monty were interrupted by noises coming from the adjacent wall, noises that turned out to be a woman screaming in pleasure, and Carmelita turned a little white, remembering the signs of quickie office sex Monty had told her while Monty herself shook her head, covering her officemate's virgin ears with her own hands. It was a futile gesture, however, as the pleasured moaning only grew louder, and Monty's hands were not the most effective form of hearing protection in the world, and Carmelita could now hear the woman on the other side of the wall quite clearly.

"Oh Charlie, don't stop! Oh, oh, oh, oh my god, yes! Yes! Yes! Unnnh, oh yeah, right there! Right there, Charlie, right there! Oh, oh, oh, oh--OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH YESSSSSSSS!"

At this point, Carmelita was as red as a tomato, and Monty glanced around the office, amazed that no one else was hearing these obscene noises (there was no one in the area at that moment, she would soon learn). Suddenly, another audible noise startled them both-- the sound of breaking glass, quickly followed by pained yelping and another conversation.

"Ow, ow, ow, ow, ow, ow, owwww..."

"Marianna, are you all right, luv?"

"No-ho-ho... I think I got cut down there or something, and it really hurts!"

"All right, just breathe, and relax, we'll get you out of there and to the medical wing... Hello, Annette? Charlie. You'll have one incoming plus me. See you in a few? All right, cool. Now then, Marianna, let's get you out of there. One, two, three, lift! All right, let's brush some of that glass off and get you dressed... I'll carry you to the medical wing since walking is probably gonna hurt for you right now."


Outside, the door opened, revealing Charlie Montagne carrying Marianna Giordano in his arms bridal-style, both of them fully clothed but looking more or less as Monty had described the appearance of culprits in an office rendezvous. Before Monty or Carmelita could stop them, the neurologist and casanova were off like a shot to the medical wing. Carmelita glanced at Monty questioningly, who returned her look flatly before the both of them walked into the photocopy room to find a scene of chaos bathed in the almost-overpowering funk of hasty lovemaking that Monty had described. Sheets of A4-size pages were everywhere, bits of glass (no doubt from the photocopier) were strewn on the floor, accompanied by a few drops of blood(!), and through it all, the copier machine was somehow still spitting out papers despite the fact its glass platen was destroyed. Monty quickly hit the 'stop' button on the machine while Carmelita bent down to pick up one of the sheets that the copier had printed. the one she held in her hand was an early one, as it did not show the spiderweb of glass that other pages did when the platen finally gave way under the weight of Marianna's posterior. She looked closely at the page in her hand, the black-and-white image not really making sense at first glance. However, once her brain began forming shapes and figures out of the seemingly random patterns on the page, her face turned even redder upon realization at what she was seeing.

"Dios Mio-- Monty! Monty, look at this! Is that... is that what I think it is going on in this picture?! Is Charlie--"

"What Montagne is doing with his mouth to the shrink's alcove in the picture is not my concern." said Monty in a calm tone that provided stark contrast to the building anger evident on her face. "What is my concern is the fact that supplies have been fecklessly wasted and an integral part of the office is now effectively crippled until further notice--all because those two gits couldn't keep it in their pants and wait for a hotel room!"

Monty had not raised her voice very much, but even so, Carmelita could tell that her officemate had effectively reached her temper's boiling point. The resident 'Bond Girl' of Section 2 was occupied by a state of tranquil fury-- one potentially even more dangerous than one of Henrietta's berserker rages.

Stepping away from the copier and the mess surrounding it, Monty turned on her heel and handed the original of her intel report to Carmelita before walking briskly out of the room.

"Monty?"

Shortly thereafter, Monty passed by again, a willow cricket bat in the grip of her right hand. Though she had an idea of what was going to happen, Carmelita had to ask anyway.

"What are you going to do?"

"Be a dear and hold onto those. I am going to have a talk with Montagne about workplace ethics. Then, I will perhaps proceed to fill another vacancy in one of the medical wing beds."

With that, Monty left Carmelita standing there amidst the mess that was once the copy room. As the Tejano looked around herself, she went back to one of the copies that had inadvertently been made and studied the image from every angle with a luminescent blush on her face.

I wonder what that feels like...


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