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Post by Nachtsider on Thu 18 Nov 2010 - 4:42

Title says it all. List as many character interactions as you like, be it cyborg-cyborg, cyborg-handler or handler-handler. Canon characters need not apply; if you can, limit yourself to OCs whom your OCs have actually interacted with in a fanfic. I don't currently have the time to pen stuff at length, so I'll let you guys kick off. Use this thread to flame other authors by proxy and I will ban you.

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Post by FearTheLASERFACE on Thu 18 Nov 2010 - 11:57

Uhhhhhhhh.............
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Post by Nachtsider on Thu 18 Nov 2010 - 14:32

Pardon?

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Post by FearTheLASERFACE on Thu 18 Nov 2010 - 15:54

Eh, I just meant I have absolutely nothing to say because I had never put any thought into this.
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Post by Robert Frazer on Thu 18 Nov 2010 - 16:23

Hmm... Agapita as a cyborg is deferential to all handlers. I think that Avise has a cosntructive relationship with most handlers, but there are two that I can say for certain that he woudn't get along with - Jethro and Jacob.

Avise is something of an an anglophobe and so really gets off on the wrong foot with Jethro right from the start; he is also jealous of J&M's globetrotting adventures, as the part of his soul that desires romantic adventure is feeling deprived. Those are more needling irritations though, and don't come from bad history between them or fundamental abhorrence; so I see his relationship as being essentially functional but encumbered with some sneering, sniping and general cattiness.

On the other hand, Avise has naked disgust for Jacob. To start off with he's Canadian - which, to Avise, is English by proxy plus a dash of yes-massa subservience for added disdain - but his antipathy is chiefly derived from Jacob's affection for the bottle. Avise doesn't see a fellow handler, he sees a wino necking liquor from a paper bag. While Avise has great respect for special forces operatives for being, in a phrase, feckin' nails - and indeed he has some fair admiration for Elio - Jethro's proclivities undermine this and paint him a disobedient soldier who needs to be slung in the glasshouse and dried out with some good healthy punishment duty. I'm not sure how far Avise would sympathise with Jacob's emotional traumas. He would definitely acknowledge them - after all, his own domestic history is far from a portrait of contented bliss! - but might conclude that Jacob is using them as a crutch.

Avise feels great sympathy for Melanie suffering under what he sees as Jacob's drink-fuelled tyranny, but he will nonetheless avoid her and not interact with her in any way outside of missions - as great as his contempt for Jacob is, he knows that to interfere with another cyborg's upbringing would set a precedent that would bring the entire Agency to calamity and ruin and that's a border he will never cross. He compensates by asking Agapita to take care in being nice to Melanie, and to quietly endure it if Melanie is understandably grumpy. I'm not really ready to say for sure yet how much of a hassle that would be to Agapita.

How Jethro and Jacob themselves would respond to this cold reception, I can't say of course, but at least that's how I think Avise would approach the two.

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Post by ElfenMagix on Thu 18 Nov 2010 - 22:52

This I have to think about... Most of me OCs have had little dealings with other OCs. So here is my (sad) attempt in doing so. It might end up being done in pieces.

Francesca is considered the 'dumb bunny' of the group. It is not because she is dumb but rather she needs help in some daily decisions associated with life skills. This is because when they were reprogramming her, they hit her a bit too hard to suppress her past memories. So when Francesca has her shining moment in showing off her intelligence (as in actually succeeding in solo missions), much of the staff is like Guh?

What she see in others is...
Alpha Since knowing him from the beginning, its been a love/hate relationship in the past... as in "Love to see you dead, hate to pay your funeral expenses." Since she has returned as a matured woman, she highly respects him despite the past because she was conditioned pretty hard back then
Liesel She respects her as s sister cyborg with years of experience. She just dont what Liesel in Alpha. But as Fernando explained it, love is blind, deaf, and no feelings as to who his arrows hit. She wishes them the best the future ha to offer.
The Girl Boys They come in with gun demanding her panties, she gives then and they go away... with Rachel returning the panties to he before they could take them to their room. She does not understand why they want her underwear other than maybe they want to wear them because theirs are in the laundry.
Britney Only heard rumors of her from Rachel when she goes on those 'why is she getting some and not I' rants. Usually she takes Rachel to the Gelato cart at the Piaza di Spagna.
Everyone else Not know enough about them because she has not dealt with them. And she wonders why when the halls goes silent when she walks down the hall... often in an open robe with what little she is wearing to the bathroom to shower or to Fernando's room (Yes, she's wearing underwear underneath).

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Post by Kiskaloo on Thu 18 Nov 2010 - 23:24

I'll have to get back to you on that, since I have yet to write anything with the other OCs.

boomer and I have agreed that Alpha and Kara care for each other very much, though in a familial way - effectively brother and sister.

rusty-spring and I have agreed that Laine and Kara are close friends and comrades. In private (chat), they are the true terrors of Section 2 (Marisa could only stand in awe at their level of mayhem).

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Post by Danjo3 on Fri 19 Nov 2010 - 2:24

Britney – Looks up to Rachel in much the same she does Triela. She sees her as a highly skilled operative and mentor. She also considers her a good friend.

Britney is also aware of Rachel’s, ‘why is she getting some and not I’ rants, and wants to remind her that all she has to do is say the word and she’ll hook her up. Hey, what are friends for?

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Post by ElfenMagix on Sat 20 Nov 2010 - 3:28

Continuing with the Fernando Team:

Juanita the only one that she has dealt with over time is Alpha. In the pre-SWA days, to her, Alpha was a riddle wrapped in a mystery inside an enigma. His very young looks at the time did not match his age or his level of maturity. She would later find out about the SWA and their cyborg termination program and that Alpha originated from this place. Then things started to make sense. As a trained individual, she respects him as such and hopes that he will be there to take down targets for her because she wont. Her gun has only seen target action which she is good at. But taking a life is something she wont want to do because she is too much of a church girl, despite Fernando showing her the 2 Samuel 23:12 passage.
Biblical passage 2 Samuel 23:10 - 12 wrote:12:But he stood in the midst of the ground, and defended it, and slew the Philistines: and the LORD wrought a great victory.
She does not think of Liesel, other than her being another cyborg. Since she only seen her with Alpha, she thinks that Liesel is Alpha's partner.

Rachel knows several OC Cyborgs:
Alpha to her seems to be more of a handler type than a cyborg, since he is constructed differently than the others. Maybe a bit overbearing but charming at the same time. Since her father highly respects Alpha, so does she.
Liesel is an unknown to her despite the time they spent together. Liesel is more or less one of the girls, despite her being as serious as Ferro at times (when needed).
The Girl Boys are nothing but a bunch of pervs seeking to steal panties and verbally sexually harass the girls. Having a c-sized chest despite her height and weight, makes her a target to their shenanigans. It s no reason why she is willing to shoot and ask questions later when they are near by.
Britney If there is anyone close to her as a sister, Britney is it. She understands quite well where Britney is coming from because she was there herself and knows all too well how conditioning pulls on ones wants and desires. As much as Britney offers, Rachel has to deny herself in order to be her father's good little girl. She is worried about Britney picking up a social disease or an abusive relationship with one of her lovers than anything else. She'll gladly shoot Amedeo in a heart beat because he tends to be too touchy-feely around her and has shoved her knee into his groin on more than one occasion. Some men never learn.
The others she does not know yet all too well. Given time she will learn who's who. The exception is Kara and Michele. Remembering a little incident (a chatroom rpg-ish discussion a year or more ago) in her early days, Michele referred Fernando as Riff Raff and that the valets would take his Porsche 928 to the junk yard and put it out of its misery in some ultra-posh party they were going too as part of a mission. Though Fernando told her to ignore the comment, she sees that it has upset him into his cold silent demeanor. Since then, she considers them as rich snobs, like those uber-rich assholes who live in Rupert Towers on 92nd street who only open the public park in their area for themselves though it is a public park for everyone! She will work with them when ordered too, but thats about it.

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Post by Jacen Starslayer on Sat 20 Nov 2010 - 16:09

What do my OC cyborgs think of the other OC cyborgs.

Over the years, Jay has gotten to meet several of the other cyborgs on a personal level due in part with his status as "Mission Support"

The Girl Boys - A bunch of mistreated male cyborgs like himself who have been largely abandoned (kinda like himself except he still has his dysfunctional handler) however the only things that prevents him from actually trying to become friends with them are their insanely high libido and the fact that all they talk about is who they want to screw...Which really gets on Jay's nerves.

Eliza - A crazy girl who is almost as inventive if not more then him. They constantly try to outdo each other when it comes to their inventions. Jay sometimes wins, at least in minor robotics. Jay prefers not to work with her on missions where she is the distraction while he sneaks in to cut the power, as her preference for Over-penetrating weapons have a habit of hitting him...

Soliel - One of his rivals for 3rd place CQC specialist spot. For the most part they are evenly matched despite the fact that Jay is a foot taller than her, unless she activates her 'unfair' advantage of the experimental lower cortex activator to dramatically increase her reflexes or she uses her bladed tonfas...

Luce - One of two cyborgs that he knows he can't beat (at this point in time) in close quarter combat due completely to her concealed wrist blades, the only way that he could theoretically beat her is to avoid the blades long enough to use his superior strength to put her into a submission move. He also tends to steer clear of her because of the fact that she 'enjoys' killing much more than he does, almost to a degree where he fears that she could almost turn on her allies.

Allison - He has had a crush on the British racer since she arrived at the SWA compound, although he finds himself unable to really talk around her without blushing and embarrassing himself.

Scott - Jay's roommate. In Jay's opinion, Scott is one of the few 'Girl Boys' like him who are not complete screw ups. Scott's only flaw in Jay's mind is his use of fully automatic weapons, which goes through ammunition extremely quickly. On a side note, Jay is disturbed whenever Scott wears a kilt, as the boy goes commando those days.

Ike - Jay places the boy two steps higher than the 'girl boys', but under Scott. He accepts him when he keeps the lewd jokes to a minimum or makes them at least funny. Although Jay typically relies on Beatrice for making his explosive arrows he is curious as to how well Ike would create them.

Erina - Is a cyborg that he considers to be 'an insult to all cyborgs' due entirely to the fact that she 'downloads' her training regiments, since he had to bust his ass to teach himself almost every skill he knows. On a personal level, he doesn't hate her, rather he hates the unfair advantage that she had been given.

Becky - Jay loves her cooking, that's about the interaction he has with her. That and whenever he brings game back to the compound, she's the only person who can cook it to perfection.

Matthew - Jay rates Matthew one step higher than the other 'girl boys' but just barely. Almost everything Matthew does gets on Jay's nerves and offends the semi-professional opinion on how missions should be done, which according to Jay translates to completing your missions utilizing the minimum amount of force required, maximum precision and keeping innocent causalities to a minimum. To this day, Matthew is the only English-speaking cyborg who Jay CANNOT understand when they talk in their native language of English.

Johanneke - Jay respects her alot. In combat ability, he rates her just under his teacher, Alpha. She is also the only person who can match Jay with thrown weapons, taking away one of his primary advantages. Just like with Alpha, his goal is to eventually land a hit on her, even though the chance of that happening is nil.

Kyo & Ryo - Jay doesn't really interact with them on a daily basis. He considers them to be masters in their own field, one that he has no desire to enter.

Saladin - Jay both respects Saladin, and understands the boy on a different level than the other boys. Having witnessed the change in Claes after Raballo's death, he understands the pain that the boy went through when his handler died. As a fellow top-notch support member and mechanist, Jay will often try run ideas past Saladin to determine if the idea is viable before sitting down and putting the concept into a blueprint. Jay does however make it a point not to have Saladin 'upgrade' his weapons by altering the magazine or changing the caliber.

Simone - Despite the fact that Jay was the one who found her unconscious and half-frozen while on a wilderness survival training mission that he was teaching, they have a love/hate relationship. The reasons behind their constant bickering: Simone's belief that Jay is just like the rest of the 'girl boys.' Jay respects her marksmanship, rating it almost as high as Saladin's however the fact that she is constantly calling him a 'pervert' really gets under his skin.

Alpha - Jay looks up to him greatly, always seeking his approval. Jay also considers him the marker of his skill meaning the length of their battles and the number of styles that Alpha has to resort to defeat is the estimate on how good he has become.

Fernando - After watching Fernando take down Jean in hand-to-hand combat (Something that he wishes that he was allowed to do), Jay treats the man with respect and admiration. He also ranks Fernando as 'avoid conflict with or flee on sight' if he were ever ordered to engage the man. When it comes to computers and programming, Jay considers Fernando to be on a level that he could never hope to achieve.

Rachel - He has her on the 'avoid conflict with unless it is unavoidable' list because of her heightened aggression, short fuse, and explosive temper. Also her habit of 'shoot first, ask questions later' while on the compound puts him a little on ease as he has a habit of being a 'friendly fire' magnet.

Francesca - As the first prototype of their series, Jay regards her with a combination of intrigue and curiosity. However, her 'air-headedness' while not on mission mode raises concern within himself as she was created using the same technology as he was.

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Post by boomer_gonz on Sat 20 Nov 2010 - 22:28

Okay, here I go. I will do those that I am immediately more familiar with and with more to come later or upon request. I am basing quite a bit of this on chat convo's and future fic concepts.. Damn this memory of mine. Razz

Starting with cyborgs.

Alpha

-Liesel: When first meeting Liesel, Alpha attempted to keep his distance. This wasn't due to any dislike of Liesel on Alpha's part, but rather an uneasiness of his emotions. Being burned by those very emotions in the past, he wasn't going to let it happen again. When Alpha returned from an assignment as backup, he was told of her capture and immediately went into action. After the completion of the assignment, he understood to not take anything for granted and thus pursued a relationship with Liesel.

Now, Liesel is everything he ever wanted. Although they still maintain separate residences, they have a very close relationship that at this point is borderline (and will become so in the future) intimate. Alpha is aware that despite advances made, Liesel's time is limited and it frustrates Alpha to no end that he can do nothing about it. In this, Alpha carries a slight sense of sorrow to which Liesel is somewhat knowledgeable.Together they are silently thankful for the silence of those who are aware of their relationship.

-Francesca: Francesca and Alpha had a very harsh relationship during the conversion of the Crysalis Foundation into the current SWA. Although to Francesca's credit, Alpha didn't exactly make himself easy to get along with.

Currently Alpha and Francesca share a close friendship based on the history that the two of them share. Although spats do sometimes turn up when Alpha accidently(most of the time ) refers to Francesca as "Franky". Also, he feels that he owes it to Felix(Francesca's previous handler) as it wasn't until his return that he discovered that Felix himself intervened upon Alpha's scheduled termination. He can no longer thank him personally, but he can watch over Francesca in his place whenever Fernando cannot.

-Rachel: Although Alpha and Fernando worked together on occasion during Alpha's brief contract with the CIA, he met Rachel for the first time when he returned to the SWA. With Rachel, Alpha shares a casual relationship and largely only through Fernando. Little does Alpha know; when Alpha is in the compound Rachel sneaks around corners to see Alpha use her balance beam early in the morning when most of the compound is still asleep.

-Kara: The closest thing Alpha has to family. They developed a comfortable professional relationship with each other that became galvanized after their first mission and even more so after they're assignment in Japan where Kara greatly helped Alpha by getting his "miai" to finally give up on him. Alpha dotes on her much as an older brother does of his little sister and she of him in the form of spontaneous hugs and cheek kisses, acting adorably girlish in the process. If there's something that Kara wants that Michele won't get her, there's a strong chance that Alpha will. If Michele hasn't contacted Alpha before Kara has a chance to ask first that is. Also, Liesel has a habit of teasing Alpha on this relationship for her amusement, much to Alpha's chagrin.

-Jay: A student who aims to please, Alpha regards him as much a ward as does Priscilla. Although Alpha is keen on hiding this fact from Jay. Offering him his wealth of experience, both in battle and otherwise, Alpha has found an heir of sorts in Jay. Should Alpha perish in battle he has already made it known to Altheus and Liesel that he wants Jay to have his Fairbairn-Sykes Commando blade.

-Eliza
: Alpha's latest student, and possibly last with the arrival of Kris, Eliza and Alpha share a certain bond in being the only two cyborgs constructed completely outside of the SWA structure. Having researched Alpha upon her notification that he was to be her trainer, Eliza's discovery that Alpha was a veritable mercenary superstar in both legitimate and illegitimate venture dignified him in her eyes.

-Saladin: Alpha enjoys the company of anyone who's expertise in a subject is greater than his own and Saladin is no exception. Coming to him with modification suggestions and to also test new round loads of his own making, Alpha and Saladin share a professional relationship.

-Allison
: Alpha greatly admires her ability as a driver and secretly challenges her often on her favorite X360 racing games, although he prefers the old-fashioned controller to a racing wheel.

-Soliel: A curiosity to say the least, Soliel intrigues Alpha as not only a CQC technician, but for her seemingly bloodthirsty nature.

-Brittany: One of the reasons that Alpha is grateful to not be living in the Agency compound. He likes and even enjoys her free-spirited nature. However, it's her apparently wanton lack of modesty and almost defiant nature in her attempts at it (i.e. borrowing Henrietta's school-girl uniform or walking around in a revealing(understatement) swimsuit at the beach) left Alpha with a want to scream "Put some clothes on!". The knowledge that the breath would most likely be wasted is what keeps him from acting out the desire. Though Alpha hides it well, he is also very knowledgeable about Brittany's exploits from cafeteria gossip and certain chatty girls. Alpha is also world-weary enough to know that despite Amadeo thinking that he's the upper hand when with Brittany, it is in fact Amadeo who is being used.

-Monty
: Although Alpha respects Monty's skill and professionalism, the two of them can usually be found arguing with each other. Born of Monty's lack of exposure to most the the cyborgs(and agents for that matter), Alpha has become accustomed to being a mission leader over time. However, Alpha dislikes Monty and Jehtro's more quiet approach toward assignments while Monty specifically dislikes Alpha's methods. This at times will lead to a argument match between the two, which at the end results in both parties considering themselves the victor and those in attendance wondering what that was all about.

-The Girl Boys
: Alpha views then as not so much useless as to being instead, untapped laying most of the blame on their respective handlers for forcing the general consensus on them as opposed to finding out what was wrong. With a simple suggestion from Alpha, it was discovered that the main reason for the Girl Boys failure was in that they were outfitted with cybernetics that were specific the the body mechanics of females. Although this has been rectified in later male cyborgs, nothing has been done to remedy the Girl Boys plight.

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Post by Alfisti on Sat 20 Nov 2010 - 23:15

@Robert Frazer wrote:How Jethro and Jacob themselves would respond to this cold reception, I can't say of course, but at least that's how I think Avise would approach the two.
How would Jethro respond to this? Well, in the short term at least I'm sure he'd find it all highly amusing and may well drop a line or two to aide in winding Avise up. If they had to work together for an extended period Avise's demeanor may start to wear on him however leading to him being classed under the heading "bit of a twat".

The general rule of thumb for Jethro is that he's superficially an agreeable sort of person with a slightly impish sense of mischief. However, he's also a person used to living on the road. So while he gets along with most people and ingratiates himself to them he also tends not to form attachments or feel any true empathy for those around him. People move in and out of his life, but don't expect him to drop everything to rush to their aid. In the baggage department, Jethro travels light.

Except for where it comes to Monty. She's suddenly give him a solid "human" presence in his life that, underneath it all, is causing him all sorts of squidgy emotional issues he hasn't needed to deal with in years.

The general rule of thumb for Monty's view on most people is much simpler: everyone (staff, handler and cyborg alike) is guilty untill proven otherwise of being a blithering idiot.

I make generalisations here as, for the most part, J+M aren't in contact with the SWA's personnel enough to form stronger opinions. At the end of the day they tend to be quite detached and hence for them, the vast majority of people would be classifed under the same headings.

One person they have had known extended contact with is Jacob, just prior to his induction into the SWA as a handler. Him they probably remember as a respectably competent operator (high praise indeed coming from Monty). What they'd think of his current stage of life remains to be seen.

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Post by ElfenMagix on Sun 21 Nov 2010 - 0:08

My last installment (edited installments may apply later).

Despite what people may think of him, good or bad, Fernando wants to believe that he is a caring individual who does what he thinks is best for everyone. In trying to please everyone, he falls onto that trap where somebody has to loose and its usually him. He is a loving individual to those very close to him: Rachel, Juanita, Francesca and most importantly, Meeshie. Besides being a team member to his Anti-Nuke-Terrorist team for the CIA, he is Shortfellow President for life. The Shortfellows was a high school (Super)Hero team turned into a non-profit agency of would be individuals... Some would call them heroes, others- vigilantes. All the members of the Shortfellows are either Military or Government Agency Operatives. With all this on his mind, what he thinks of others may not be pretty because he wants to be left alone most of the time. He is not at the SWA to flash money or to prove a point of who's better; he only there to do a job that he sometimes dont want to do. He has money through the family and what he has worked for, and rich friends which includes the Royal families of Spain and Japan, and elected officials in various nations.

Alpha reminds him too much of himself. A young kid dragged into an agency and had their claws dug in deeply. He just dont believe that the age they got Alpha, Fernando was still in high school. But finding out the secrets of the SWA, he understands what lonely lives cyborgs have, including Alpha. He highly respects Alpha, and considers him an equal on many levels.

Liesel to him is just another girl-cyborg that he has to deal with. In finding out the connection she shares with Alpha, he gives her more respect than others cause she was able to decide on relationships and duty while not making an excuse for conditioning. Being a First Gen Cyborg, Liesel is one of the few that could match Fernando for speed and healthy enough to do so.

The Girl Boys make him shakes his head at their antics and lack respect towards handlers. In the last panty raid, Fernando was about to grab them and put them out of their misery for harassing his little girl. Upon Rachel's insistence, he let them go.

Britney bothers him in that he has heard the rumors of her sexual escapades, and wishes that he would never run into her doing someone on some otherwise private place. He'd probably yell at them to go get a room. He is also worried about her being such a bad shot that she accidentally shot the Prime Minister's nephew. But in seeing that she has taken a more concentrated effort of her skills and abilities other than her sexual one. He only wishes the best for her.

In the few and rare chances in dealing with Jethro and Monty he understand their plight of being lone operatives in missions no one else can do, and having to resort to illegal activities to get the job done. He respects them for being the best in what they do, and how they do it.

Jay has him wondering how Priscilla as a handler because of many factors INCLUDING that who is running Logistics and Intell with both Ferro and Priscilla now doing handler work! It scares him that somebody like that cyborg-molesting Amedeo is now making sure that the handlers will receive intell from him! He believes that Amedeo and Jean has something to do with Felix's last case but cant prove it. Priscilla maybe a good handler, but Fernando sees her as the last person to be as such. Thus he wonders why Jay uses a compound bow instead of a gun, because isn't that the Gunslinger in Gunslinger Girls is all about?

Kara to him seems to be a rich brat girl snob because of Michele constantly spoiling her. Its its not over priced Prada shoes, its cars more expensive that a 2 family house in New York City goes for. Except for that, Fernando sees her as an exceptional cyborg, when she not throwing money around. Likely with Michele, is he wasn't being a snob and trying to infiltrate Padania money bags and ending up dealing with middle men, he would be an exceptional cyborg. In one mission that urks Fernando the most was when Michele told him that such riff raff (Fernando) would not be allowed into the place and his Porsche 928 would be sent to the junk yard to be trashed by the valet. As such he left Michele to fend for himself and not caring if he failed or not. On his missions involving royalty and diplomats, if Michele were allowed to be with him on, Fernando would point to Michele and tell the party, "If this man is not in the kitchen washing dishes, then he dont belong in here." In Fernando's views, Anyone can throw a million euros here and a million dollars there, but to work on less then a mission budget of 5,000 euros/dollars is something to do at best. Sometimes one has to open a can of ravioli in order to get the strength to continue onward, and Fernando loves the stuff. If he wasn't such a snob to Fernando, Fernando would actually like the guy for the great work he does at times, something that he has great respect for. Fernando would love to even the playing field with Michele and see how he would be with 2 cans of Four Loko in his belly.

Elio and Fernando have spent staring into too many liquor filled glasses, wondering bout this job they sometimes dont like to do. Though Fernando trains his team to he admirable swimmers, chances are they wont be diving 50+ ft to do missions with. He worries about Elio's girl, Marisa because she is a bit much to handle, and seen the craziness she has done (Parachuting from the roof being one of them). To him, despite the construction of cyborgs, one day she is going to need the attention of the Med-tech crew because of her antics.

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Post by MP5 on Sun 21 Nov 2010 - 1:59

Gonna start with Allison, since she's easiest.

Kara: Allison is on fairly good terms with Kara, though their tastes in cars give them something of a friendly rivalry, and of course, disagreement in what makes a good car. Allison thinks Kara is a cool person, not to mention more fashionable than herself. Of course, Kara is not to be mentioned without...

Michele: Definitely on Allison's mental 'cool wall', right at the 'subzero' level. Contact with Michele gives Allison access to a wealth of engineering experience, considering that not only does Michele own several Ferraris, but he also used to be an engineer for the Scuderia F1 team. Allison also likes Michele because he is a very affable man and an all-around nice guy who doesn't seem to have a chip on his shoulder of any sort. Unfortunately, she fears her standing with the Pagani fratello may have been spoiled with her recent 'Conditioning reaction' incident during the mission in Palermo and would frankly do anything to erase that rather shameful moment.

Monty: Another cool person by Allison's standards, but kind of off-put by Monty's general view that everyone is a blithering idiot unless proven otherwise.

Jay: Allison thinks he's a very sweet guy, but is pretty oblivious to his crush on her.

Melanie: Allison has nothing but sympathy for Melanie, who is always trying her hardest to please Jacob, only for the man to deem the girl's efforts unsatisfactory. She hopes nothing but the best for Melanie, but she cannot do much for Melanie because it is unfortunately not her place to meddle in the young girl's affairs.

Elio: Allison has nothing but respect for this old spy. Not only is he taking the time to help her along with Brian on her fear of lorries--a weakness she is somewhat ashamed of, but Elio has the added knowledge of several decades of automobile racing. And to Allison, anyone with a passion for automobile racing cannot truly be a bad person, despite most of the other girls' perception that Elio is an intimidating man.

Marisa: Allison has yet to go on a mission with Marisa, so most of her contact with the redhead is on-compound. Allison's opinion so far is that Marisa is very fun-loving, to a rather reckless extent, and that Marisa is exceptionally good at hockey (she has seen Marisa play, and the girl is capable of some wicked body-checks).

Alpha: Initially enshrouded in mystery, Allison has grown to respect Alpha as a hand-to-hand master and with the same logic that she has applied to Elio, automatically likes Alpha for his taste in cars, and thinks he and Elio are the only non-douchebag men to ever own BMW M3's. Unless Brian gets one, of course. Or Michele.

Fernando, Rachel, and Juanita: Interesting people, but she knows to just stay out of their way. Fernando (and by proxy Rachel) don't have time for bullshit, which Allison doesn't want to be the cause of.

Adeline: Allison is good friends with her, even despite Adeline's disinterest in four-wheeled transportation. The two regularly race each other around the test track trying to outdo each other's lap times.

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Post by Danjo3 on Sun 21 Nov 2010 - 2:49

@ElfenMagix wrote:She'll gladly shoot Amedeo in a heart beat because he tends to be too touchy-feely around her and has shoved her knee into his groin on more than one occasion. Some men never learn.
Britney@Rachel - “And you know how much I hate it when you put my play toy on the injured/reserve list.”

Oh yeah, I almost forgot,

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Post by MP5 on Sun 21 Nov 2010 - 4:19

@Jacen Starslayer wrote:
Scott - Jay's roommate. In Jay's opinion, Scott is one of the few 'Girl Boys' like him who are not complete screw ups. Scott's only flaw in Jay's mind is his use of fully automatic weapons, which goes through ammunition extremely quickly. On a side note, Jay is disturbed whenever Scott wears a kilt, as the boy goes commando those days.

Scott: Whoa! Full stop there, bucko! I only said that I would really like to wear a kilt! I have never done so out of respect for Chelsea's orders, and secondly, this nonsense about going regimental is nothing but lies and slander! Do you want to resort to pistols at dawn? I don't, but I'm ready to if it comes to that!

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Post by Awinnell on Sun 21 Nov 2010 - 5:12

nothing wrong with wearing a kilt traditionally,even in front of Royalty


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Some of the best people wear kilts.


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Post by Professor Voodoo on Mon 22 Nov 2010 - 4:22

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Scott: Do you want to resort to pistols at dawn? I don't, but I'm ready to if it comes to that!
A light fog covers the main lawn of the SWA compound, setting the mood but also hiding the proceedings from disapproving eyes.

Issac: Are you two sure you want to do this?

Scott: Absolutely...my honor has been besmirched!

Jay: Do you even know what that means?

Scott: Not really, but I heard it in a movie and it sounded pretty cool.

Issac: And you Jay?

Jay: Yeah, sure, I'm ready. Allison would probably consider me a sissy if I backed out now.

Issac: Alright...seconds, inspect the dueling pistols.

The two seconds, Matthew for Scott...Rico for Jay approach the referee and each selects a flint-lock pistol for their man.

Issac: Now take 10 paces, turn, and fire on 3!

Both cyborgs walk out the prescribed distance, turn slowly, count to 3 and fire. Both score direct hits, dead center in their opponent's chest. The lead balls do no damage to their cyborg armor, barely drawing blood. Neither falls and their shirts are the only casualties.

Scott: What now?

Jay: I think that's it.

Scott: Well that was pointless. Wonder if the dining hall is open for breakfast yet.

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Post by tremec6speed on Thu 21 Jul 2011 - 2:06

I haven't written any stories of my OCs interacting with others, so I can't give specifics.
Generally speaking,  Vinson (non handler agent) is a friendly man who would try to get along with most everyone I think.
Helen (cyborg) is starved for positive input of any kind, as her handler treats her as a disposable device. So I guess she'd be friendly and attentive to most everyone without complaint.
Salvatore (handler) is, how can I put this, unapproachable?
(translation: a perpetually angry, introverted jerk)
My guess is he does not have much to say (favorably) about others.
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Post by Alfisti on Sun 2 Oct 2011 - 4:24

Ok, so since I need a bit of a break between writing and editing, I thought it might be a bit of fun to spend some time here, starting with two fratelli whom J+M had dealings with in Monaco:


Elio & Marisa

Both Jethro and Monty have the upmost respect for Elio. Jethro's view was obviously shaped by his time in the SIS, but he has been pleasantly suprised to not find the ogre he was expecting to meet. Monty's view of the old spy is somewhat coloured by her handler, though Elio's insistence at seemingly lumping her in with his own and other cyborgs at times grates. However she's happy to have his experience around and his reputation as a disciplinarian certainly raises his capital in her eyes.

Marisa she has less time for and while she can respect the girl's abilities and usefulness (she wouldn't have brought her to Monaco otherwise) she'd find Mari's energy and crazy ideas annoying. She does however trust Elio to keep a handle on his cyborg. Jethro on the other hand finds Mari's boundless energy a refreshing change of pace and probably enjoys having her around as much because her presence irks Monty in an amusing manner... that said, he's also probably grateful he doesn't need to deal with Marisa 24/7 and can hand her back to Elio at the end of the day.



Kara & Michele

Interractions with these two are probably more Monty's realm than Jethro's. The latter probably has them pegged under "people I work with and am civil to." Otherwise Jethro probably doesn't have much of an opinon on the Paganis, though he'd have no qualms about working with them he probably wouldn't specifically request them either... unless for some reason Michele's squillions of dollars were going to come in handy Razz

As to Monty, she certainly has more time for Michele than she does a lot of the other SWA staff, mostly because he treats her like an adult (whether by accident or on purpose) and is an interesting conversationalist. She does however I'd imagine, believe he could stand to keep a tighter reign on his cyborg. It'd also be possible that she'd find some of his more extreme generosity irksome, as Monty does not like feeling indebted to people. By the same token however, she also believes that when Monty says "jump", the world should say "how high"... so the Pagani handler's willingness to help out when requested wouldn't bother her at all.

Kara on the other hand, Monty would really prefer to stay somewhere else... like, not near her. To be fair, this is how Monty views most cyborgs and in reality her opinion of Kara's "at work" ability is no lower than for any of her sisters. For specifics, and on a personal level though, she would probably view Kara as a bit frivilous, spoilt and concerned with things that really don't matter. Not to mention that, in some ways like Marisa, her bright, energetic personality is going to grate on Monty's nerves.



Moving on a little...

Nikias & Ana

Honestly, I think Jethro would find this fratello's antics more amusing than anything... in an "I'm laughing at you not with you" sort of way. Should they ever become his problem directly however, that attitude may change.

Monty, I imagine, would have exactly zero time for either should she make the effort to get to know them. Likely she would consider them a waste of the Agency's time and, if Nikas' family couldn't be milked for cash: money. Nikias she'd see as a try hard somewhere he shouldn't be and Ana'd be just a liability in her eyes. Don't expect her to throw barbs though as that would require effort which could be better expended elsewhere.

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Post by ElfenMagix on Sun 2 Oct 2011 - 21:19

Rachel (with fists at her waists): What? No Fernando/Rachel? Not even Francesca? What's goin..*!!

*She gets knocked out with a 2X4 to the head, and is dragged away by her hair.*

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Post by Alfisti on Mon 3 Oct 2011 - 5:39

@ElfenMagix wrote:Rachel (with fists at her waists): What? No Fernando/Rachel? Not even Francesca? What's goin..*!!
Alfisti: Well soooor-rry, unfortunately some of use haven't figured out how to cram 26 hours into our days yet. Razz

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Post by Schaschanist on Tue 4 Oct 2011 - 20:50

Well, it's a bit difficult with Emilie since my story is without any of the many OCs.
What would Emi think about the others?

From the actual state i just can say that she's quite passive (what she usually is normally).
From her side she understands better with the younger girls which are interested in similar hobbies (Music, Chocolate, Tea) than in the older and hipper one especially with those who are owning ridiculous expensive cars or talking about girly stuff or boys and sex.
Emi doesn't care about the last things although she could discuss with them cause she's having a boyfriend outside the agency.

So what would Emi do? Her usual thing, being quiet and passive (introverted) and especially being more interested in herself problems to solve them.
So interaction between her and others is pretty... say... one-way from her side, what doesn't mean that she could open up and talking a bit more freely if someone makes the first toss and asking or inviting her. I also could imagine she would like it to go shopping with other although she's having a distinctive 'black' and 'gloomy' clothing style.
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Post by ElfenMagix on Tue 4 Oct 2011 - 23:45

In all fairness, I did not write about my OCs discussing Jethro/Monty. So that, I have to apologize (I cant see Alfisti doing a Happy Dance Razz).

Fernando of Jethro: Dont know much about him though he adds "Thief" a whole new meaning to the phrase, "Rich man, Poor man, Beggar Man, Thief." All kiding aside, there are many things Jethro can teach but those are lessons that goes against what I learned. Sneaky, calculating, cunning, deceptive, intelligent - all those things that would make a successful secret agent, I wonder how he goes to sleep at times. Proud to have him on my side.

Juanita of Jethro: Nice, handsome, intelligent (Fernando: Juanita, stop drooling), Oh shut up, You're Jealous! You Had Your Chance With Me And You Married A Cyborg Instead!

Francesca of Jethro: Who's Jethro? (Rachel: Monty's handler) Who's Monty? (Rachel: Why do I even try?) Wait, the skinny one with the old fashion but nice clothes? (Rachel: YES!) They didn't try to shoot us like Ernesto and Pia? (Rachel: NO ) Then he must be nice, and good looking and... (Rachel: Aren't you married to my father?!!)

Rachel of Jethro: At least they are not as stuck up as Michelle and Kara! Try to crush my daddy's Porsche will they?!! They must have Porsche Envy! (Fernando: NO ) And they get the coolest missions, but I think finding stolen nukes is much cooler. (Fernando and Juanita: NO )

Rachel of Monty: I heard that she was into gymnastics and jumping off buildings so I challenged her to jump from the dorm roof, to the parking area brick wall, across to the main building's roof, down to the fence around the court yard and down the back of the outdoor firing range. She refused the challenge! I bet she could not do it! She's all hype (*Francesca whispers in her ear*) What you mean she hid in a safe deposit box and stole millions and swam across the harbor when the vault was blown up with her in it! Thats So Unfair! Daddy! I Want To Hide In A Vault, Steal Millions And Swim Across A Harbour When It Blows Up!!! (Fernando: BIANCHI!!!)

Francesca of Monty: She nice. Asks to barrow and return office supplies and things like that. Not like those two down stairs- take things and not return them. Yeah, those two caught on surveillance camera (Rachel: Thats Triela and Claes.), and that other one that runs into my room and jump out the window holding onto a blanket. (Rachel: that's Marisa) Dont she know any better? At least none of them leave drool in the hallway like those boys in the other side of the building (Rachel: those are Britney's boyfriends)(Britney: HEY! I Heard That!)... I wonder when they are going to return my underwear they asked to barrow? (Rachel & Britney: Ewwww!!!!)

Juanita of Monty: Who's Monty? She's a cyborg? I thought she was an office intern!

Fernando of Monty: Nice kid. Only one who barrows my coffee and buys me a new can of the expensive Puerto Rican Stuff every month. Everyone else thinks my coffee pot is a bottomless free for all! Anyways, from what I seen, she works too hard. She should go out with the other girls once in a while. Oh wait... she did have a date with Michelle. That Perv. Rule number one- never date the office staff or another man's cyborg!

Meeshie of Monty: Meow? *scratches ear with hind leg*

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@ElfenMagix wrote:
Francesca of Monty:...At least none of them leave drool in the hallway like those boys in the other side of the building (Rachel: those are Britney's boyfriends)(Britney: HEY! I Heard That!)...

Jay: You will be pleased to know (and I will be vindicated when I announce) that none of that drool is mine. Allison would kill me if any of it was...

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Post by Danjo3 on Wed 5 Oct 2011 - 2:34

Since Rachel is training me now, I’m very carful not to leave my drool anywhere she can find it:

Rachel: Sounds to me like you’ve got too much pent-up horny energy. That’s why I’m going to PT your stupid ass till you drop.

Paolo: I hate my life.

Rachel: And give Brit back her underwear!

Paolo: I really don’t think she’d want them anymore… trust me on this one.

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Post by Alfisti on Wed 5 Oct 2011 - 5:47

@ElfenMagix wrote:In all fairness, I did not write about my OCs discussing Jethro/Monty. So that, I have to apologize (I cant see Alfisti doing a Happy Dance Razz).
Argh... sorry if that came out sounding petulant, but I litterally did run out of time. It takes me a little while to think my way through these things, especially as, particularly Monty's assessments of people, can be a little, uhh... blunt.

Then work nailed me... I seem to have been catching aeroplanes the same way most people catch busses of late, Kisk'll know what I'm talking about.

Also, and honestly: I'm actually not entirely sure of what J+M think of Fernando's little crew just yet (or if they even have an opinion, not seeing them, or anyone who could help them form an opinion, much)... So far I've stuck with those fratelli I'm resonably solid on and intend to keep trying to put thought to everyone else.


@ElfenMagix wrote:Francesca of Monty: She nice. Asks to barrow and return office supplies and things like that.
For the record, Monty "asking" tends to be something along the lines of "I'm taking the [insert item here]" and letting anyone who might object attempt to stop her.


@ElfenMagix wrote:Fernando of Monty: Nice kid. Only one who barrows my coffee and buys me a new can of the expensive Puerto Rican Stuff every month.
Well, if she's going to wind up drinking it anyway she may as well get something decent. Razz

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Post by ElfenMagix on Wed 5 Oct 2011 - 18:37

@Alfisti wrote:
@ElfenMagix wrote:Francesca of Monty: She nice. Asks to barrow and return office supplies and things like that.
For the record, Monty "asking" tends to be something along the lines of "I'm taking the [insert item here]" and letting anyone who might object attempt to stop her.
This is Francesca we are talking about. If its returned, she's happy. If its not returned- you're dealing with a pouty cyborg!

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Post by Professor Voodoo on Sat 8 Oct 2011 - 4:31

I'm surprised I haven't done this one yet, but okay, here goes...

OC's I've used in my stories:

Kara & Michele
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Marisa: Mr. Pagani is one of the best adults to work with, every girl in the dorm will tell you that. Get assigned to a joint mission with him and you're guaranteed to stay at the best hotels, eat at the best restaurants and ride in a really cool car.
Kara is fun too, even if she is totally sissy when it comes to spiders. Ever since we worked together in Sicily she's been trying to teach me about fashion but it still seems silly to me to spend so much money on clothes that are just gonna wear out anyway.

Elio: Pagani is one of those chaps that make me wonder "How the hell did he get into this bloody business?" He's not a cut-throat, a scoundrel or a murderer...he's a genuinely nice guy dropped into a savage environment. I get the distinct impression that he'd have left ages ago if not for Kara. As for Kara herself; she's certainly one of the more reliable cyborgs as long as she remains in her "comfort zone." I think one of the things Michele has to work with her on is confidence when operating outside of that zone.
Agapita & Avise
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Marisa: Mr. Mancini is one of those adults who really knows his stuff but I'd like to avoid all the same. He's kinda like a male Ferro if you know what I mean. If you're doing something just a teensy bit wrong he seems to have a sixth sense for knowing where you are and what you're up to.
Agapita kinda gets under my skin with that religion of hers, but Elio says I can't get into arguments about it with her anymore so we just find other stuff to talk about. It's kinda fun to help her pull pranks on Piera but don't tell her I play both sides of that battle.

Elio: As long as we avoid the topic of politics Mancini & I get along fine. If you don't have a thick skin its easy to be put off by his manner, he certainly is full of bluster...frankly I think a career on the stage would have suited him just as well as the military. He's a good bloke to have along on a long stake-out because he really cracks down on the girls (and our Agency colleagues) about keeping the quarters cleaned up.
Of all the older lasses his girl Agapita is actually one of the easier ones to work with. Give her an instruction...she'll follow it to the letter. I'm afraid she's a bit...eh...clumsy though. I don't know how else to explain it...my Marisa can be a reckless loon at times but even she doesn't come back with a quarter the injuries poor Agapita suffers.
Jethro & Monty
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Marisa: Mr. Blacker is a blast to work with! I really wish everybody was willing to make up their own rules like he does. It would be totally cool to travel the world with him if there wasn't Monty to deal with. Don't get me wrong...she really gets the job done but that's not all there is to life. I should say, that's not all there is to my life...Monty seems to live & breathe work. Seriously, you have to wonder about a person who'd rather do paperwork than go to a party.


Elio: *laughing*...Blacker is just the sort of scoundrel the Agency needs. He got a bit of a raw deal back at MI-6 but their loss is the SWA's gain. He drives Jean & Lorenzo absolutely crazy though...they'd prefer to keep him on a lot shorter leash.Speaking of a shorter leash I sometimes think Jethro should keep his cyborg on one. I know he likes to look at Monty as an equal partner but let one mission get fouled up and he'll quickly find out he's the boss and the boss catches the blame. Honestly I'd thought he'd have learned that at the Ministry. Taken on a one on one basis Monty can be quite charming...a bit mouthy at times but I'm learning to tolerate that.
Allison & Brian
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Marisa: Hanging out with the older girls can be a little weird sometimes...especially when there's a lot of them together. I always feel like they're talking about and laughing about stuff I don't understand. Aside from that, Allie is really cool, and good a building stuff. When she gets an idea she doesn't sit around thinking about it all day, she just does it. I like that, even if it gets us into trouble sometimes
Mr. McDonnell is fun too...he let me drive his car back from the range once and even smoothed things over with Elio when he saw me get out of the drivers seat.


Elio: I find it a bit hard to read Brian McDonnell. You'd think we'd have lots in common, both SAS vets you know. He's a fun bloke to go drinking with (Ulstermen usually are) but we haven't been on too many missions together. That could be a good thing...Lorenzo tends to send me out with the handlers he thinks could use a bit of polishing (like Jean) so Brian must have the Chief's nod of approval.
Allison is as much of a handful as my Marisa. Absolutely brilliant if you can keep her focused and on task...bloody nightmare when she goes off on her own tangent. With the exception of Agapita, all the older Series Two girls seem to be like that to some degree.
Rachel & Fernando
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Marisa: Mr. Fernando is like fire & ice...really cool when he feels like it, but watch out when he doesn't. We got off to a rough start...he actually thought he was going to teach me how to swim! Well I told him where he could stick his basic Red Cross swim lessons and that turned into a whole big mess. We understand each other better now. Meeshie is pretty awesome too.
Rachel is a good person to know...if you need something she can get it. (You know, contraband...eh, nobody is gonna read this, right?) One thing I wish is that she'd lighten up on the other girls. I understand she got off to a bad start with them because of a little hazing but we razz each other all the time and there's no problem.


Elio: Ye gods...Fernando seems put on this Earth to make my life more difficult. Specifically; he is a master at getting Jean wound up. Every time I've got Croce calmed down and behaving like a reasonable human being Fernando does something to piss him off...I just know he does it intentionally. Oh well...at least he always has good booze.
You've got to watch out for his girl Rachel, she's a sneaky one. Personally I think Fernando encourages it. The best way to handle her is to give her responsibility. Rachel can't rebel against authority when she is the authority. Checkmate.
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Jacob, Sophia & Melanie
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Marisa: It was really sad when Sophia died...I didn't get to know her very well but the other girls really liked her. Nobody really thought we'd see Mr. Mehrandish after that but he came back with Melanie. I have to be honest...seeing how screwed up Melanie is really worries me. If there's an afterlife or a heaven like Agapita is always prattling on about Sophia is up there pulling her hair out seeing her Jacob teamed up with a cyborg who can't even shoot straight. Don't get me wrong...Melanie works harder than any cyborg out there but if I die and Elio gets paired up with another cyborg she better have her shit together or I'm coming back to kick her ass.


Elio: Just like Lauro & Marco I consider Jacob Mehrandish a cautionary tale about the emotional toll of getting deeply attached. Sophia's death really sent him into a tail-spin, one he hasn't entirely recovered from. It's rough I know, I lost my first cyborg as well. There may be other factors with Jacob though...I understand he lost a son years ago...but he seems to be taking out a lot of his frustration on his new girls Melanie. It doesn't help that she can't seem to shoot straight (literally). A problem case teamed with a problem case...sometimes it works out but to be honest I've counseled Lorenzo to try some different options with those two.
Britney & Biff
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Marisa: Mr. Steele is one of the toughest guys alive, no question, but he doesn't seem interested in working with us girls. Any time I ask to be sent on a mission with him he says "Isn't it enough that I have to work with Britney?" *sigh* Maybe someday...
Britney is sweet but she is a total weirdo. First off, what kind of cyborg can't stand the sight of blood? We're supposed to be like, total Gods of Death. Second, she loves the ocean...that's cool...but the only time she ever goes underwater is when she falls off her board! Waves are cool and all but all the best stuff is underwater!
Finally, she does totally weird stuff with the grown-ups. Did you know she borrows Henrietta's grey school uniform and lets Amadeo spank her? She actually likes it! Like I said...total weirdo.


Elio: Everybody in this business knows about Biff Steele...and we all know he changes jobs more often than Rico changes her socks. Lorenzo is the only guy who has managed to keep him on the payroll for more than 18 months and I dare say that's all due to Britney. Oh, she's a walking disaster for sure, I'd have had re-conditioned her long ago, but she really satisfies a need for Biff. Hell, if it keeps him on the payroll who's to complain.
There are more out there but this post is already a mile long. If I've left anyone out don't be shy...I'll work up E&M's thoughts.

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Post by Alfisti on Sat 8 Oct 2011 - 11:33

@Professor Voodoo wrote:I know he likes to look at Monty as an equal partner but let one mission get fouled up and he'll quickly find out he's the boss and the boss catches the blame. Honestly I'd thought he'd have learned that at the Ministry.
In reality: probably not. I sort of pictured Jethro taking something of a loaner role during his time in the SIS, so really the only person Jethro Blacker is used to having to take responsiblity for is, well... Jethro Blacker. Taking responsiblity for others' actions is something he still needs to learn to an extent.

However, Elio wouldn't be to know that and I assume would be falling back on his own experiences as a field commander in the same service.


Moving on...


Fernando Inc.


Not really a fratello and group Jethro and Monty have had much to do with. Jethro would probably consider Fernando as making his (Fernando's) life unneedingly difficult by seemingly purposely winding up Jean, or at least not doing it from afar. Jethro has however chased one or two nukes in his life, and hence has the upmost respect for the man's work... not to mention being able to manage two cyborgs in a "don't know how he does it" sort of way (Jethro: I have enough trouble with just one. Monty: Don't whinge, I make your life unbelieveably easy.).

As to Monty, she probably doesn't know Fernando as much more that someone she sees around the office or compound. However, he doesn't bother her and lets her get on with the job which would immediately put him a notch or two up on her average opinion of people. I don't know if she even realises the coffee is his: it's coffee, it's there and it's only polite to replace it if she uses it.

Rachel, Jethro probably knows as little more than "one of the cyborgs". Monty would probably consider her as... loud. Asking Monty to prove she's good at stuff is never a good way to start things off either, so I think Rachel may fall into that category of cyborgs Monty considers good reason to keep getting billeted in the Handlers' dorm. So, basically: no worse than the average. Which is better than could probably be said for her views on Francesca, who I sadly couldn't see her having a lot of time for at all.


Allison & Brian

Jethro I could see getting along resonably well with Brian, in a sort of "person I see irregularly" type of manner, again though I think they're probably a fratello J+M haven't had a lot to do with.

Monty's view of Brian however would be coloured by her view of Allison: which isn't positive at all. Allison is sort of hard to miss and Monty would likely view her antics as a waste of funds which could be better spent elsewhere... not to mention being a danger to herself and everyone around her. This, she could well view as being Brian's fault as, lets face it: he's not much of a disciplinarian. He's a nice bloke, but unfortunately being "nice" doesn't count for much in Monty's eyes.

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Post by Danjo3 on Sun 9 Oct 2011 - 1:14

@Professor Voodoo wrote:Finally, she does totally weird stuff with the grown-ups. Did you know she borrows Henrietta's grey school uniform and lets Amadeo spank her? She actually likes it! Like I said...total weirdo.
Britney: Amadeo spanks me as punishment for being a bad girl, so why would I ever like it? just whistlin'

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Post by tremec6speed on Sun 9 Oct 2011 - 3:10

Gunther and Ayden:
One is emotionally retarded (handler) and the other a wacky synthetic super-powered child that lives in a world of her own.  (actually so does Gunther)
His opinion of others is generic mostly due to his state of mind. No preferences as he views others with passing superficial curiosity but essentially alien to him. Ayden would probably feel the same way as she is also mentally detached from the rest of her surroundings. However she is able, at first glance, to at least appear capable of interaction with others in a normal fashion, but again no true connection or attachment.


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Re: What do your OCs think of other authors' OCs?

Post by ElfenMagix on Thu 3 Nov 2011 - 22:50

@Jacen Starslayer wrote:Fernando - After watching Fernando take down Jean in hand-to-hand combat (Something that he wishes that he was allowed to do), Jay treats the man with respect and admiration. He also ranks Fernando as 'avoid conflict with or flee on sight' if he were ever ordered to engage the man. When it comes to computers and programming, Jay considers Fernando to be on a level that he could never hope to achieve.
Fernando: When you'lll old enough, I'll take you a HOPE (Hackers On Planet Earth!) Conference, just put your brain into Sponge mode. Evil

@Jacen Starslayer wrote:Rachel - He has her on the 'avoid conflict with unless it is unavoidable' list because of her heightened aggression, short fuse, and explosive temper. Also her habit of 'shoot first, ask questions later' while on the compound puts him a little on ease as he has a habit of being a 'friendly fire' magnet.
Rachel: I'm Not That Bad!

Fernando: Yes you are...

@Jacen Starslayer wrote:Francesca - As the first prototype of their series, Jay regards her with a combination of intrigue and curiosity. However, her 'air-headedness' while not on mission mode raises concern within himself as she was created using the same technology as he was.
Fernando: She's an air-head because of her second rewrite. Same thing happened with Angie, and you think those idiots medical techs think they get it right the second time around!!! DAMN THEM!

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Post by topgearbrzgt86 on Thu 4 Apr 2013 - 18:51

Jim's and Jamiebel's viewpoints on the other cyborgs:

The Girl Boys - ...basically a 'stay away at all times' situation for both Jay-bee and Jim.

Eliza - Jim usually thinks of her as a good rival for Allison and herself. She tends to beat him in drag races, but loses (at least 1/2 of the races they have) on the courses themselves. Both are like peanut butter and jelly (as well as annoying Eiko Sekine - Eliza's fraternal twin) - that is, until Eliza overpowers an experiment (when Jim doesn't need it.) Jamiebel appreciates Eliza's company - she's one of the islands of sanity, next to Jim. The German believes that the two are very alike, and she likes it.

Jay - Jim likes to think of him as a real good friend - both Americans, both have Japanese cars, and both are a bit nervous near girls. He sometimes helps Jay with his nervousness by giving him pointers. Jamiebel is also a friend to Jay, being one of the girls (besides Allison and Rico) that Jay doesn't get nervous around.

Allison - Jim's main rival and friend. Both are massive car nuts/petrolheads, so they tend to talk about that most of the time. The rest, they just talk about random stuff. Jamiebel doesn't get half of what she says (the car bit), but she understands the random stuff.

Scott - Like Jay, Jim appreciates his company, being a 'foil' to him. Jamiebel likes his accent.

Ike - Jim and Jamiebel have the same thought of him: he's a good guy, he just needs to work on the lewd jokes.

Erina - Jim and Jamiebel are jealous of her, since she has easier conditioning, but they aren't super-jealous. They hide their jealousy well.

Becky - Having talked with her, Jamiebel appreciates the cooking she provides. Jim likes her - he's the only one who hasn't really noticed the 'surprise.'

Matthew - Neither of them can really translate what he says, but the duo like his company.

Johanneke - Jim's respect for her is amazing. She considers her to be the most athletic girl she's met, while Jamiebel is jealous of her athleticism She holds a liking to her, though, thanks to Ryo.

Kyo and Ryo - Jim and Jamiebel, just like the Fitzgibbons twins, have massive respect for each other. 'Nuff said.

Kara - Jim has a respect for her, as she is also into cars. Much like her, Jim is car-illiterate (but barely). Jamiebel also resepcts Kara, but Jamiebel is more car-illiterate than Jim and Kara combined.

Simone - Jim has an on/off relation with Simone. They both have a liking for Kimi Raikkonen, an affinity for driving and singing, but the former hates it when she pickpockets, and the latter hates it when he pats her on the back.


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Re: What do your OCs think of other authors' OCs?

Post by Kurosaka "Ery" Erika on Fri 5 Apr 2013 - 0:15

let see....

Yuki: just imagine Tsundere talking to you XD
Ai: just imagine you're being prank by this girl XD
Sherry: she's the type of girl who will obey anyone's order if 'Charlie' say so.
Victoria(Malashenko): She's a type f girl who socialize to other, no matter it's her friend of foe; so in term... she's friendly in 'manner'.
Silber: Just imagine a hyperactive girl with red bull XD
Six: sensitive, she despise the word "sick" but love number six XD--- so in short, be careful with your word around this cyborg.
Jeanne: a girl who will challenge everyone, even her handler.
Enrica: she's the type of girl that prioritize perfection from anyone, even herself.
Jackie: just imagine a trigger happy girl who loved tank as their main vehicle in dream XD
Reo: debate about history with her, you'll be checkmated XD
Alicia: Same to Yuki and Ayden, compete with her in a food challenge, you'll be stuffed first before she does XD.
Hunny (Husna) & Munny (Munairah) : think about a girl with RPG-7, smiling to you in your dream...multiply it by 2 XD
Eliza(My oc, to Stefan[Taerkitty's oc, replacing Tiffany]): justi magine you talking to a veeeeeery well mannered girl XD
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Post by topgearbrzgt86 on Thu 27 Jun 2013 - 19:15

Davina's viewpoints on the other cyborgs:

The Girl Boys - Davina threatens to absolutely destroy them if they make any eye contact with her.

Eliza - Davina finds Eliza quite entertaining. Whenever she needs help with a project, at least Eliza is there to help her. Just as long as she doesn't overdo anything. She is often likened to Eiko, who is just as athletic as Davina, but Davina claims to be her own person.

Jay - A brilliant person to be around. But due to the influence of Charles Montagne, she finds him a bit weird.

Allison - Like Jim and Jay-bee, Davina finds her as a great friend. She's not too clued to cars, though.

Scott - Davina likes his accent, and understand his desire to wear a kilt, albeit not going commando.

Ike - As long as Davina isn't insulted, Ike is wonderful in her book.

Johanneke - As one of Davina's CQC teachers (the other being Alpha Lautani), Davina holds a huge amount of friendship and respect for Johanneke.

Kyo and Ryo - Davina helps out Kyo with his shyness, while Ryo, she finds a great friend, thanks to Jamiebel.

Kara - Davina sometimes likes to toy with Kara, and describes her as a funny person, while also a great friend.

Monty - Davina hates her, period. Monty and Davina are two sides of the same coin, and are two complete opposites; Monty being hard-working but too concerned with herself (in Davina's opinion), and Davina being helpful and won't be so selfish. But put them together on a mission, they will put aside their differences and work together. But after their mission, they go back to being rivals.

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Post by Alfisti on Fri 28 Jun 2013 - 9:03

@topgearbrzgt86 wrote:Monty - Davina hates her, period. Monty and Davina are two sides of the same coin, and are two complete opposites; Monty being hard-working but too concerned with herself (in Davina's opinion), and Davina being helpful and won't be so selfish. But put them together on a mission, they will put aside their differences and work together. But after their mission, they go back to being rivals.
Well, so long as you define "putting aside differences" as "doing things Monty's way"... unfortunately I fear any spirit of co-operation may come in the form of gentle cajoling and massaging by Jethro.

As to Monty's perspective on Davina: her usual reasons for grumpiness and not being fond of the human race/cyborgs in general all apply... all of whom should stay out of her way and let her get on with the job. However, if we were to find some defining specifics, I imagine she considers Davina short sighted and incapable of looking beyond the end of her own nose at the bigger picture: wrapped up in the small, sheltered world all the cyborgs inhabit... and if Davina wants to consider her as "too concerned with herself", then that's fine by Monty. The way she sees it: every time she steps beyond Italy's borders she becomes a huge liablity to that nation, simply by virtue of her cybernetic nature. So yes, she is very concerned with herself.

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Post by topgearbrzgt86 on Fri 28 Jun 2013 - 9:52

@Alfisti wrote:
@topgearbrzgt86 wrote:Monty - Davina hates her, period. Monty and Davina are two sides of the same coin, and are two complete opposites; Monty being hard-working but too concerned with herself (in Davina's opinion), and Davina being helpful and won't be so selfish. But put them together on a mission, they will put aside their differences and work together. But after their mission, they go back to being rivals.
Well, so long as you define "putting aside differences" as "doing things Monty's way"... unfortunately I fear any spirit of co-operation may come in the form of gentle cajoling and massaging by Jethro.

As to Monty's perspective on Davina: her usual reasons for grumpiness and not being fond of the human race/cyborgs in general all apply... all of whom should stay out of her way and let her get on with the job. However, if we were to find some defining specifics, I imagine she considers Davina short sighted and incapable of looking beyond the end of her own nose at the bigger picture: wrapped up in the small, sheltered world all the cyborgs inhabit... and if Davina wants to consider her as "too concerned with herself", then that's fine by Monty. The way she sees it: every time she steps beyond Italy's borders she becomes a huge liablity to that nation, simply by virtue of her cybernetic nature. So yes, she is very concerned with herself.

Wow, I totally guessed on that one, because I didn't really know Monty that well, but it seems you somewhat agreed with me. And as for "doing things Monty's way," then yes, albeit working together.

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Post by Alfisti on Sun 1 Jun 2014 - 1:30

Been a little while since anyone posted anything here so here's a bit, though not a particularly comprehensive bit, for Danilo & Raych.

Danilo
As a general rule of thumb, Danilo thinks most of the Agency's handlers have got the wrong idea, and perhaps the only one he particularly considers on the ball would be Jean, at least early Jean, treating his cyborg as a tool. On the flipside, his view on cyborgs are that they are tools to be controlled, not independent beings in their own right and that treating them as such is a dangerous move. That much power should not be allowed off a leash. It is a view however that tends to leave him viewing actions by cyborgs as the fault of their handlers.


On Kara and Michele: Kara was the first cyborg Danilo had any real interaction with, and some of her statements about what her handler allows/does not allow worried him. Now he considers those fears realised, and views Michele as overly soft, spending exorbitant and unnecessary amounts of money on his charge. Notably it's not the expenditure that concerns Danilo, Michele does, after all, have money to burn, it's the way that it humanises the cyborg in question, potentially giving her wrong ideas about her rightful place in the world. Her perceived flightiness he may well think of as an offshoot from that, made all the worse by her being a "senior" cyborg.

On Allison and Brian: Similar to the above, with the added worry of giving a cyborg control of a car: far more freedom than Allison should be allowed, and the latter's close ties with Q-branch would only serve to tweak him even more. R&D is the real of adults, not cyborgs.

On Elio and Mari: Oddly, Danilo probably has a certain amount of sympathy for Elio, considering the man as having been lumped with an incredibly ill-advised project from the medical boffins. It helps that Elio is, unlike the previous two handlers, something of a disciplinarian... though I would stop short of saying Danilo un-equivocally approves of the man considering the fratello holidays and diving trips. That said, Elio may well be the handler, aside from Jean, that Danilo comes closest to approving of, which I'm not entirely certain is a compliment.

As to Marisa, he would see her as a complete and total fuckup on the part of the medical department and, while she may tweak him, she would most likely be held ultimately blameless for any of her actions.

On Fernando and Co.: Considering Fernando's views on cyborg rights, I doubt he and Danilo are going to see eye to eye on much, if anything. Someone to be avoided. Somewhat ironically, that would likely mean Rachel and Francesca get a free pass, as anything they do will be immediately classed as the fault of their handler.

On Nikias and Ana: Strangely Nikias is probably a handler that Danilo probably should approve of, one whom views his cyborg as a tool. Under different circumstances he might have as well. Unfortunately, the role of Nikias and Ana is very similar to his own, and there is no way Danilo would be able to view the other handler as anything but a rival: someone to be bested, humiliated and generally shown to be inferior to himself and, in this case, the cyborg is likely to take all the same flack her handler does.



Raych
Unlike her handler, Raych looks up to her peers at levels ranging from "better than me" to "in total awe"... much to her handler's chagrin. I'll be mostly keeping this to cyborgs too, as Raych really doesn't have an opinion on other handlers: they're all handlers, they're all immune from criticism.


On Kara: Kara was the first cyborg Raych met, and her room-mate. Raych looks up to Kara as a big sister, mentor and superior, and she envies the other's expensive clothes, visits to her handler's apartment and mission success rate. For her first month or so in the cyborg dorm she was almost permanently attached to the older girl as a grounding for any social interaction and still seeks her instruction should Danilo not be around to direct her. Early in her tenure Raych was quite open with the other, but has more recently started to close up in fear of retribution from Danilo.

She also thinks that Michele is really nice.

On Allison: a cyborg Raych has only really met particularly much in the company of Kara, another she considers her elder and better. Allison's outgoing personality probably scares Raych a bit but, at the same time, she also appreciates the hospitality... though the other girl's occasionally hostile opinion toward Monty Blacker confuses her somewhat.

On Marisa: Allison, turned up to eleven. Though short the confusing opinions, Raych probably finds Marisa's rumbustious enthusiasm overwhelming, falling back to either looking at her feet or nodding and agreeing to everything the red-headed terror says... which can get her into trouble if she is not careful.

Rachel and Ana are cyborgs Raych has had little to do with since her arrival at the SWA. Both have been there longer than she has though, so she would consider them her betters, and therefore unapproachable. Quite likely, considering Danilo's views on their respective handlers, she has likely been warned off both.



That's all I can think of for now, more if it springs to mind.

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Re: What do your OCs think of other authors' OCs?

Post by Alfisti on Mon 23 Oct 2017 - 4:55

*Looks at the editing he's supposed to be doing... no, this'll be quick*

One that did pop into my head just now, Monty on Giancarlo and Valentina (yes, I have read the latest chapter and yes, a review is on my "things to do" list  sweat ):

Anyway, the short version is that, while Monty would consider Giancarlo and Valentina's skill set useful (especially as it's something neither she or Jethro are particularly well versed in), she would find them far too flighty and field-inexperienced to ever want to work with them directly. That said, under certain circumstances, she would probably be quite happy to point Hilshire or Genco their direction should she need something done back in Italy... under the supervision of someone not her.

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