Writing something, and I'd greatly appreciate some help

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Writing something, and I'd greatly appreciate some help

Post by Chris Hansen on Tue 11 Jan 2011 - 3:47

Since it's original fiction as opposed to GSG fanfic (and yeah I should work on that too) it goes here instead.

But yeah, I'm stalled on the second chapter as I've decided that it's just not good so far. It's kinda stalled out and I've decided it's too purple-y and not engaging enough. I'd like to figure out how I can fix this, but I've kinda come to an end towards that.

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Post by Nachtsider on Tue 11 Jan 2011 - 3:53

Show us what you've written, then maybe we can offer some constructive feedback.

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Post by Officer_Charon on Tue 11 Jan 2011 - 4:36

Like the man said... without context, we can only do so much, mon ami... *grins*

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Re: Writing something, and I'd greatly appreciate some help

Post by Chris Hansen on Wed 12 Jan 2011 - 4:34

That's true, but I've been advised that since I intend to submit this to publishers I shouldn't just post it on the internet so, tell you what, I'll PM it to you.

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