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Post by Odon on Sat 5 Feb 2011 - 1:35

Milan, three weeks ago, a stakeout of a Padania safehouse but their target hasn't shown up after fifteen days. Things are very, very boring. Mr Hilshire tests her on the classics to pass the time; after all their years together he still hasn't mastered the art of small talk. She tries to discuss romantic literature but Hilshire doggedly holds his course until Triela gets miffed, declares the whole subject boring and falls into a sullen silence.

Sandro and Petra are in a microbus parked in the street below. Her enhanced hearing can pick up fragments of their conversation; they talk easily, like they've been practising all their lives. The voices drop below audibility as Petra leans close to her handler; she's practically whispering in his ear.

Petra ducks below the level of the windows. Triela telescopes her vision without conscious effort. Sandro's cyborg is pulling down the zipper of his trousers; she leans forward and uses her mouth to...

"Oh my God, that's disgusting!"

"What?" Hilshire raises his binoculars; his face flushes with anger and his finger goes white on the transmit button. "Sandro, what the hell are you doing?!"

"Piss off," is the only reply over the radio. Sandro's voice is calm yet Triela can clearly see the sweat on his body, his rapid breathing and the involuntary twitches of his face which he so carefully controls at all other times...

'He's enjoying this' Triela realises. 'He's excited by what she's doing to him...'

A hand on her shoulder and Hilshire is pulling her roughly away from the window, telling her to sit on the couch until told otherwise.

She sits there until their relief arrives five-and-a-half hours later. A petrol stop on their way back to the compound gives Hilshire the opportunity to confront Sandro in the restroom. Hilshire shouts about moral responsibility and taking advantage of a brainwashed subordinate. Sandro snaps about stuck-up Germans who won't mind their own business. Their cyborgs stand guard outside, exchanging looks of mutual embarrassment.

"It always makes me queasy," whispers Petra. Her eyes look bright and feverish, like that Jordanian they'd killed last week with his thumb on the detonator button. Seeing Triela's expression she starts to babble: "I mean, I want to do it! I enjoy pleasing him but it's like...just by choosing how fast I go, I can control Sandro utterly, pick the moment I want him to climax. There are times, the way he looks at me, I think I can make him do anything I want..."

A hand clasps her mouth to stifle this sedition, then Petra shoves open the door, pushes past their startled handlers and retches into the urinal.

Triela pulls a disgusted face. "If that's what sex is like then I'm not missing much!"

"Triela, I would never ask you to do anything like that," said Hilshire later, as they sat in their vehicle.

"No! Why would you want me to? I mean...that was gross!"

The microbus pulls out of the parking bay in front of them. Hilshire starts the engine of their car and follows.

"But kissing is OK, isn't it? For boys and girls my age, I mean."

Triela senses him eyeing her. She keeps her face forward, her expression innocent.

"Yes," Hilshire replies cautiously. "Kissing is OK."

"That's nice," Triela murmurs. Feeling delightfully wicked as she thinks of last Christmas in Naples, and how she might steal her next kiss.

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Post by ElfenMagix on Sat 5 Feb 2011 - 2:58

This is probably the funniest thing I ever read. Took me 5 minutes to calm down from it.

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Post by crazyidiot78 on Sun 6 Feb 2011 - 0:31

ElfenMagix wrote:This is probably the funniest thing I ever read. Took me 5 minutes to calm down from it.

Dam straight Elfen ROTFL LMAO
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Post by boomer_gonz on Sun 6 Feb 2011 - 4:46

I like this so much I'm saving it. LOLZ

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Post by Schaschanist on Sun 6 Feb 2011 - 10:36

It's remembering me what i thought the last nights:
Why can a Cyborg not fell in love or be sexually active.?
My Opinion is: "Hey, they are Cyborgs but they are still real Girls (in mind)!

Yesterday and the day before i thought about a similar situation, with a cyborg who felt in love but with a boy of her age outside the agency and not with her handler.
Actually I'm trying to imagine and to develop such a scenario for my OC Emilie.

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Post by Kiskaloo on Sun 6 Feb 2011 - 11:58

They clearly can fall in love. Henrietta is besotted with Jose and Triela and Petra love Hilshire and Sandro, respectively.

As for sex, half this forum believes Sandro and Petrushka are in a sexual relationship.

As for Original Characters, Danjo's Britney Kensington is very sexually active. And MP5's Allison and Jacen Starslayer's Jay are in a cyborg-cyborg sexual relationship. MP5 is also introducing a new male cyborg, Charlie, who suffers from Don Juanism syndrome.

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Post by Schaschanist on Sun 6 Feb 2011 - 12:27

So the already existing Cyborgs (OCs and Canon-Characters) who already had falen in love only felt in love with someone other within the agency.

Then i think it's time to create a 'love-story' between a cyborg of the agency and a normal boy from outside.
I think i can take that challenge ... At the Moment Emi is right going to go this way...
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Post by Kiskaloo on Sun 6 Feb 2011 - 15:46

schaschanist wrote:So the already existing Cyborgs (OCs and Canon-Characters) who already had falen in love only felt in love with someone other within the agency.

Yes, but then that is because the Agency is all they really know.

Personally, I do not believe Rico felt anything for Emilio (the hotel bell-boy she meets and later murders in Chapter 2) - it was just the first time she'd interacted with anyone outside the Agency so it was something different.

Nachtsider expanded on that Chapter, having Emilio not die, but instead recovered and turned into a cyborg himself by another government, eventually re-uniting with Rico.

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Post by Schaschanist on Sun 6 Feb 2011 - 15:50

Kiskaloo wrote:Nachtsider expanded on that Chapter, having Emilio not die, but instead recovered and turned into a cyborg himself by another government, eventually re-uniting with Rico.

Well, but that is also a complete different case.
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Post by Kiskaloo on Sun 6 Feb 2011 - 16:10

True, but considering how anal Jean Croce is about Operational Security, once he finds out one of the cyborg girls is dating a boy, that boy is soon going to find a 7.62x54mmR bullet paying a visit to his skull.

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Post by Schaschanist on Sun 6 Feb 2011 - 16:37

I think before that will happen, Emi will escape the dorm together with this boy (the boy she met and fell in love with at the Trevi fountain) without any respond.

In my Fiction there is no risk for her to be reconditioned (cause of several reasons) and i think the agency don't want to make Emil angry, simply cause no one knows what will happen if they are making a self-worrying Cyborg specialized for close combat, martial arts and covert operations with a very own free will really really angry by killing her very first love ....
i would say:
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Post by FearTheLASERFACE on Sun 6 Feb 2011 - 16:51

That is kind of what happened with my character Subject 2A. That ended up not so good *understatement*
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Post by Schaschanist on Sun 6 Feb 2011 - 17:43

I'm sure, before the agency kills the boyfriend and risk to get Emi complete out of control, they are watching/looking for a solution of that problem in which both, Emi and this boy, are happy,
I have to think of how i can involve him or what else happens.
But trust me, Emi is trying to hide her secret as best as she can. Only, Etienne noticed that she was hiding something, and be sure, he don't want to hurt his 'daughter' so he's keeping that secret, too.

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Post by MP5 on Sun 6 Feb 2011 - 18:51

Kiskaloo wrote:

...And MP5's Allison and Jacen Starslayer's Jay are in a cyborg-cyborg sexual relationship. MP5 is also introducing a new male cyborg, Charlie, who suffers from Don Juanism syndrome.

Half right, at least at present. Things will get there *eventually*, but regarding the writing process at the moment, Allison is still fairly besotted with Brian, but he'll be drawing the line soon enough, thereby opening up that path.

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Post by Officer_Charon on Sun 6 Feb 2011 - 19:09

I really enjoyed this, actually. It explores their characters, clearly defines boundaries that Petra is pushing against, and paying the price for, and establishes that Triela is accepting just how much she loves her own handler. Nicely done!

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Post by Professor Voodoo on Sun 13 Feb 2011 - 4:37

Well done, Odon. I think it might have been better written in the past tense than present but that's your call entirely. There were a couple of really catchy sentences too (A hand clasps her mouth to stifle this sedition,).

She sits there until their relief arrives five-and-a-half hours later.
Oh god...did the blowjob last that long? I've changed my mind...maybe I would like a cyborg!


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Post by Schaschanist on Sun 13 Feb 2011 - 6:26

I don't think every cyborg is like her.

A cyborg giving her handler a bolwjob is hilarious.
I'm not sure if anyone else of the cyborg-girls will do something similar to their handler, and even not if they are 'ready for sex', too.
Kissing is truely an act of love and sex too, but a blowjob on duty? I don't know, maybe i'm just a bit prude or conventional in that point...

For my OC Emilie i don't want an act like that, something that nymphomanic... I mean, for her the first 'love-making' (sex) is what it was on every second, an act of true Love...

Maybe a similar case with Petra.... but a bit strange...

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Post by Danjo3 on Sun 13 Feb 2011 - 14:58

Professor Voodoo wrote:Oh god...did the blowjob last that long? I've changed my mind...maybe I would like a cyborg!
Thatís what I was thinking. Five hour blow jobs are hard to come by. head bang

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Post by Kiskaloo on Sun 13 Feb 2011 - 18:04

Danjo3 wrote:
Professor Voodoo wrote:Oh god...did the blowjob last that long? I've changed my mind...maybe I would like a cyborg!
Thatís what I was thinking. Five hour blow jobs are hard to come by. head bang

I imagine they're hard to cum to, as well. Incoming!

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Post by Officer_Charon on Sun 13 Feb 2011 - 18:29

I was waiting for someone to spurt out with that

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Post by Professor Voodoo on Sun 13 Feb 2011 - 20:24

Unfortunately I often cum to such conclusions prematurely.

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Post by Officer_Charon on Sun 13 Feb 2011 - 20:25

How anti-climatic. *grins*

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Post by Odon on Sun 13 Feb 2011 - 23:10

Professor Voodoo wrote:Oh god...did the blowjob last that long? I've changed my mind...maybe I would like a cyborg!

Heh. I didnít mean they were making out for five hours, I just didnít think Daddy Hilshire wanted to risk his daughter seeing anything she shouldnít. But maybe I should rewrite that line. Wink

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Post by Professor Voodoo on Sun 13 Feb 2011 - 23:34

Odon wrote:
Professor Voodoo wrote:Oh god...did the blowjob last that long? I've changed my mind...maybe I would like a cyborg!

Heh. I didnít mean they were making out for five hours, I just didnít think Daddy Hilshire wanted to risk his daughter seeing anything she shouldnít. But maybe I should rewrite that line. Wink
No rewrite necessary; I think we all got it...it's just funny.

Hillshire certainly does seem to be a bit of an overprotective sort. He does say somewhere that he'd like to show Triela more of the world than just fighting, but I don't think this is what he had in mind!

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Post by Robert Frazer on Mon 14 Feb 2011 - 4:01

I did think it was interesting how you depicted the effect conditioning would have in this situation, with Petrushka expressing how she can control her handler being interpreted as a rebellious sentiment and provoking a reaction. It was a deft way of including a character idiocyncracy and letting the GSG setting frame and enhance the story.

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Post by Odon on Tue 15 Feb 2011 - 1:07

That came from the scene in "Il Teatrino" where Mimi wants to see her boyfriend and says, "I'm sure you could persuade Hilshire for me." Triela practically leaps away from her, alarmed over the idea that she could "influence" her handler. Mimi is used to being able to manipulate men by being cute and boys by being sexy, a concept completely alien (and frightening in its implications) to a conditioned girl. Petra though would have knowledge of her sexual power because Sandro has been making her use it to put men off their guard before she smacks them in the chops.

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Post by crazyidiot78 on Thu 17 Feb 2011 - 22:12

LMAO cheers ROTFL
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Post by Lyndist on Thu 21 Apr 2011 - 9:01

This is indeed what we need when on duty

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Post by Pax on Thu 2 Feb 2012 - 17:32

Nice, funny little fic. Knida makes me sad that I havent used Petras puke-reflex in my Firefly/GSG crossover yet, haha.

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Post by tremec6speed on Fri 3 Feb 2012 - 1:33

Cool scene. Now I'm thinking Fernando in place of Hillshire.
Instead of a shouting match in the loo, the exchange would be very brief:
Fernando: You, come here.
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Fernando: He said something about wanting to take a piss and now he has all the time to do it.
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Post by ElfenMagix on Fri 3 Feb 2012 - 2:18

ROTFL

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Post by taerKitty on Fri 3 Feb 2012 - 11:07

Nicely done. Love the hurling idiosyncrasy.

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