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Pvt. second class Roger Evans

Post by ProjectZ on Sat 24 Sep 2011 - 9:00

first off, I don't know how much false information I have about NATO here, so pardon my possible ignorance.
after hearing what section 2 has done in the past, some NATO officials wanted to research something bigger, Super soldiers. They called for volunteers, and Pvt. Evans (25 from The UK, for those who care) answered. The best thing about using a volunteer is he isn't a vegetable and need next to none of the conditioning, just enough to be able to control the artificial muscles. with his Minimal doses of the drug, he is expected to live to around 60 (his company members expect about 26, though. He isn't the brightest). He is the start of the third generation of cyborg.
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Re: Pvt. second class Roger Evans

Post by ElfenMagix on Sat 24 Sep 2011 - 21:43

Lets see... Not crashing on your idea, but...

1) There is a a third generation and a fourth generation cyborg, as well as outside designs in the Fan Fiction world. Your definition of your OC does not fit the a Third Generation Type, but a combination of a Pre-First Generation and Outside of Italy Design.

We are kind of tight around here, though fanfiction is fanfiction, not everybody follows our guide. And yes, I do need to update the wiki, there are several other cyborg types to add, including an American SWA construct.

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Re: Pvt. second class Roger Evans

Post by Awinnell on Sun 25 Sep 2011 - 6:22

british army doesn't have second class privates, or first come to that,private is as low as you go rank wise

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Re: Pvt. second class Roger Evans

Post by ProjectZ on Sun 25 Sep 2011 - 15:21

And that is why I mentioned my ignorance
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Post by ElfenMagix on Sun 25 Sep 2011 - 22:45

Private Rankings (1st class and Private {enlistee} in the US Army) are too low for special projects. If he is a Private (I'll say 2nd Class but that does not exist and only applies to enlistees), then he is still in Boot Camp! That would eliminate him from actual combat.

Only officers and Special Ops Agents are given the right to such special programs like the SWA. This is more true for the British Arm Forces than it is for the USA though for the USA it is a given with only a few rare and highly gifted exceptions. For example, taking from my OC universe, a menesis character of mine was an Airforce Major, and that gave him rights to a certain soldier enhancement projects - as a (walk in and signed) volunteer, and not some helpless invalid in a hospital seeking death to end his pain volunteer.

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Re: Pvt. second class Roger Evans

Post by ProjectZ on Fri 30 Sep 2011 - 7:37

I'M SORRY! PLEASE FORGIVE ME WORLD! (no sarcasm was intended) I don't do homework on non-school related things. I do have another, more traditional fan character in the old noodle.
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Re: Pvt. second class Roger Evans

Post by Awinnell on Fri 30 Sep 2011 - 8:54

no criticism intended,only edification

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Re: Pvt. second class Roger Evans

Post by ElfenMagix on Fri 30 Sep 2011 - 22:07

...and edjamakation.

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Re: Pvt. second class Roger Evans

Post by Tommygunner70 on Fri 30 Sep 2011 - 22:48

Dunno about you but when I'm not certain about things, I go and look them up using google. just about everything you want to know can be found through there.

If you want to get writing, you gotta make sure the details are accurate, else someone who really does know will turn it down on inaccuracies.

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Re: Pvt. second class Roger Evans

Post by tremec6speed on Sat 1 Oct 2011 - 20:00

Characters sound cool! Smile
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