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Post by liko on Thu 20 Oct 2011 - 19:00

What can I say, few years ago I just had finished reading volume 4, stuck at home for several days and feeling depressed. So what do I do? I decide to write me some fan fiction. The result was as expected of low quality, but hopefully it is good enough for a laugh. Well without further ado: attached below. Feel welcome to read if you are bored.

EDIT: warning. Subject matter may be offensive to some. Read comments bellow and as always feel free to NOT read the stories.
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Post by ElfenMagix on Thu 20 Oct 2011 - 21:07

Angie dies in V10, and Petra comes in the end of V6 and all of V7, sooo, what is it of V4 that so sad?

Only thing I can remember is the attack on Christiano's estate, and the apparent deaths of Franca, Franco and Christiano. Rooting for the bad guys?

Though I say she deserved it, I kinda liked Franca... that bitch.

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Post by liko on Thu 20 Oct 2011 - 21:15

Triela's back story. In the end of the volume she wakes up crying thinking she saw the face of her mother. In actuality it was Rachelle just as she was perishing from bloodloss while trying to save Triela. Hilshire did not take revalation well.

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Post by ElfenMagix on Thu 20 Oct 2011 - 22:00

@liko wrote:Triela's back story. In the end of the volume she wakes up crying thinking she saw the face of her mother. In actuality it was Rachelle just as she was perishing from bloodloss while trying to save Triela. Hilshire did not take revalation well.
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Post by tremec6speed on Thu 20 Oct 2011 - 23:47

I couldn't open the document. :(
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Post by Kiskaloo on Fri 21 Oct 2011 - 0:33

@tremec6speed wrote:I couldn't open the document. :(

Fired up fine in Microsoft Word.

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Post by Nachtsider on Fri 21 Oct 2011 - 1:01

Said it before, will say it again. Uploading fics to FF.net should be your first choice of publication method.

Then again, given the content of the stories, I'm actually kind of glad you didn't do that. Spanking? Seriously?

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Post by Professor Voodoo on Fri 21 Oct 2011 - 3:59

@liko wrote: I decide to write me some fan fiction. The result was as expected of low quality, but hopefully it is good enough for a laugh. Well without further ado: attached below. Feel welcome to read if you are bored.
Well, that was different.

First off; both stories could benefit from thorough proofreading...there are quite a few gramatical, sentence structure & spelling issues that you could brush up. If I may ask, is English your primary language?

What I like is how true to the canon characters you've remained. Even with the somewhat lurid subject matter Rico remains innocently focused on doing Jean's bidding...and having Henrietta's obsessive love for Giuseppe take a decidedly nasty turn felt honest & believeable. Both stories were interesting looks into the darker side of the characters we all know so well.

As to the subject matter itself; it was certainly "lemony" but at no point wantonly gratuitous. We've certainly seen worse, on this site and definately on fanfiction.net. Still, it might be worthwhile to slap a warning/disclaimer onto future postings just in case some folks do think it goes too far.


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Post by emperor on Fri 21 Oct 2011 - 6:18

@tremec6speed wrote:I couldn't open the document. :(

But I can open with MS Word 2007.

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Post by Danjo3 on Fri 21 Oct 2011 - 6:45

I find this to be an interesting story, since I happen to know a certain OC who enjoys an occasional spanking (hairbrushes are fine, but she prefers her riding crop).
@Professor Voodoo wrote:Still, it might be worthwhile to slap a warning/disclaimer onto future postings just in case some folks do think it goes too far.
If you need any help with this Liko let me know Ive had lots of experience. Laughing

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Post by Triela on Fri 21 Oct 2011 - 9:37

I haven't read many fanfics of GSG and thought I would give it another try.

I was reading and then I was like. O____O and closed it. Man, I wish I had read some of the posts below. Leave a warning next time! I write yaoi, but I sure as heck warn people about what is has in it when/if I post the link here.

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Post by liko on Fri 21 Oct 2011 - 10:19

Well I did say it was a low quality.
No English is not my primary language.
I do have them in fanficion.net, but apparently I am not allowed to post links here (yet).
Sorry if you find the stories offensive. I was trying to capture the extremes the cyborgs will go due to their conditioning, while still trying to keep their personalities close to canon as I perceive it.

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