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Re: Shino_Arcieri's drawing

Post by Thescarredman on Mon 7 Jul 2014 - 18:30

Nice work on the shadowing. I think your expertise has grown enough for you to start doing your own backgrounds - scenes even. Don't you?

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Post by Kurosaka "Ery" Erika on Mon 7 Jul 2014 - 19:49

@Thescarredman wrote:Nice work on the shadowing. I think your expertise has grown enough for you to start doing your own backgrounds - scenes even. Don't you?
Actually, that's the major flaw i have right now... as fr as ic an make a realtic drawing.. background is hard for me

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Post by Kurosaka "Ery" Erika on Tue 8 Jul 2014 - 0:34


request done... not related to GS again

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Post by TeaTimeNinja on Sun 3 Aug 2014 - 18:01

Just looked through all 4 pages. I feel like I just watched a sapling grow into a mighty freakin' oak. the improvement is insane, dude! don't stop.

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Post by Kurosaka "Ery" Erika on Sat 9 Aug 2014 - 22:43

Si Si Si, Grazzie Signore Rize Razz

and my Oc's 2nd anniversary is approaching... here's Yuki's new look

Will be doing her twin sister Ai later

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Post by Kurosaka "Ery" Erika on Tue 12 Aug 2014 - 0:50

And after some discussion yesterday, this is MP5's request; a remade of his character in a remastered version-


Giulia-chan lying on the floor, smexy style  Bong  Bong  (at first, can't shake it because when i draw this, my mind imagine it was jumping, not lying on the floor pacman )


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Post by MP5 on Tue 12 Aug 2014 - 0:57

Shino_Arcieri wrote:And after some discussion yesterday, this is MP5's request; a remade of his character in a remastered version-


Giulia-chan lying on the floor, smexy style  Bong  Bong  (at first, can't shake it because when i draw this, my mind imagine it was jumping, not lying on the floor pacman )
 On Cloud 9  It's just a wrinkled bedsheet away from being a dakimakura. I love it!

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Post by Kurosaka "Ery" Erika on Tue 12 Aug 2014 - 1:00

@MP5 wrote: On Cloud 9  It's just a wrinkled bedsheet away from being a dakimakura. I love it!

LEL, now if i created a Dakimakura of her... NO, NEVER Razz ROTFL

Now...let see if i can do another OC (GSG) after i done with drawing of Aikawa

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Post by Kurosaka "Ery" Erika on Tue 12 Aug 2014 - 3:54

Shino_Arcieri wrote:and my Oc's 2nd anniversary is approaching... here's Yuki's new look

Will be doing her twin sister Ai later
And this is Aikawa [Ai]

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Post by Kurosaka "Ery" Erika on Wed 20 Aug 2014 - 19:44


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Post by Kurosaka "Ery" Erika on Mon 25 Aug 2014 - 15:24

Because the reason behind this drawing is back when Nachtsider said this-
"Gattonero, you say. I pity any girl with the misfortune of having such a name. Her handler must really love his coffee." [as written during Monday 16 May 2011]
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Post by TeaTimeNinja on Mon 25 Aug 2014 - 16:30

Do you use references for your hands? They're really good. As is the rest of the drawing.

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Re: Shino_Arcieri's drawing

Post by Kurosaka "Ery" Erika on Mon 25 Aug 2014 - 17:46

@TeaTimeNinja wrote:Do you use references for your hands? They're really good. As is the rest of the drawing.
who am i kidding Razz that's my hand reshaped to a feminine look Razz
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Post by TeaTimeNinja on Mon 25 Aug 2014 - 18:34

Shino_Arcieri wrote:who am i kidding Razz that's my hand reshaped to a feminine look Razz
Heck yeah! I knew I wasn't the only one who stares at their hand for hours!

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Post by Thescarredman on Mon 25 Aug 2014 - 22:21

You're always your best model. You work cheap, and you're always available.

The hands definitely are the focus of the picture. You've come a long way since you drew that pic of Kay and Vee for me, dude.
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Post by TeaTimeNinja on Mon 25 Aug 2014 - 22:27

I second that. By the looks of this thread, you've come a really long way.

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Post by taerKitty on Tue 26 Aug 2014 - 0:52

Nice.

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Post by Kurosaka "Ery" Erika on Wed 27 Aug 2014 - 0:42

and so... i just finished installing this new drawing software.... and i'll start learning it tomorrow....


what makes this drawing software different is that you can create something like this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YrLnF7CQ8Ac
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Post by Alfisti on Wed 27 Aug 2014 - 3:15

Looks like an interesting bit of kit.

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Post by crazyidiot78 on Wed 27 Aug 2014 - 7:18

dang thats cool
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Post by tremec6speed on Mon 1 Sep 2014 - 23:33

Great work, love the faces! Smile
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Post by Kurosaka "Ery" Erika on Tue 2 Sep 2014 - 3:37

@tremec6speed wrote:Great work, love the faces! Smile
apparently i didn't stop there, Sinonon was finished today
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Post by tremec6speed on Wed 3 Sep 2014 - 23:37

It just gets better and better man! head bang
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Post by crazyidiot78 on Thu 4 Sep 2014 - 4:19

Sweet, nicely done
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Post by Kurosaka "Ery" Erika on Thu 4 Sep 2014 - 4:31

and for my last drawing before moving back to Gunslinger girl.... meet my favorite Kancolle Character; Tenryuu

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Post by Kurosaka "Ery" Erika on Wed 10 Sep 2014 - 11:11

so... here's a work in progress of the girl we love to hate Razz

Forgive me for have i've commit a sin...
Sandro: Forgive me too for giving you the idea...
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Post by TeaTimeNinja on Wed 10 Sep 2014 - 11:14

lol "the girl we love to hate". I like it. Looks like one of those pillows that weebs have on their beds haha!

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Post by Kurosaka "Ery" Erika on Wed 10 Sep 2014 - 22:57

@TeaTimeNinja wrote:lol "the girl we love to hate". I like it. Looks like one of those pillows that weebs have on their beds haha!

no matter how i hate ecchi and fanservice character and drawing..this one... i ain't even mad with it
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Post by taerKitty on Thu 11 Sep 2014 - 0:57

I love the shading and shadowing. You're getting to the level where I would expect a comic or something now!!!

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Post by Kurosaka "Ery" Erika on Sat 13 Sep 2014 - 6:22

and so i created 12 new character that serves as both Protagonist and antagonist in my future fanfiction....


and this is just the beginning
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Post by ElfenMagix on Sat 13 Sep 2014 - 12:58

Nicely done Shino.

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Post by tremec6speed on Sat 13 Sep 2014 - 14:48

Cool, wanna see Jane in action! Smile
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Post by Thescarredman on Sat 13 Sep 2014 - 17:39

And what, may I ask, is 'January' doing in the upper right? You said you had twelve of them; are you making a calendar?
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Post by taerKitty on Sat 13 Sep 2014 - 18:38

I'm guessing Miss August will be the strong one.

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Post by Alfisti on Sat 13 Sep 2014 - 19:09

@Thescarredman wrote:And what, may I ask, is 'January' doing in the upper right? You said you had twelve of them; are you making a calendar?
Well, going by the note she is part of the "Gregorian Group"...

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Re: Shino_Arcieri's drawing

Post by Kurosaka "Ery" Erika on Sun 14 Sep 2014 - 1:31

@Alfisti wrote:
@Thescarredman wrote:And what, may I ask, is 'January' doing in the upper right? You said you had twelve of them; are you making a calendar?
Well, going by the note she is part of the "Gregorian Group"...

Well you guys already figured it out Razz

@taerkitty wrote:I'm guessing Miss August will be the strong one.

actually.....

"Echo"
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affiliation: Italian 132nd Mechanized division Ariete [tank commander, former], Gregorian group G2
Item of preference: Beretta AR-70 [primary], M92 [backup]
notable battle: Operation Iraqi Freedom, Various PMC mission in Southeast asia, Second Korean war


August>>>> 8th month>>>> Eight>>>> E>>>> Echo pacman


Because the leader of this group is known as "Hare", as in "March Hare"


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Post by Kurosaka "Ery" Erika on Sun 14 Sep 2014 - 15:01

and here's Signore August, A.K.A Echo

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Post by Thescarredman on Sun 14 Sep 2014 - 18:54

'Second Korean War?'
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Post by Kiskaloo on Sun 14 Sep 2014 - 18:58

@Thescarredman wrote:'Second Korean War?'

Red Phoenix by Larry Bond (who co-wrote Red Storm Rising with Tom Clancy). Smile

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Post by taerKitty on Sun 14 Sep 2014 - 19:05

If we can have a nuke pop in Bosnia in the fictional background, a Korean War or three won't be that hard.

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Post by Kurosaka "Ery" Erika on Sun 14 Sep 2014 - 19:10

In my story, the Second Korean war erupted shortly after 1998 Sokcho submarine incident and has been raging for about 5 years with several truces made in between (the reason why the conflict was extended for so many years).
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Post by Kurosaka "Ery" Erika on Tue 16 Sep 2014 - 3:12

Because of Crazyidiot's drawing request is still pending, i decide to finish this drawing quickly by using the previous pose i used before...

And so this is Febri, Jane's partner
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Post by crazyidiot78 on Tue 16 Sep 2014 - 5:21

awesome drawing but no need to rush on my acount
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Post by taerKitty on Tue 16 Sep 2014 - 11:17

Very nice.  I like how you're playing with different facial angles.

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Post by Kurosaka "Ery" Erika on Thu 18 Sep 2014 - 10:19

CI's request part 1; Henrietta (20 Y-O version)


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Post by crazyidiot78 on Thu 18 Sep 2014 - 10:21

cheers head bang Good Awesome! On Cloud 9 Not Worthy! w00t!  umm i think that just about sums it up
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Re: Shino_Arcieri's drawing

Post by taerKitty on Thu 18 Sep 2014 - 11:06

Very nice.  Better than I can do, by far. I love the cloth wrinkles and shade, as well as the more intricate hand poses.  It's amazing to see your growth from fairly stiff and flat drawings not even a year ago to the quality here.

With that in mind, may I offer a few suggestions:

- As this is Henrietta at twice her age, you may want to take a look at Speranza's progression from bespectacled Stanford student (at 16) to her award ceremony.  

- You may want to consider changing the hairstyle to something a little more polished, and narrowing the face.

- Also, adults vary from 6.5 heads height (realistic) to 8 heads (heroic) ratio, and approximately 2 heads width.

- Lastly, and this is the most difficult, you might want to both move the eyes closer together, and to make them narrower, height-wise.  

Yes, this makes it very non-Henrietta, the baby-faced, wide-eyed sweetie, but it may convey her age better.

Again, this is said with the best of intentions, in hopes that you may consider these, evaluate these (and not automatically accept them as directives) and see if you agree.

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Re: Shino_Arcieri's drawing

Post by Kurosaka "Ery" Erika on Thu 18 Sep 2014 - 11:14

@Taerkitty wrote:Yes, this makes it very non-Henrietta, the baby-faced, wide-eyed sweetie, but it may convey her age better.
actually, that was my intent, to give the look of Henrietta in the inter-change of her look from the past to the future [basically her face's transition 10 years apart] (my original intent was to create her drawing in a full-pose render)

and that... added to this soundtrack influenced me to do so Razz
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Post by TeaTimeNinja on Thu 18 Sep 2014 - 19:32

Shino, this is really great. Love your style, have I mentioned that before?

I'm also a sucker for Henrietta it seems.

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Re: Shino_Arcieri's drawing

Post by Thescarredman on Thu 18 Sep 2014 - 20:21

Very nice. Kitty's critique has its points, but I wonder how much you could age this girl and have her still be recognizably Henrietta; the point of the illustration is lost if you can't tell at a glance.

Love the pic, by the way.
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Re: Shino_Arcieri's drawing

Post by crazyidiot78 on Fri 19 Sep 2014 - 7:23

Tear's critique aside, (I'm not an art guy so I bow to his expertise) I think the picture works well in the context of the story (great escape) where Henrietta is growing older but only looks around 13-14 compared to her original 11-12 imo, but is trying to pull off looking a bit older.
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Re: Shino_Arcieri's drawing

Post by ElfenMagix on Fri 19 Sep 2014 - 21:41

Nicely Done Shino!

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Re: Shino_Arcieri's drawing

Post by Kurosaka "Ery" Erika on Sat 20 Sep 2014 - 4:07

CI's request number 2 is done... Rico in her 20 Y-O her outfit is inspired by both Ferro, and Jimmy Moriarty (they dude in my avatar Razz )
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Post by crazyidiot78 on Sat 20 Sep 2014 - 8:22

cheers On Cloud 9 Not Worthy! head bang w00t! awesome as usual
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Re: Shino_Arcieri's drawing

Post by Kiskaloo on Sat 20 Sep 2014 - 10:41

I LOVE that one. head bang

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Re: Shino_Arcieri's drawing

Post by TeaTimeNinja on Sat 20 Sep 2014 - 15:38

YES, you drew my favorite character! looks stellar man!

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Re: Shino_Arcieri's drawing

Post by Kurosaka "Ery" Erika on Tue 23 Sep 2014 - 15:20

so here's a spoilah for Claes drawing

I have some doubt.. but it looks like Claes to me... not sure on everyone's perspective thou Razz
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Re: Shino_Arcieri's drawing

Post by Thescarredman on Tue 23 Sep 2014 - 16:25

So far, so great, Yuki. I think you've got her, right down to the thoughtful, slightly troubled expression.
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Re: Shino_Arcieri's drawing

Post by taerKitty on Tue 23 Sep 2014 - 19:46

TSM stole my thoughts (you should stop doing that, man.  It's not cool.)

You're making huge inroads on something very subtle and intangible: expressions.  

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