Amsel & Luce hit FF.net!

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Amsel & Luce hit FF.net!

Post by John_234 on Sat 27 Jul 2013 - 4:28

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I've finally decided to revisit where my first characters started. To go from the top to where they are now, with all manner of cool gadgets and skills. I think Luce always struck people as interesting due to her specialization and lack of voice, and I think the concept in itself merited some work outside of RB.

I've written on FF.net for a while in varying degrees, but this is my first GSG work there. I hope it's not too bad a start.

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Post by Il Direttore on Sat 27 Jul 2013 - 11:34

Your characterization pops vibrantly, and that's really the first step isn't it? I'm intrigued by the way you've painted the RB here, and your non-application of the handgun was very very interesting. Symbolism? Intentional or not, you've definitely shown that Amsel is a guy who isn't going to make this relationship revolve around work, but around something deeper.

Excellent work, sir.

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Post by John_234 on Sat 27 Jul 2013 - 15:30

Thank you.

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