GSG: Coup De-Grace

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GSG: Coup De-Grace

Post by Kurosaka "Ery" Erika on Wed 31 Jul 2013 - 8:46

GSG: Coup De-Grace
 
Chapter one: Dell'angelo della morte, guardiano dei cieli

While i was in the hospital; all i can think of is how to kill a person from one mile away... then it hit me... why don't i use the GSG Canon character fused into the story? (which to put that aside, i was pissed for no reason at all Razz)

And during that time too, i began my story plotting and typing right on the bed (Although my right hand is INJURED), and finally I've created my 'first' dialogue-style writing story. any comment for improving the story is welcomed.
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Post by Kurosaka "Ery" Erika on Thu 8 Aug 2013 - 22:20

Chapter Two: El-Assessino

although some delay, thanks to Poloselite23, we've managed to finish it (and corrected it)
also thanks to Topgear for providing his scene on the story.
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Post by Kurosaka "Ery" Erika on Mon 12 Aug 2013 - 1:51

Chapter 3: Storia O Pazzo
 

slight delay, but big thanks to topGear's helping in checking any error, the chapter's finally done

[edit: I've changed some of the story's font to differentiate the storyline text]
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Post by Kurosaka "Ery" Erika on Sun 8 Sep 2013 - 20:03

Chapter Four: Diapason

well, after so much procrastinating, I've decide to release the chapter with one third of the story being uncompleted; whilst the next part will be completed in chapter 5
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Post by tremec6speed on Sun 8 Sep 2013 - 21:37

Fun read Kuro, very enjoyable,  action-packed.   head bang
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Post by Kurosaka "Ery" Erika on Sun 29 Sep 2013 - 1:06

chapter 5:Musica La Morte

too much delayment, and finally finishing the chapter
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Post by Kurosaka "Ery" Erika on Sun 27 Oct 2013 - 13:08

after reading the further notes and rule, i decide to abandon this story, focusing back to 'Number 264" fanfiction.

this story will be officially closed and deleted in a couple of days
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