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Post by Trielafan on Tue 30 Sep 2014 - 19:59

Hi all.  It's been awhile since I last posted on here.  I wanted to let you know I'm gradually working on a fanfic idea that I've been thinking about for months now.  I know I'm not alone in being disappointed in how the Manga ended.  Yeah, there was closure pretty much all around; but by the time you got to the end, you missed your favorite characters.  My story picks up shortly after Mario Bossi reveals what really happened when Hilshire rescued Triela from the snuff film hideout.  It goes in an alternate direction; giving the handlers, starting from Hilshire and Allesandro up to Jose and even Jean more of a "humane" approach to how they feel about their cyborgs.

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Post by Kiskaloo on Tue 30 Sep 2014 - 20:34

Looking forward to reading it!

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Post by Kurosaka "Ery" Erika on Tue 30 Sep 2014 - 20:35

you got me pumped mate,will be waiting for it Very Happy
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Post by Trielafan on Tue 30 Sep 2014 - 21:41

Thanks!  I know there's those that are thinking the notion of an alternate ending where at least some of the girls survive has been beaten around the bush all too often in fanfics, but I'm standing firm with my version.  I give it some of my own liberties (complete with swearing that was pretty rare in the Manga and absent in the anime), though I'm going spend time fine tuning it to make the events believable.

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Post by crazyidiot78 on Wed 1 Oct 2014 - 3:42

Woohoo another story where the girls survive.  I can't wait.
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Post by Trielafan on Wed 1 Oct 2014 - 9:06

crazyidiot78 wrote:Woohoo another story where the girls survive.  I can't wait.
No one will hold a gun to your head to read it, I promise.

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Post by taerKitty on Wed 1 Oct 2014 - 9:50

Get writing!  Looking forward to it.

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Post by Thescarredman on Wed 1 Oct 2014 - 12:48

I'm not likely to ever bend canon to give the girls that sort of happy ending, but I do enjoy reading such stories when they're well-done. Welcome back, and I'm looking forward to seeing some post from you.
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Post by Trielafan on Wed 1 Oct 2014 - 20:10

Thescarredman wrote:I'm not likely to ever bend canon to give the girls that sort of happy ending, but I do enjoy reading such stories when they're well-done. Welcome back, and I'm looking forward to seeing some post from you.


It's not going to be a super happy ending I'm thinking of, believe me.  In fact, I'm even thinking of spawning a new adventure series with my surviving character(s).  We'll see.

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Post by taerKitty on Wed 1 Oct 2014 - 21:34

Hey, if it's quality writing, deep characterization, and poignant emotion, a happy ending, super or not, it will be worth reading.  Of course, I seem to have some strange reputation around these parts, so I'm not sure how other people will take to my saying this.

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Post by Alfisti on Thu 2 Oct 2014 - 2:47

taerkitty wrote:Hey, if it's quality writing, deep characterization, and poignant emotion, a happy ending, super or not, it will be worth reading.  Of course, I seem to have some strange reputation around these parts, so I'm not sure how other people will take to my saying this.
Mostly it prompts me to ask: who are you, and what have you done with taerkitty.  Incoming! 



@Trielafan... shall look to it with interest.

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Re: Working on a new fanfic (spoilers from Manga)

Post by taerKitty on Thu 2 Oct 2014 - 3:23

I'm writing a happy story, aren't I?

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Post by Thescarredman on Thu 2 Oct 2014 - 11:28

taerkitty wrote:I'm writing a happy story, aren't I?

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Re: Working on a new fanfic (spoilers from Manga)

Post by taerKitty on Thu 2 Oct 2014 - 12:31

I'm sorry for hijacking TrielaFan's thread.  I'll continue this in the On Writing thread.

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