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Post by West Nile on Sun 27 Apr 2008 - 23:33

Just a place where i can post my fics and make my "open challenges" for artists and writers and members

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Post by Nachtsider on Sun 27 Apr 2008 - 23:46

Any challenges at present?

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Post by West Nile on Sun 27 Apr 2008 - 23:49

Challenge one:

fan artists

can someone do a comic strip for this skit i made...

frame one: Henreitta and Joze sitting in a van, Henrietta looks depressed Joze is sipping a juice box

frame two: Henrietta: I just wanted to make you happy Joze...

frame three: Joze: It really is nothing. You took the target out and did your job.

frame four:Henrietta- but~
Joze- here care to finish this for me *hands her the juice box*

frame five- (u can change the view in this shot) Henrietta- *to self* finish his juice? Fratello can't kiss but an direct one... could it be? *reaches for the box*

frame six- Jean- *taking the box* how many times do i have to say drinks are not allowed in the van
Henreitta- My kiiisss~

frame seven- Joze: but Jean wasting food ain't good either.

frame eight- Jean: you right...

frame nine- Jean: *sips on the box*
Henrietta- 0_0

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Post by West Nile on Sun 27 Apr 2008 - 23:50

challenge two:

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a drawing of Elsa in her teens with her hair down ^_^

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Post by West Nile on Sun 27 Apr 2008 - 23:50

challenge 3:

writers

a name for Claes

Danjo, sintendo, sasahara and nachtsider have already submitted

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Post by emperor on Sun 27 Apr 2008 - 23:54

West Nile wrote:challenge two:

fan artists

a drawing of Elsa in her teens with her hair down ^_^

Would be worth for waiting this one.

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Post by West Nile on Sun 27 Apr 2008 - 23:58

yup, i really really wanna see that ^_^

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Post by West Nile on Mon 28 Apr 2008 - 0:13

Scars & Bullets (part 1 of 5)

A vicious gunfight with terrorist leads to the discovery of a boy whose “talents” may parallel too even the most experienced fratellos. However he has no memory of his origins and does not seem to know his true potential. He impresses the handlers and receives the girls’ respect, can they shape this boy to the ultimate assassin… or is he already one.

Rated K+ Adventure/Romance 22 chapters

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Post by West Nile on Mon 28 Apr 2008 - 0:21

Chocolates & Bullets (a valentines special)

Henrietta & Joze one-shot fluff for Valentines day: Henrietta gets Joze chocolaes for valentines, Joze was not responsible, the unthinkable insues.

Rated: K General/Humor 2 chapters
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Post by Probit Return on Tue 29 Apr 2008 - 14:06

I'd be all over challange two if I had a scanner. I think I may have to bust out the digital camera and see if I can give it a try, even though I always screw up the lighting.

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Re: The West Nile Corner

Post by West Nile on Sun 4 May 2008 - 0:11

challenge four:

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Elsa in loli goth outfit, and with only one pony tail... yeah im quite a sucker for Elsa!


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Post by sasahara17 on Sun 4 May 2008 - 23:48

so i'm not the only one who thinks elsa will look good in a ponytail (fav hairstyle). i second nile's request. and make it a goth loli maid outfit!

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Post by Nachtsider on Sun 4 May 2008 - 23:55

You mean dark-hued/dark-themed Victorian ladies' garb?

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Post by Sakura on Fri 9 May 2008 - 3:36

challenge two:

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a drawing of Elsa in her teens with her hair down ^_^

Okay, here's my attempt at it. Elsa has the frowning, yet embarrassed look going on sweat :

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Post by West Nile on Fri 9 May 2008 - 3:52

tnx Sakura

lol it's like she's saying "what is it Lauro? didn't expect that i have curves or something?"

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Post by emperor on Fri 9 May 2008 - 4:26

West Nile wrote:tnx Sakura

lol it's like she's saying "what is it Lauro? didn't expect that i have curves or something?"

Awesome!

Gothic Elsa?

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Post by West Nile on Fri 9 May 2008 - 4:27

It's challenge 2, teenage Elsa

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Post by West Nile on Sun 11 May 2008 - 2:58

Other stuff i did ^_^

Youtube Video:
Gunslinger Girl Lui Si Chiama, Henrietta tribute

A tribute to Henrietta and Joze, song was sang by Henrietta herself! title is Lui Si Chiama

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=suedwvjLcxI

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Post by West Nile on Sun 11 May 2008 - 3:01

Youtube Video
Gunslinger Girl- Rico's story, Innocence

The story of the GSG's most Innocent operative. After Avril Lavigne's song Innocence

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1QIGYOWsrdM&feature=user


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Post by Sakura on Mon 12 May 2008 - 0:26

In your OC profiles, who's the cute little girl you posted? Is she your lil sister?
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Post by West Nile on Mon 12 May 2008 - 0:32

teehee, my personal Gunslinger Girl ^_^

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Post by West Nile on Tue 13 May 2008 - 3:06

I promised myself never to do this again...
... today I broke that promise Laughing

Rated R- 18, not for people below the age of 18 (which is ironic given that the im 17)

A Great Stranger
Nothing more than one big fantasy for Claes... a product of this thread: http://gunslinger-girl.up-with.com/story-discussion-room-f1/time-for-papa-hilshire-t591-75.htm#17765

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A Great Stranger

It is another boring day in the life of Claes, another boring day in my life.

I made my regular, monotonous rounds around the compound and stopped at my regular stops, the music room, the clinic, the kitchen. Finally I took my last stop before heading to the bed room, my library. I took one long look at my bookcase and realized that I’m too bored to read anything about rocks, plants or vegetables. So I grabbed a ladder and climbed the top most shelf where I kept -my secret stash- and grabbed the novel that I have been curious about for the past few days.

My Secret Life by Henry Ashbee, I don’t know if I am suppose to be reading this but if it’s here I guess it’s ok. Besides I remember someone once say “Good soldiers read all kinds of books.” Maybe it was my father who said that.

I heard the door open slowly. It dawned on me that I must have forgotten to lock the door but I was too lethargic and drowsy to be interrupted by an intrusion. Too inconvenienced by the vexation that was interrupting my sexual thoughts, I continued to sleep naked flatly on my stomach. The covers were thrown off and pulled off to the side of me. I was uncovered and exposed in nudity. I was out in the bare open.

Wait, when was I naked and when did I fall asleep?

As I lay on my bed, a pair of hands began massaging my shoulders and arms. I felt soft and tender loving lips on my mouth and then touching my neck with dozens of butterfly kisses. My neck was then rubbed and stroked so much to my delight and contentment while I lay motionless and frozen with the enchantment of lust.

As the stranger continued to touch me, my wrists were worked melodiously and my fingers were kneaded sensuously. This stranger ran his hands up my neck manipulating my temples and massaging the top of my head until I was woozy and faint.

Lightheaded and almost giddy, I wanted to turn over but the weight of my slumber and enjoyment wouldn't let me budge an inch from where I lay naked stripped in an unadulterated state of spotlight and exposure.

In torturous agony, I felt paralyzed. The famine of my hunger for him increased my appetite for more stimulation. Giving into my selfishness and coveted desire for ultimate intensity, I laid powerless and numb in anticipation of an overwhelming orgasm.

"But, not too soon impatient woman," I convinced myself willfully.

Next, I felt the soothing, gentle touch of a tongue going up and down the middle of my back and spine while my shoulders were still being manipulated with strong hands. The stranger's hands squeezed my back pressing against my ribs gently and arousingly.

I felt the tingling of heat and release of my blood, sinuously flowing throughout my entire body. With a fervor awareness and eagerness, I impatiently sought more.

Moving his brazen hands down towards my thighs, he continued to maneuver my body more compellingly. His chafing of my inner thighs caused me to moan in ecstasy.

In my inner thoughts, I was begging for him to stroke me where it felt most pleasing but he wouldn't. Instead, he continued to increase my meandering torment of amplifying pleasure with his masculine touch.

"Just wait and linger sweetheart till you can't take anymore," the stranger murmured.

I tried to hold my fire inside but my blood was boiling in a torrid blistering inferno centered inside my loins. The cool air conditioning wafted across my nude and erotically beleaguered body. I couldn't move. I wouldn't move. I didn't move.

As fingers trickled between my thighs and teased the outer labia my clit, reaching the mound of Venus, I yearned for his 'langer' inside of me.

He stalled sticking his member inside of me while he was provoking me and teasing me causing a deeper desire for him inside of me. He turned me over and began kissing me furiously.

Who was this person? This man felt familiar but peculiar at the same time.

I managed to reach for his member which was enlarged, inflamed and substantial.

The stranger clutched my shoulders with his open grasp and gently laid me down on the bed. He felt my arms while filtering back up and down me, touching my enlarged nipples and tits. With my erect nipples in his mouth, I feared what was about to transpire next.

As he rubbed me down towards my ribcage, a finger brushed inside my soft thighs. He entered my hot, wet, and climaxing fire within my saturated loins. I was still enchanted and mesmerized by the mystery that bequeathed me with him touching me.

His tongue began to titillate my labia and the glans of my clitoris. While he was going down on me sucking the forbidden territory of my clitoral hood and swallowing my juices licking the thin lining, he was violating me and seducing me in the drunkenness of my temperament and console.

I was positioned on my bed, embarrassed and self-conscious now at feeling so good exposing my nakedness in front of this stranger.

My embarrassment was short-lived as he started jolting his tongue flickering into me. Embracing what was about to ensue, I began moaning and whimpering at the pleasure I was feeling.

Combating the pugnacious orgasm that was beginning to erupt while trying to hold back my screams, I skirmished and then relinquished all control as I cried out in agony and with emitted pleasure.

I heard the stranger pant with desire. He couldn't resist me now as he put his hard, swollen, erect member into womanhood watching me struggle in plight uncontrollably.

He massaged my legs up and down twisting my ankles sideways.

Pushing my stomach upward and whirling me around, I adjusted my body resting on my hands knees.

By gosh, he's not through with me yet!

I was feeling euphoric and dense to the pleasure I was enduring passionately and single-mindedly. Keenly, he entered me. I began to orgasm quickly, excitedly and overpoweringly. He kept thrusting into me with his stiff and upright member.

"Stop, stop," I uttered but the words wouldn't come out. I started squeezing him from the inside as I heard him ache with discomfort but pleasure.

The stranger kept propelling himself in and out of me. As I tried to expel him from my seared loins, he plunged into me deeper instead.

The driving force was reaching a pinnacle. My womanhood was peaking with a heightening culmination of monumental proportion. I couldn't tolerate his presence any longer.

My next orgasm was so intense; yet he wouldn't stop. Suffering with intensity and power, I accepted his victory allowing him to take full advantage of me.

The stranger came inside of me deeply squirting his seeds into my blistering sex. He clutched my shoulders seizing the back of my neck encompassing me with his tongue and lips.

He arched me over as he started injecting his retargeted himself between my breasts and then snatching at them.

I wept in awe and worship of this man.

He was hard again and penetrated me inflexibly and rapidly.

He pulled out and performed oral sex on me instead. Not knowing where he was finding this endurance, I came again withering in my satisfaction and blissful flight.

As he entered my drenched womanhood again I lay back with a lack of control.

I felt the saturation of his masculinity as my body was trembling for continuance and disbelief of the longevity of his lovemaking.

As he climaxed inside me once again, my orgasm was so intense that I didn't know where he began or where he ended.

I rolled back over onto my stomach, naked and satisfied. There was a numbed feeling throughout my body brushing over my shoulders, legs, back and inside my loins. I was uplifted and worriless while no longer in need.

Before I knew it, I was awake. There was no one in my room and it seems the sun had set. “Was it just a dream?” I asked myself. I sat up to be greeted by darkness. So I did lock the room after all, I thought to myself as I looked at the door. I examined myself and got up to leave. Before doing so I had to wipe the fluid that was in between my legs and the sweat of my brow. Then I tossed the novel back on its spot on the shelf.

I think I’ll “finish” it some other time…


I had to put it here in fear that FF.net will kick me out for this. It's not like i can describe it as "rated M, One BIG lemon"


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Post by Nachtsider on Tue 13 May 2008 - 3:10

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Isn't it possible to write erotica without using the euphemisms 'cock', 'twat', 'pussy', 'asshole', 'cunt', 'tits' and their ilk? I find them vulgar and distasteful, and feel that they really take away from your narrative, which is otherwise okay.

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Post by West Nile on Tue 13 May 2008 - 3:11

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i tried real hard to shake those off, believe me!

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Post by Nachtsider on Tue 13 May 2008 - 3:14

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Let's see you do away with them completely. I know it's within your ability.

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Post by West Nile on Tue 13 May 2008 - 3:23

alryt, revised... im actually proud i managed that...

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Post by emperor on Thu 15 May 2008 - 1:06

Good rate-R fic,West!!

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Re: The West Nile Corner

Post by Danjo3 on Thu 15 May 2008 - 1:30

Since I have no idea where to even start on this, I’ll just politely walk away and leave the discussion to men of greater minds then my own. Guh?

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Re: The West Nile Corner

Post by West Nile on Thu 15 May 2008 - 3:44

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Re: The West Nile Corner

Post by Wileama on Thu 15 May 2008 - 10:30

Danjo3 wrote:Since I have no idea where to even start on this, I’ll just politely walk away and leave the discussion to men of greater other minds then my own. Guh?
Fixed.

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Re: The West Nile Corner

Post by LoC978 on Thu 15 May 2008 - 19:11

*walks cheerfully into thread*
*glances through content*
Guh?
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Re: The West Nile Corner

Post by sasahara17 on Thu 15 May 2008 - 20:46

Nile, you have just made my day.

If I could, I'd swear eternal loyalty to you. Except I'd have to drop my current oath for the Farmer Girl. Oh well.

That's all I have to say.

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Re: The West Nile Corner

Post by Danjo3 on Fri 16 May 2008 - 1:47

LoC978 wrote:*walks cheerfully into thread*
*glances through content*
Guh?
*runs screaming out of thread*
Truth be told, I just politely walked until I got out the front door. Then I ran screaming.

PS: If I’ve said it once, I’ve said it a hundred times:

Just when you think this forum has finally hit rock bottom, it always somehow manages to go one step further.

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Re: The West Nile Corner

Post by Nachtsider on Fri 16 May 2008 - 1:59

Bottomless pit is bottomless.

Welcome to the real world.

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Re: The West Nile Corner

Post by Danjo3 on Fri 16 May 2008 - 3:40

Nachtsider wrote:Bottomless pit is bottomless.
If you stare into the Abyss long enough, the Abyss stares back at you.

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Post by Nachtsider on Fri 16 May 2008 - 4:33

Thus spoke Zarathustra.

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Re: The West Nile Corner

Post by Wileama on Fri 16 May 2008 - 10:28

But say we dig all the way through the planet? What then? Will we just start falling back the other way, only to be trapped at the center as a result of wind resistance?

Or am I taking this metaphor to seriously?

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Re: The West Nile Corner

Post by Danjo3 on Fri 16 May 2008 - 11:08

Wileama wrote:But say we dig all the way through the planet? What then? Will we just start falling back the other way, only to be trapped at the center as a result of wind resistance?

Or am I taking this metaphor to seriously?
I’m afraid this forum defies all laws of physics. Laughing

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Re: The West Nile Corner

Post by Guest on Fri 16 May 2008 - 11:44

Just when you think this forum has finally hit rock bottom, it always somehow manages to go one step further.

yeah.

...is it just me, or is the forum sloooooowly hitting rock bottom now? There's not much new topic that would draw lots of interest or vibe to anyone these days...

me bored :(

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Re: The West Nile Corner

Post by West Nile on Mon 23 Jun 2008 - 2:10

Challenge 5:

fanartist

im hoping for an aspiring artist to draw this scene:

Henrietta and Triela standing behind a lemonade stand, the sign says [lemonade made from fresh lemons] it's a standard wooden stall that u see in old cartoons like snoopy. there is a pitcher of yellow liquid on the table ofcourse, and Etta and Triela smiling at the reader trying to look as cute as possible.

then there is another stand next door, it is manned by Angie and Rico. it is a gatorade stand and the sign says ["gatorade" made from fresh alligators!!] Laughing. still a standard stall, except that the pitcher is filled with a red liquid... and we have Rico and Angie smilling innocently at the reader as well :lollol:

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Post by West Nile on Fri 1 May 2009 - 10:21

Challenge 6

still fanartists!

now i really wanna see a comic stip of this scene

frame one
*Henrietta and Joze staring at an "impenetrable" crowd
Joze: i guess the only way out of here is through that...
Henrietta: But Joze... we could get seperted

frame two
Joze: i guess you hold on to my hand then
Henrietta :yessssss!!!

frame three
*Joze just stairs at Henreitta, she blushes*

frame four
Joze: on second thought, just hold on to my pants instead
Henrietta: awwww

frame five
5 min later

frame six
*Joze with no henrietta, facing a secuirity guard*
Joze: umm... have you seen a little girl pass by, holding a pair of pants?
*o yeah, he's in his underwear, boxers or briefs, your choice Laughing*

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Re: The West Nile Corner

Post by Kiskaloo on Fri 1 May 2009 - 11:11

West Nile wrote:then there is another stand next door, it is manned by Angie and Rico. it is a gatorade stand and the sign says ["gatorade" made from fresh alligators!!] Laughing. still a standard stall, except that the pitcher is filled with a red liquid...

I am suddenly reminded of Dan Akroyd's "Bass-O-Matic" skit from SNL.

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Re: The West Nile Corner

Post by West Nile on Thu 11 Jun 2009 - 5:13

Guess who finally got the time to make a new vid?

I DID!! dancin\\'

Gunslinger Girl Bianceneve Bruno, Triela Video

Yay Triela!! Teddies

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8Mr4Faj_kP0

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Re: The West Nile Corner

Post by Guest on Thu 11 Jun 2009 - 14:56

I liked it a lot, it's about time someone made an video with that song.

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Re: The West Nile Corner

Post by austinhowell on Tue 29 Jun 2010 - 14:26

hell yeah i loved that video and great job on that claes erotica story u have some serious skills man GOAL have u thought about doing others using other girls triela,rico etc.

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