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Re: Time for papa Hilshire

Post by West Nile on Mon 12 May 2008 - 5:17

he'd probably say "with their tall, robust handlers"

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Re: Time for papa Hilshire

Post by Guest on Mon 12 May 2008 - 9:22

But with two selection available, I think Danjo-san would go for girl-girl. I don't know...

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...gee...somehow, I'm thinking of writing Claes as a mark for the end of the SWA. I mean, a 'Claes kills all' fic. She could be this gentle girl who manipulates other to her liking and kills everyone in the process, laughing hysterically in the end...

...might as well draft something up Laughing

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Post by Danjo3 on Mon 12 May 2008 - 10:19

Nachtsider wrote:Would you rather have people pairing the girls up with each other, Danjo, or with their thinly-disguised-self-insert male cyborg OCs?
Youíve got me there my friend. As Iíve said before - our poor girls canít seem to catch a break.

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Re: Time for papa Hilshire

Post by Guest on Mon 12 May 2008 - 11:21

Youíve got me there my friend. As Iíve said before - our poor girls canít seem to catch a break

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They'd say: STOP IT! STOP THIS UNNECESSARY PAIRINGS AND ALL! JUST STOP IT! WE'RE TIRED~! WE'RE CHILD ASSASSINS! NOT YOUR PLAY-DOLL OR YOUR SEX DOLLS!! STOP IT!! I SAY STOP IT!!! STOP IT OR I'LL KILL YOU ALL!!! (grabs shotgun) STOP IT!!!!!! --Triela

One more move with these pairings, and I'll surely crack your bones to pieces (takes glasses off) --Claes

...maybe.


Well, off for another gruesome short-fic. This time its Claes (I just need a break from my Extended Essay)

-This is more of an inset from Triela-kill-everyone, or ending F. A moment before Triela went insane. snipe

Inspired by Nacht-sen's idea of having Claes trying to talk her out of it

The waining month in the Agency had seemingly tire Claes more than ever. Triela had grown weary, and all her theories she proposed to her stating that 'Hillshire lives' were all chunks of nonsense and were literally shot down by herself.

As days went by, Triela grew wearily suspicious of her surroundings and overly cautious of her friends and their handlers. Claes was no exception. She recognized after Triela constantly kept feeding herself with her own belief, and her over obsessiveness on Hillshire is what caused her to do so. As a week comes to a close, Claes recognized Triela as literally someone else; someone she never knew of, yet was so close...

"T-Triela...? W-what are you doing?" Claes ask hesitantly

She turns her head slowly to Claes, keeping her shotgun close to her "...Checking my shotgun; cleaning them if necessary."

"B-but you won't be in any mission soon, right? I mean, the agency has decided that..."

Her short remarks was interrupted by a sudden, hysterical laugh coming from the very figure she tried talking to. She knew she had lost it...

...Triela had gone insane

"I will be in a mission...soon enough...don't get me wrong, Claes..."

"B-but Triela! I mean, Triela! Get a hold of yourself! I mean, i-its not the end of the world!"

"Oh it isn't..." Claes recognized her blank stare she gives as she talk to her. A devilish grin took shape in her lips "...not for Hillshire, that is."

another hysterical laugh, constantly getting louder and louder

"Triela! Please! Understand and accept it! Hillshire is gone and..."

With a sudden jerk of force, Claes was suddenly knocked down from her position. The barrel of Triela's M1897 fed into her. She trembles in fear

"That's what you think." Triela reply--coldly "...But of course, you're part of them, are you not?"

Kanashimi no mukou e to tadoritsukeru nara
Boku wa mou iranai yo nukumori mo ashita mo


As tears stream down her cheek, Claes raises her hand to plead for her life in fear. As if enjoying the expression she received, Triela stares blankly to her, smiling devilishly before pulling the trigger. A gunshot echoes through the dormitory, followed with a hysterical laugh by the blood-stained Triela...

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Post by Guest on Mon 12 May 2008 - 22:45

goodness gracious, what have I done by inspiring Panzer. Now he's unstoppable :buddy:

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Re: Time for papa Hilshire

Post by West Nile on Tue 13 May 2008 - 1:47

All these thread fics is making me want to write erotic one shots again... explicit ones...

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Re: Time for papa Hilshire

Post by KodokuRyuu on Tue 13 May 2008 - 13:37

I'm going to run and hide now before West writes something weird.

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Re: Time for papa Hilshire

Post by West Nile on Wed 14 May 2008 - 4:47


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Re: Time for papa Hilshire

Post by Guest on Wed 14 May 2008 - 7:24

Laughing

Read it. WONDERFUL!! *clapclapclapclap*

Wow, this thread actually spawns great ideas and all Laughing

But yeah, that really was one big lemon...sent my had imagining things and all.

Oooh boy, when I had the time I think I'll write something here again...might be another angst, romance, or whatever that come to my mind Laughing

For now, I'm off watching 'My Boy Jack'. Hope it give me some inspiration--glad to find a move about WW1

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Post by sasahara17 on Wed 14 May 2008 - 7:37

Despite the fact Claes-sama got a big shotgun slug to the face, I must say I'm impressed despite myself.

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Re: Time for papa Hilshire

Post by Nachtsider on Wed 14 May 2008 - 7:40

I honestly cannot picture Claes getting killed by an insanely homicidal Triela. I can, however, see Claes calming Triela down by talking to her, after which Triela comes to her senses, breaks down in tears at seeing the carnage she's caused, and then kills herself.

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Re: Time for papa Hilshire

Post by West Nile on Wed 14 May 2008 - 7:59

Panzer IV wrote:Laughing

Read it. WONDERFUL!! *clapclapclapclap*

Wow, this thread actually spawns great ideas and all Laughing


are we talking about the same thing here? or do u really complement porn that way... Puzzled

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Re: Time for papa Hilshire

Post by Guest on Wed 14 May 2008 - 9:21

Are we talking about the same thing here? or do u really complement porn that way...

I don't mean I compliment porn that way, but the way you write! Your witting style! The descriptive detail of it! Its awesome! I mean, it really did got me these 'pictures' running in my head, that's why it should receive such praise! I love the way it was written, and how it was detailed and fined to such finesse! Applause! Encore! Encore Very Happy

I honestly cannot picture Claes getting killed by an insanely homicidal Triela. I can, however, see Claes calming Triela down by talking to her, after which Triela comes to her senses, breaks down in tears at seeing the carnage she's caused, and then kills herself.

Laughing

Strangely, I can picture it the other way around :iia:

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