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Post by Guest on Sat 10 May 2008 - 10:20

Ok, I think I'll be returning to the fanfic world, so I'll be writing some stuff again. Hopefully, it would fulfill my undying thirst of creativity!

On a side note, if time provides, I'll be continuing some of my previous work left untouched--the humor of Gunslinger Girl in school for one is what I have in my list.


But as a start, I wrote this after I was inspired by the thread 'Time for Papa Hillshire'. And so here it is:

(note: I MIGHT integrate some of the already present events to the story, but that is undecided)

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4247663/1/The_Detectives_Daughter <<link

That's what I've done--so far. If there's any idea or stuff, please do tell! Other than that, I need a beta-reader. I think my grammar is still in a wee-bit of mess... gomen m-.-m

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Post by Guest on Wed 14 May 2008 - 12:41

Alright, here's the edit. Stayed up for this.

Added chapter in:

"The Detective's Daughter"

read it here >>> http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4247663/2/The_Detectives_Daughter

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Post by Guest on Sun 18 May 2008 - 12:42

Added another chapter.

Please read and review!

...also, I'm looking for a beta-reader; anyone willing?


read it here >>> http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4247663/3/The_Detectives_Daughter

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Post by LoC978 on Sun 18 May 2008 - 15:40

at least he didn't call himself a Frankfurter.

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Post by Tommygunner70 on Sun 18 May 2008 - 17:42

@LoC978 wrote:at least he didn't call himself a Frankfurter.

I dont get it....

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Post by Nachtsider on Sun 18 May 2008 - 19:53

A Frankfurter is a kind of sausage. Therefore, anybody who comes from Frankfurt would technically be a sausage in the context of the joke.

Y'know, maybe we should have Hillshire be a native of Frankfurt. That might explain all the sausage jokes going around...

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Post by Tommygunner70 on Mon 19 May 2008 - 5:25

Oh, now I get it.

lol, yeah I'd have to agree with you Nacht.
Then again, sausage can also be blamed on the fact that the germans just love there Curry Wurst. Its a sausage you'd cook on a hot plate, and is dipped in Curry. once a year, there is a Giant Christmass market in Munster, the mayority of the food stands serves "Duitse Bock- und CurryWurst"

Actually, the Bock and CurryWurst are the same; only differance is that the Currywurst is chopped into pieces and dipped in Curry.
Bockwurst:

Currywurst:

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Post by ElfenMagix on Mon 19 May 2008 - 19:07

The obvious Hillshire joke is....

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Post by Nachtsider on Mon 19 May 2008 - 19:09

'More flavorful'.

Heh.

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Post by ElfenMagix on Mon 19 May 2008 - 19:12

Sorta makes you wonder, "What's on a girl's mind?"

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Post by LoC978 on Mon 19 May 2008 - 19:57

lol kielbasa...
reminds me of a song
*Imagines Hillshire as Jack Black*
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Post by Nachtsider on Mon 19 May 2008 - 20:20

Hillshire's more Dave Seville than Jack Black, you ask me...

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Post by ElfenMagix on Mon 19 May 2008 - 20:50

I dont know...
Hillshire with 3 Chipmunks? What would Triela say?!!

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Post by Nachtsider on Mon 19 May 2008 - 21:07

The comparison I'm making is that Hillshire's got a wild child in Triela that he can't really control. Plus, he looks more like Dave than Jack.

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Post by Tommygunner70 on Tue 20 May 2008 - 1:35

@ElfenMagix wrote:The obvious Hillshire joke is....

Though I dont know anything about my Grandma's language (she was polish), I can tell that this isn't a German sausage, but a Polish one.

the "Polska Kielbasa" kinda gives that away to me.

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Post by Guest on Wed 21 May 2008 - 11:52

OK, finished another chapter. God I should stop writing for awhile and focus on studying!

But here it is:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4247663/4/The_Detectives_Daughter


Now for future upcoming chapter, I think I'll say it bluntly:
If you've read the latest, I mentioned 'all the operatives' and so I ask this:

is there anyone here willing to have their OCs involved in this chase? A guaranteed conflict between other members on who will get to Hillshire first and a battle between Triela and your OC is guaranteed. Very Happy

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Post by Guest on Fri 13 Jun 2008 - 8:18

At last after a long silence the story is updated!! No thanks to school and homework...took everything.

Anyways, here's the next chapter!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4247663/5/The_Detectives_Daughter

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Post by Guest on Tue 15 Jul 2008 - 9:34


And there's the next one. I apologize for the time it took and for not being able to show it to the respective authors m-_-m

I'm losing my precious time bit-by-bit, and I don't know how long will this fic go on, but I'll keep writing that's for sure!

If there are any comments or something that needs to be change, do PM me or post a review in FF.net


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Post by ElfenMagix on Tue 15 Jul 2008 - 16:15

It was great, Panzer. I liked it. Rachel's protrayl was excellent. I'll post a comment on FF.net when I get to it.
Got lots to do as I'm moving my old site around to another...

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Post by Whatface on Wed 16 Jul 2008 - 6:30


Anyway... Great stuff! I'll be looking forward to your next chapter

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Post by ElfenMagix on Wed 16 Jul 2008 - 14:04

:lol!: @ Muffin

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Post by Guest on Tue 22 Jul 2008 - 17:33

Alright, after I finish this chapter, next chapter would be a fight between Triela and an OC


so.... (for those who participated)



who would like their OC to face Triela first?

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Post by ElfenMagix on Tue 22 Jul 2008 - 21:11

Just toss coins and see what comes up voodoo doll Awesome!

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Post by Guest on Wed 23 Jul 2008 - 16:57

Tossed the coin and...


Congrats Elfen-sen! Rachel will be the first!

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Post by ElfenMagix on Wed 23 Jul 2008 - 17:02

ACK!!!

Rachel: I'll get the mission weapon ready and 4 extra clips (of 10 rounds each)...
Fernando: Thats my girl! Just dont become that dsgruntal lil female dog if you fail, I still luvs you anyways...
Rachel: I wont, just point me to where to go...

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Post by Whatface on Wed 23 Jul 2008 - 21:34

How did you decide with a coin? Wouldn't a dice be more appropriate?

Just read the preview and the whole Sophia vs Frederick thing is just LOL!!
"kraut" HAHAHAHA

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Post by Guest on Thu 24 Jul 2008 - 4:02

Get a 100 or 500 coins, right the names of the OC on one side and another on the other side, and use a tally board. Whoever ends up at the top gets to face Triela for the first time.

Two-three more chapters; after that OCs better prepare themselves!

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Post by Guest on Tue 29 Jul 2008 - 2:03

Added another chapter after some major corrections were made!


Detective's Daughter, Chapter 6

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4247663/7/The_Detectives_Daughter

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Post by Whatface on Tue 29 Jul 2008 - 3:28

Hmm? I dont really see any major changes.

Cant wait till all hell breaks loose Very Happy

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Post by Guest on Tue 29 Jul 2008 - 4:10

I changed Sophia's line with a different one under West-san's request--save that for the best later :p

Did some grammar correction--although not much, I think its still insufficient. And well, that's about it!

Next chapter will be a more in-depth character involving Muffin, Rachel, Mina, Frederick, and Henrietta all conversing together :p

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Post by Whatface on Tue 29 Jul 2008 - 4:35

I changed Sophia's line with a different one under West-san's request--save that for the best later :p
Ah, I thought something was different Razz
I really liked that line


Next chapter will be a more in-depth character involving Muffin,
Rachel, Mina, Frederick, and Henrietta all conversing together :p
Whoa!! 5 ppl talking at once? Sounds complex... I mean, to write it in a way that wont confuse people

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Post by West Nile on Tue 29 Jul 2008 - 7:56

@Whatface wrote:
I changed Sophia's line with a different one under West-san's request--save that for the best later :p
Ah, I thought something was different Razz
I really liked that line


i had it changed for use for an actual fight

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Post by Guest on Tue 29 Jul 2008 - 11:25

i had it changed for use for an actual fight

I have the event planned out in further chapters ^^

I'll be sure to display the capability of a 3rd Generation cyborg and its superiority over others :p

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Post by Guest on Wed 13 Aug 2008 - 10:07

No, I haven't post the next update--but will be soon! I've asked Colo-sen to be my beta-reader to help me correct grammar faults and all while I myself am improving.


So here I ask to anyone who possess excellence in the English language,

asking anyone to be a beta-reader for 'The Detective's Daughter'? I'll send a fic through PM system. That way hopefully I can get things done a lot quicker! Very Happy

Anyone willing to help? :3

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Post by Guest on Thu 14 Aug 2008 - 9:58

Whew! Ok, I've posted the next chapter--edited by Colonel Marksman, so good grammar all thanks to him! Thank you, thank you!

Further fix/replacement of previous chapters as well as current chapters will happen in the future. I feel the need of fixing some things to ease reading^^

But anyway, here it is:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4247663/8/The_Detectives_Daughter



Next chapter is done, but I'm currently editing things that needs correction such as character depiction accuracy, way of speech, grammar, etc. Hopefully I'll get it done this week!

UPCOMING FIGHT:

ElfenMagix's Rachel F. vs. Triela Hartmann

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Post by ElfenMagix on Thu 14 Aug 2008 - 21:34

I like what I have seen, BTW.

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Post by Whatface on Thu 14 Aug 2008 - 22:40

*reads chap*

*finds something uncool*

*sends PM requesting edit*

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Post by Guest on Fri 15 Aug 2008 - 1:32

*receives PM request*

*gets editing*

*PING! Done!*

What do you think? ^^

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Post by West Nile on Fri 15 Aug 2008 - 6:10

well done... u missed one 'mia'

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Post by Guest on Fri 15 Aug 2008 - 9:15

Corrected! I think everything should be in order now...


Aaaand to add to that, I've finished editing the 8th chapter! Now published and ready for the read:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4247663/9/The_Detectives_Daughter

This marks the first engagement between Triela and an OC. Triela vs Rachel, a fight for survival and truth^^

Further chapter would involve and even more violent combat (I have my eyes set on some fratellos...hawhawhaw). This is just the beginning^^

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Post by Whatface on Fri 15 Aug 2008 - 22:17

Chapter was friggin awesome! The fight was especially well written too!

*thumbs up*

ETA on next chapt? Very Happy

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Post by Guest on Sat 16 Aug 2008 - 6:03

yep, working on it!

Hopefully, next week Friday or earlier if possible.


Next chapter probably more into a play of emotions for the next chapter. Triela would wonder about Rachel's word, whether they (the operatives) deserve to choose. Rachel on the other hand, would be undergoing a rush of emotions from her encounter too.

Expect the arrival of the third team: Laine, Petrushka, Anica, etc.

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Post by Guest on Tue 19 Aug 2008 - 3:05

Ok, I'm still working on the next chapter (which means I'm not done...yet) but am in the midst of confusion on who's who OCs (I know Muffin, Mina, Rachel, and Luke) and have constant trouble trying to check things.

So, just to ease readers (and myself when writing) I decided to put the OCs involved in the fic here and their respective authors.

Here goes:

-Frederick H. Koch : Panzer IV (mine)
-Gewehr Hess/Vato Falman : Panzer IV (mine)
-Anna Rutherford/Klaus Falman : Panzer IV (mine)
-Luke/Ehud Barrohk : Colonel Marksman
-Sophia/Wesley Scerio : West Nile
-Mina/Brandon Letuthio : West Nile
-Anica/Andrew Sontino : West Nile
-Muffin/Matthew West : Whatface
-Rachel/Fernando : ElfenMagix
-Rebecca/Megumi Sagara : Sasahara17 (I might need to reference FMP clash here...unless I mask the handler, which would ruin the plot -_-)
-Adrianna/Antonio : Probit Return
-Nero/Wendy Proietti : Probit Return
-Laine/Clayland Stanaway : rusty-spring
-Savyna/(not yet confirmed) : Triela (no, not Triela Hartmann)

...and I think that's all!

Oh wow what a list...but yeah, expect them to be encountering Triela in possibly CQC combat and gunfights with each other when sides appear :p

Of course, I'm not spoiling who takes who's side. Participating OC's authors have the right to know, of course^^

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Post by ElfenMagix on Tue 19 Aug 2008 - 21:40

Now That's A List!

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Post by Whatface on Wed 20 Aug 2008 - 3:32

You havent replied to my PM. Or was my idea too lame?

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Post by Guest on Wed 20 Aug 2008 - 8:44

The Muffin's idea one?

Oh ho ho! Don't worry!

You actually have a near-similar plan as I am^^

The difference is, I don't know how to execute it--you solved it!
Care to see Muffin vs Triela after 'the plan' is executed?^^

There's of course one individual who would get involved really deep. Of course its a secret for now, right? When the time is right, things will really-really go chaotic Razz

Right now I'll be focusing on Chapter 9--no combat yet. Chapter 10 works similarly, but will introduce the next battle, in chapter 11, against...now I wouldn't go that far on spoiling, would it? Another character from the GSG universe (non-OC) will be involved in Chapter 9 and would create significant trouble--for Triela.

Well, that's how far I'll spoil for now^^

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Post by Whatface on Wed 20 Aug 2008 - 23:01

So you was going to do something like that!

Uhh, I solved something? What did I solve?

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Post by ElfenMagix on Wed 20 Aug 2008 - 23:59

Panzer IV wrote:Another character from the GSG universe (non-OC) will be involved in Chapter 9 and would create significant trouble--for Triela.

Well, that's how far I'll spoil for now^^
Only character that can do that is Triela's Bear- Caligula...

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Post by Guest on Thu 21 Aug 2008 - 2:29

Uhh, I solved something? What did I solve?

I was thinking the same way on how to lure Triela out, but I don't know how to. At that, I am still wondering who will do that other than Sophia--and Sophia doesn't even know where Triela is until she is fully revealed (using the bait idea) THEN the...oh wait, spoiler2...

Frederick would follow the Agency, but in his terms would never try to involve innocents into the battle (e.g. hostages and such) due to his past. Muffin plans it out solves one thing, and eventually I have an idea how to make him agrees and supports the plan Wink

THAT is where the *said character* come to play. No, its not Caligula. It'll be someone you least expect would ruin Triela's life. Oh, I can ramble all day about future chapter but that wouldn't get this fic going anywhere :p

I'll finish it ASAP. ETA, Saturday or Sunday.

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Post by Whatface on Thu 21 Aug 2008 - 3:02

Panzer IV wrote:I was thinking the same way on how to lure Triela out, but I don't know how to.
Wasn't it obvious though?

Panzer IV wrote:At that, I am still wondering who will do that other than Sophia--and Sophia doesn't even know where Triela is until she is fully revealed (using the bait idea) THEN the...oh wait, spoiler2...
Muffin would gladly do it Very Happy

Panzer IV wrote:but in his terms would never try to involve innocents into the battle (e.g. hostages and such) due to his past.
Then he would be the opposite of Muffin.

Panzer IV wrote:Muffin plans it out solves one thing, and eventually I have an idea how to make him agrees and supports the plan Wink
Nekkid Triela pics? A whack to the balls?

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