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Post by sasahara17 on Sun 1 Jun 2008 - 23:18

Need some time to think about how the heck I'm going to run this operation, so I'll just stick this here again for the time being for everybody to discuss (again).

No doubt everyone's seen this a million times before, but I've made some changes to the story outline. Please read it though and if possible suggest how the writing team should approach this project.

This topic is also a the location where people interested in signing up for this colaborative work can express their intrest in joing.

Now, I have a headqache coming on. Excue me.

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Ninjas in the Caribbean; Legend of the German Sausage (working title)

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The Japanese Agents

Rico Croche
Elite
Kunoichi dispatched to Port Royal by Jean-sama to steal a special
sealed package that could alter the fate of Japan and maybe the world. Also aims to rescue
the ninja who was originally sent to steal it, Emilio.

Henrietta Croche
Not-so-Elite
Kunoichi accompanying Rico on her mission. As clumsy as Rico is agile,
Henrietta aims to impress her Onee-sama with her non-existent ninja
prowess. While clumsy and unskilled, 'Etta is irresistably cute.

Angelica Toni a.k.a. The Obsidian Butterfly

Legendary samurai sent by
a rival Daimyo, Lorenzo-sama, to secure the secret sealed package. Near
unbeatable swordsman, capable of cutting a ship in two. Happy go lucky
attitude.

Emilio Kavader
Elite ninja supposed to
have stolen the secret sealed package, but was captured by Triela and
locked up in a cell in the hold of the German Sausage. At least Peter is good company.

The Outlaws

Triela the Terrible
Legendary
pirate captain and one hell of a dangerously sexy and firery
swashbuckler. Captain of the German Sausage, fastest ship in the Caribbean, Atlantic and some say the South China Sea.

Victor 'Hillshire' Hartmann
First mate of the German Sausage. Most pitiful and underappreciated seaman in all the seven seas. Cares for Triela like his daughter, in return treated like a dog.

Elsa de Sica

Privateer
of the Spanish fleet, Elsa targets British naval vessels with almost
religious zeal. For the glory of his majesty, the great (handsome) Lauro-sama, she will
bring the English curs to heel.

Frederick Koch
Young
Bounty Hunter favoring outdated weapons. Aims to make a make for
himself by capturing the fabled pirate captain Triela the Terrible.

Petra and ‘Sandro
Two perverts who run the local brothel down at Tortuga. Their spy network is unrivaled in the Carribean, but there is a steep price to be paid for their services.

The English Navy

Admiral Claes Freda Joasson
Commander
of the Royal Navy in the Caribbean. Concerned with the increased pirate
activity in her waters, and that Spanish Privateer is becoming a big
torn in her side…

Peter
An English merchant
who was supposed to transport the secret sealed package into
Lorenzo-sama’s hands, but now is captive aboard the German Sausage. At least Emilio is good company.

Luke
The governor’s young son. The boy Commodore Claes is always trying to impress, but the fool never seems to notice.

Pinocchio

Captain of the Aurora. Defeated by Triela the Terrible so many times capturing her has become a personal vendetta for him. Arrives in the Caribbean hot the German Sausage’s trail.

Beatrice

England’s secret weapon. Codename ‘Bloodhound’.
Unstoppable killing machine, sent to the Caribbean to pacify the outlaw
element.Utterly ruthless. Smell aboard a ship drives her crazy though.

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Post by Awinnell on Mon 2 Jun 2008 - 7:54

whats the date setting for this ?

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Post by sasahara17 on Mon 2 Jun 2008 - 8:28

No idea.

How about I come back on Friday and see who's decided to sign up?

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Post by Awinnell on Mon 2 Jun 2008 - 9:13

sorry didn't mean to rush you ! i was asking because i know a fair bit about the Royal navy of Nelsons day ,but less about earlier
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Post by sasahara17 on Mon 2 Jun 2008 - 17:54

Interested in signing up?

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Post by Awinnell on Mon 2 Jun 2008 - 18:15

i'll give it a go !

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Post by sasahara17 on Tue 3 Jun 2008 - 4:49

Nice to know!

I'll have to wait until Friday to see who Elsa decides to jump on the ship.

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Post by sasahara17 on Thu 5 Jun 2008 - 21:57

Okay, it's Friday morn, and so far this project has just myself and Awinnell.

I think I'll extend the deadline until Sunday, but so far this looks like it's going to be a two person rowboat rather than a big nasty Pirate Ship.

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Post by emperor on Fri 6 Jun 2008 - 1:45

You just have to make another thread for the beginning story so everyone can comment and share their thought on it.

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Post by Awinnell on Fri 6 Jun 2008 - 2:50

i guess you want the Admiral Claes part right Sasahara ?,which means i get to be the pirates Yipeee !:yaay:

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Post by sasahara17 on Fri 6 Jun 2008 - 4:47

Well, I'd like to see who's going to jump on the ship first, but I suppose if making a 'sample' is the proper way to go...

@ Awinnell

Be my guest! The pirates are the ones to kick off the adventure, stealing the 'all important sealed box thing' and holding Emilio and Peter hostage.

Anyway, do you just want the German Sausage, or do you want the spanish privateer as well?

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Post by Awinnell on Fri 6 Jun 2008 - 6:08

mien gott fraulein, the deutchlander wurst it is !

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Post by Probit Return on Fri 6 Jun 2008 - 13:22

I could join in... But I'd most definately be the weakest link.

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Post by LoC978 on Fri 6 Jun 2008 - 20:01

this may actually fit better here since we've got multiple authors and such.
just a thought.

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Re: Basic Premise + Author Signup

Post by sasahara17 on Sat 7 Jun 2008 - 7:32

Okay, it's Saturday and now Probit has jumped on the ship as well. Don't worry about writing skill Probit, its the heart that counts! Anyway, I've taken LoC's suggestion and batted the idea of relocated to the Colaborated Stories forum.

I guess it's about time we started thinking about the actual plot (see new thread). It's a three man yacht now. Yippie!

@ LoC, couldn't tell if you wanted in or not. Maybe as an editor?

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Post by LoC978 on Sat 7 Jun 2008 - 19:14

I really don't have a lot of time on my hands (though I am off work for today)... so, I really don't think I'd be of much use.

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Post by sasahara17 on Sat 7 Jun 2008 - 19:34

Thanks for the clarification LoC.

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Post by Sheo Darren on Sun 8 Jun 2008 - 1:09

And here I am at last, accidentally stumbling across this while wondering just where the heck you were working on this project. Man, but I am slow on the uptake.

^_^

So... any room for an editorial comissar in this romp through the high seas south of the Holy Britannian Empire's domains in the New World?
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Post by Nachtsider on Sun 8 Jun 2008 - 1:10

I'm seriously tempted to sign up. But I've got a lot of projects to work on at the moment. Maybe later...

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Post by sasahara17 on Sun 8 Jun 2008 - 1:21

Sheo Darren wrote:So... any room for an editorial comissar in this romp through the high seas south of the Holy Britannian Empire's domains in the New World?
Well, the more the merrier! I was hoping for a group of four or five, since in my experience groups of that size arer the most productive.
Nachtsider wrote:I'm seriously tempted to sign up. But I've got a
lot of projects to work on at the moment. Maybe later...
No worries mate. I'm looking forward to the Combat Missions thing (speaking of which, I completely forgot about what I was doing for you... sorry... where did I stick that word doc again...?)!

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Post by Sheo Darren on Sun 8 Jun 2008 - 2:04

Ayt.

I'll make it a point to drop by regularly to browse. If there's anything important you want to consult, and if I've been tardy showing signs of life, PM or e-mail me.
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Post by sasahara17 on Sun 8 Jun 2008 - 7:29

Thanks Sheo!

I'll let you know when something happens.

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Post by Sheo Darren on Thu 3 Jul 2008 - 9:48

So, anything new yet?
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Post by Nachtsider on Thu 3 Jul 2008 - 9:54

Jamaica's not too far away from this locale. I'm tempted to suggest that Beatrice be made a totally acclimatized Jamaican-born Englishwoman, if only as an excuse to insert Rasta!Beatrice into the story...

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Post by Sheo Darren on Sat 5 Jul 2008 - 1:58

lol she uses voodo magic and drugs, accounting for her heightened sense of smell? lol
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Post by Nachtsider on Sun 6 Jul 2008 - 6:45

Voodoo's more a Haitian thing, Sheo. I don't quite see Bea as a Voodoo practitioner, anyways.

But you know what I totally want? Person's OC Black as a powerful mambo or Voodoo High Priestess - the only one capable of besting Aharon and Liesel's phantom pirates. That would be all kinds of awesome.

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Post by Sheo Darren on Tue 8 Jul 2008 - 11:49

Nachtsider wrote:Voodoo's more a Haitian thing, Sheo. I don't quite see Bea as a Voodoo practitioner, anyways.

But you know what I totally want? Person's OC Black as a powerful mambo or Voodoo High Priestess - the only one capable of besting Aharon and Liesel's phantom pirates. That would be all kinds of awesome.

Want me to contact him and ask for permission? ^_^
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Post by Nachtsider on Tue 8 Jul 2008 - 15:42

That'll do nicely. *clicks claws together in glee*

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