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Post by ElfenMagix on Tue 10 Jun 2008 - 12:02

Well, I gave it a try, and if I had more details (as in hieght) I would have drawn the others... So here they are:
Laine, Gwendoyln, Mina, and Liesel... with Rachel and Petrushka used as a hieght reference.



Laine was the hardest to get right, and I'll admit Liesel was rushed.
So if you have complaints, be nice to me, I was only trying to see how it would work. cheers


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Post by Nachtsider on Tue 10 Jun 2008 - 12:51

Well, it's not too bad for a rushed job, though I'd like to see her with Rachel's eye design and her usual clothes...

Never heard of Gwendolyn before...

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Post by rusty-spring on Tue 10 Jun 2008 - 12:56

No complaints, Laine's hair looks good Smile

Though she does appear to be a bit short...but I could be wrong. How tall is Petra again?

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Post by West Nile on Tue 10 Jun 2008 - 19:20

well, as a form of reference, ya i see nothing wrong, but aren't d drawings too abstract??

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Post by LoC978 on Tue 10 Jun 2008 - 20:45

@Nachtsider wrote:Never heard of Gwendolyn before...
yeah, that's supposed to be Guinevere, I think... I only have one issue with her design there: hair's too red (looks kinda Euro-dyed).
Should be a more natural shade:



But, just as Nacht said: not bad at all for a rushed job.

@West Nile wrote:well, as a form of reference, ya i see nothing wrong, but aren't d drawings too abstract??
It's just his webcomic style. I think it works fine for storytelling.

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Post by ElfenMagix on Tue 10 Jun 2008 - 20:46

@rusty-spring wrote:No complaints, Laine's hair looks good Smile

Though she does appear to be a bit short...but I could be wrong. How tall is Petra again?
Same height as 'Sandro Laughing

So either Petra's very tall or Allesandro is short! :face:

I'll get lil' Gwen's hair and Liesel's eyes fixed and add Brittney too Very Happy
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Post by LoC978 on Tue 10 Jun 2008 - 21:00

@ElfenMagix wrote:
@rusty-spring wrote:No complaints, Laine's hair looks good Smile

Though she does appear to be a bit short...but I could be wrong. How tall is Petra again?
Same height as 'Sandro Laughing

So either Petra's very tall or Allesandro is short! :face:
I see it as something like this:

a SMART car is 60.71" (about 5 feet or 152cm) tall.
So yeah, 'Sandro is a little short... there are quite a few short-ish people in Italy, though... especially in the south.

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Post by ElfenMagix on Tue 10 Jun 2008 - 21:05

Thaat math does not add up right. If the car is 5ft tall, that would make Petra's head 5 inches... :lol!: Petra got a tiny head!

Which manga has them with Marco and Angie behind from shipping boxes in a terminal? That can give you an idea of hieght comparing it to Marco's known hieght and that of the freight boxes.

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Post by rusty-spring on Tue 10 Jun 2008 - 21:08

@LoC978 wrote:I see it as something like this.

Thanks LoC Smile

Laine's 5'3, so she shouldn't be much shorter than Petra. But I dunno how difficult that is to change so if it's too much trouble don't worry about it Elfen. Razz

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Post by ElfenMagix on Tue 10 Jun 2008 - 21:10

I'll fix it with the others, Rusty! Very Happy

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Post by LoC978 on Tue 10 Jun 2008 - 21:23

yeah... my numbers do seem a bit off in retrospect... the height listed for a SMART car on the official site actually seems quite a bit higher than I remember them from Germany... I have to kinda lean down a little to rest my arm on those ones the way 'Sandro is in the pic.


anyway, here's that scene with the cargo containers (from Vol8, ch42):
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the angles are screwy, so it's hard to tell height from it...

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Post by ElfenMagix on Wed 11 Jun 2008 - 9:25

Here the fixed 'V2.0' version:
added: Danjo's Brittany (knowing me, I spelt the name wrong, D'OH!)

Changed: Laine's hieght (and width to compensate, she was too thin stretched out :lol!: )
Gwendolyn's hair colour (have problems with it- switching from FreeHand to Photoshop, the colours shift on me, so I compensated as best as I could).
Liesel's eyes, which are now like Rachel's.

Fixed: Gwendolyn's sweat pants- for some reason it was not matching the top, then I found out why. A superimpossed pattern was on it. Removing the pattern fixed her sweat pants.

Well, fellas- enjoy!



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Post by Nachtsider on Wed 11 Jun 2008 - 11:31

Sweet.

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Post by Piero on Wed 11 Jun 2008 - 11:35

Dude, if Biff attacks whatever that laser tag rifle is pointed at, isn't said laser tag rifle probably too dangerous to give Brittany as well, given her tendency to shoot the wrong things? Laughing

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Post by Awinnell on Wed 11 Jun 2008 - 11:39

doesn't it make him a bit dumb as well? after all hes only doing what a smart bomb does and they aint that smart !

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Post by ElfenMagix on Wed 11 Jun 2008 - 12:07

Think like a handler, then think like Britany's handler (Biff)...
He likes being in the action, swimming in the thick of it, and when all is said and done, be on the top of the pile of bodies and roar out "I've Won!!!"

With all that said, Biff is a nice guy to have as a friend. (Because you dont want him s the enemy!)

Besides, if in working with other Fratello teams, Britany can target the targets that the snipers have to take out. :lol!:
Of course, Danjo3 is going to kill me for taking Biff OOC... :face:

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Post by ElfenMagix on Wed 11 Jun 2008 - 12:30

Damn it, Danjo3 posted a pic of Biff on the forum a long time ago and now I cant find it....

DANJO3!!! WHERE IS IT?!!

BTW: reuploaded a corrected image, so you dont have to go through a third image set.
Britany's name has been corrected; from Brittany (seen it spelt both ways...). Other than an extra gap between the name and the text, everything else remains the same.

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Post by Sakura on Wed 11 Jun 2008 - 23:05

Nice take on everyone's OCs. Are you planning to make webcomics with them?

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Post by emperor on Wed 11 Jun 2008 - 23:37

Elfen,I think Liesel is Rachel's mother for their similar looking...

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Post by Nachtsider on Thu 12 Jun 2008 - 0:23

That comment makes me laugh like hell, considering Liesel is younger than Rachel!

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Post by LoC978 on Thu 12 Jun 2008 - 1:30

ah. much better with Gwen's hair.
...in her case, Gwen is short for Guinevere though.. not Gwendolyn.
I know that's not a modern standard for the nickname, but then, you don't meet many Guineveres these days.

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Post by Danjo3 on Thu 12 Jun 2008 - 9:15

@ElfenMagix wrote:added: Danjo's Brittany (knowing me, I spelt the name wrong, D'OH!)

Thanks Elfen, I was wondering when you were going to add Britney. She was starting to feel like an outcast for a while there. Laughing

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Post by ElfenMagix on Thu 12 Jun 2008 - 11:13

Sorry LoC, I'll fix it that (when I get the chance!)
--I see where I made the mistake; in the OC height chart test, Rusty listed her as 'Gwen', and I took as 'Gwendolyn...'

I fixed Laine's pants into kahkis but the colour shifting between the 2 programs threw the kahki colour off... DAMN IT ALL!

Danjo3, if Britney wasn't accidently shooting her dorm mates, handlers, or innocents, she would not be such an outcast! Laughing
Seriously, that was an oversight on my part. On Freehand I have a 'layers of sheets of paper' to work with. Britney was under a lower layer and I forgot about her until I found her while doing another section. Then, I corrected it.. Very Happy

Shakura- Dont know. I would have to think about it... but I have an idea for everyone to share in on the near future.

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Post by ElfenMagix on Thu 12 Jun 2008 - 11:22

@emperor wrote:Elfen,I think Liesel is Rachel's mother for their similar looking...

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@Nachtsider wrote:That comment makes me laugh like hell, considering Liesel is younger than Rachel!
:lol!: I think its the other way around...

I took Liesel's height from Nachtsider's drawing of her, and considered that if both Liesel and Rachel's handlers are of the same hieght, both girls would also be the same hieght (the real Rachel is SHORT in rl :face: ). Only difference is that Rachel would have a chest on her and Liesel may not. So they share may body parts in the lego-art scheme of things. Liesel might be thinner too, but in the angle she is standing there, it is hard to tell.

All in all Very Happy

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Post by Danjo3 on Thu 12 Jun 2008 - 12:54

@ElfenMagix wrote:Danjo3, if Britney wasn't accidently shooting her dorm mates, handlers, or innocents, she would not be such an outcast! Laughing
Britney could take out a man with surgical precision… if she was on her surfboard… and the bad guy was out swimming in the surf.

Yeah I know, situations like that don’t exactly come up everyday, but if it ever does, the Agency is all set.

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Post by ElfenMagix on Thu 12 Jun 2008 - 16:53

:lol!:

Either Biff needs to up her conditioning medication or the SWA send the B&B Fratello team out to more surfing missions!

Britany reminds me of that old Monty Python Skit of where the old lady was at the department store's complaint department (which 1/2 of it was on fire), complaining that her nwely bought flame thrower needed a safety latch on it!

Old Lady: This *FOOSH!* Flamethrower *FOOSH!* Is *FOOSH!* Not SAFE! It *FOOSH!* Needs *FOOSH!* A *FOOSH!* Safety Latch!

...she was sent on her way to get a NEW flame thrower! :face:
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Post by Danjo3 on Fri 13 Jun 2008 - 1:44

@ElfenMagix wrote:Either Biff needs to up her conditioning medication or the SWA send the B&B Fratello team out to more surfing missions!
The Agency is all too aware of the fact that Britney would benefit form a conditioning readjustment, but they’re also aware of how protective Biff is of his little sister. As a result, no one has the nerve to approach him about it. And since the B&B Fratello has the highest kill rate of Section 2, they all just figure – if it ain’t broke, don’t fix it.

Triela, who is now in second place behind Biff, is often heard referring to him as, “That goddamn hotdog!”


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Post by ElfenMagix on Fri 13 Jun 2008 - 22:34

:lol!:

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Post by ElfenMagix on Mon 14 Jul 2008 - 17:16

Had to update my images here to reflect the new URL they live in!

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*Imagines Liora sneaking upon the red dot*

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This is an excellent picture by Natchsider you can see of my OCs, Carol and Terra:


If you want more, I can easily gather that information. Emperror was asking if Terra did the damage on the shooting range, considering her weaponry.

Carol is a close combat specialist with (throwing) knives and concealed sword in an umbrella.

Liora is Claes' white fluffball kitten, with blue eyes that follow and attack a little red dot... even if its on somebody's bottom!

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I love your work ElfenMagix, I always enjoy looking forward to more of your contributions! Keep your art coming, you got another steady fan!
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