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Post by sasahara17 on Mon 16 Jun 2008 - 21:22

Decided to post the thread here.

Anyway, ITT we make challenges to fanfic authors about things we want them to write about. Pretty simple really.

I challenge any author out there to make a fanfic about the events leading up to and including Triela burning her teddy bear collection and the inevitable aftermath (if possible).

I have do idea how this will happen (hence why I haven't gone and written it myself), but whatever can cause Triela to destroy her bears ought to be something worth reading about.

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Post by West Nile on Mon 16 Jun 2008 - 21:41

well, i always wanted to write about Claes getting all her books burned then the aftermath, but it's still in the works

PS: it turns out all the girls have a reason to blame themselves for the fire, but they won't tell Claes since she out to kill the arsonist.

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Post by sasahara17 on Mon 16 Jun 2008 - 22:37

*pictures Death Glasses Claes*

...I think I might try that. You said it's in the works, so are you actually gonna do it or can I fiddle with it myself?

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Post by West Nile on Mon 16 Jun 2008 - 23:23

well if u beat me to it, there really isn't anything i can do

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Post by Whatface on Tue 17 Jun 2008 - 3:07

I always wanted to make a short animation about Triela/Claes with their bear/book collection destoryed

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Post by Nachtsider on Tue 17 Jun 2008 - 3:18

Dude, be our guest! Your animations are amazing!

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Post by sasahara17 on Tue 17 Jun 2008 - 3:26

Whatface wrote:I always wanted to make a short animation about Triela/Claes with their bear/book collection destoryed
*squeals like a little girl on chrismas morning*

Want. Very much.

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Post by Whatface on Tue 17 Jun 2008 - 3:36

If I do decide to work on it, it would have to be after June 25. Damn assignments.. *mumbles*

Hmm, I just got a thought. Anyone up for voice acting? Razz

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Post by West Nile on Tue 17 Jun 2008 - 6:55

Whatface wrote:If I do decide to work on it, it would have to be after June 25. Damn assignments.. *mumbles*

Hmm, I just got a thought. Anyone up for voice acting? Razz

*Hand raised like an over eager school girl* but i don't know who i can play

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Post by KodokuRyuu on Tue 17 Jun 2008 - 20:15

Whatface wrote:Hmm, I just got a thought. Anyone up for voice acting? Razz
English or Japanese? I can do both, though I can't make myself sound like a girl to save my life - it always comes out too high pitched. What classes are you taking right now?
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Re: Open Fanfic Requests/Challenges

Post by Whatface on Tue 17 Jun 2008 - 20:31

KodokuRyuu wrote:What classes are you taking right now?
You mean at uni? Design Computing

KodokuRyuu wrote:English or Japanese?
English

As for the voices, I dunno... Who would you guys like to play as?

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Post by West Nile on Tue 17 Jun 2008 - 23:08

Whatface wrote:As for the voices, I dunno... Who would you guys like to play as?

Well, i have made my voice sound female before but i don't think i can make it sound like... Henrietta or something like that

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Post by sasahara17 on Wed 18 Jun 2008 - 0:37

Whatface wrote:Hmm, I just got a thought. Anyone up for voice acting? Razz
Not up to it, but that little odd request of yours has gotten me interested. Perhaps if you explain your needs in more detail, we'll better know what to look for.

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Post by Whatface on Wed 18 Jun 2008 - 1:04

West Nile wrote:Well, i have made my voice sound female before but i don't think i can make it sound like... Henrietta or something like that
Eeh, guys trying to sound like girls isn't cool man. I'm sure you'll sound better as a handler or something.

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Whatface wrote:Hmm, I just got a thought. Anyone up for voice acting? Razz
Not up to it, but that little odd request of yours has gotten me interested. Perhaps if you explain your needs in more detail, we'll better know what to look for.
Details? Well, basically I give you a script. You'll need a mic; preferably a good one without the buzzing noise in the background. You'll record yourself saying the lines with software like Audacity and send me the wav/mp3 files. I put it in the animation. Done!

Ah, It was just a random thought to see if anyone would be interested. Its not like I really need them right now or anything. I might decide not to use voices at all. I won't be able to make anything till I'm done with these assignments anyway.

I just wanted to know if anyone would be interested in in voice acting if I decide I need them. Thats all.

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Post by sasahara17 on Wed 18 Jun 2008 - 8:27

OPEN CHALLENGE:

Hear ye, hear ye! Come one come all! This be a challenge to all budding writers out there!

I challenge any brave soul to write a fic about one of the fine ladies (the GSGS) of this fine institution (the SWA) attempting to seduce an old geezer (Lorenzo).

To any who dare accept this challenge, there is no reward but glory and recognition (and me trying not to laugh too much).

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Post by West Nile on Wed 18 Jun 2008 - 22:32

sasahara17 wrote:OPEN CHALLENGE:

Hear ye, hear ye! Come one come all! This be a challenge to all budding writers out there!

I challenge any brave soul to write a fic about one of the fine ladies (the GSGS) of this fine institution (the SWA) attempting to seduce an old geezer (Lorenzo).

To any who dare accept this challenge, there is no reward but glory and recognition (and me trying not to laugh too much).

il do it, just give me sometime, and i can even make it tasteful ^_^

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Post by rusty-spring on Wed 18 Jun 2008 - 22:45

West Nile wrote:
sasahara17 wrote:seduce an old geezer (Lorenzo).

il do it, just give me sometime, and i can even make it tasteful ^_^

Mine would not be tasteful I'm afraid. For the sake of innocent souls everywhere, it's best I just keep those sort of scenarios to myself. Razz

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Re: Open Fanfic Requests/Challenges

Post by West Nile on Wed 18 Jun 2008 - 23:42

Well here it goes:

The Final Solution

Night has fallen on the SWA and as every emplyee has left the building. No one recognized the dark figure dashing through the halls, jumping pass secuirity cams making it's way to a door. Not just anydoor, but the door of Lorenzo, SWA chief.

When most of his emplyees are probably going home already. Hard working Lorenzo stays on his desk continuing to do his work. Section 2 can't be beaten by section 1. Section 2 is here to stay. This was on his head when suddenly the door opens.

"Huh? who's there?"

"Mr. Lorenzo... is Joze here?"

"Oh, it's you Henrietta. No he isn't I beleive he left. Is something wrong?"

"Mr. Lorenzo... it hurts..."

"What? what hurts?"

"It hurts sir..."

"Here lie down on the couch."

Lorenzo here is no doctor, but then how can this dirty old man pass up an oportunity to get a little girl, especially a girl as cute Henrietta in such a position.

"Tell me what hurting?"

With those words, the little burnette lifts her skirt up and points at the cream white panties she had on.

"...here"

A drop of sweat falls of the brow of the SWA head as the little girl's finger touches the special place in between her thighs.

"There?"

"Yes, make it go away..."

Heart racing, breath shortening and nose bleeding. Lorenzo's hands aproached the girl's undergarments. Almost touching the pink lace around the garter when suddenly...

*Flash*

"I am feeling much better now! Thank you for your help."

And as instant as she came in, Henrietta hopped of the sofa and ran out of the room. Lorenzo could not believe his eyes... it was so close. He almost had her. If only it wasn't for that flash... what flash! Was that a camera?!?!

-Next day-

Joze walks to the SWA today with a frown. He knows that as soon as he reaches his table. There would be an envelope there from the bank, threatening to take his Porsche if he does not pay what is due.

"Sigh, I guess I'll have to take over time now."

To make matters worst, a little burnette girl has just seen him, and is running towards him beaming with hapiness. He knows that as she hears from him, that smile will turn upsidedown and a frowning Henrietta is always one step closer to getting shot at the back of the head.

"Joze!"

"Henrietta... I am sorry, but we can't go out this weekend. I have work to do."

"No you don't, I know how to get you a raise!!"

And with that, she shows Joze the new camera phone that he just bought her...

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Post by Whatface on Wed 18 Jun 2008 - 23:45

ROFL!!!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAAHAHA!!! Oh gawd!

Thats friggin great!

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Post by Nachtsider on Thu 19 Jun 2008 - 0:38

Publish this proper. Nao.

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Post by sasahara17 on Thu 19 Jun 2008 - 1:08

Lorenzo --> OWNED

Nice Work Nile. You Win 10^10 Internets.

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Post by West Nile on Thu 19 Jun 2008 - 5:19

Nachtsider wrote:Publish this proper. Nao.

Maybe when i get my own internet connection, now is not the time though

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Post by sasahara17 on Fri 20 Jun 2008 - 1:53

Okay, this is going way back...
West Nile wrote:well, i always wanted to write about Claes getting all her books burned then the aftermath, but it's still in the works.
I've just realized I've destoryed her garden before. It's not the same thing as watching her books go up in flames, bujt it's a start. However thanks to your wee statement, I have just realized that I've forgotten to write about how she reacts to the news of the brutal mauling of her beloved garden.

Oh well, that'll be a long time coming, but thanks for the reminder. I'll have to write it sometime though, since it's inevitable Claes will eventually find out that even though the garden was enentually repaired, there was a time it resembled something out of a horror movie.

Anyway I have another 'wierd' challenge!

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One of the GSGs (henceforth Girl A) is pranked by another girl (Girl B). So infuriated is Girl A that the following night, she sneaks into Girl B's room and does something (rather permanent) to Girl B's appearance. What did Girl A do, and how does Girl B react to it?

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And a slighty older, and far more daring, one...

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Remember I mentioned a certain fic back in the Idea thread? This one?

The Idea

First one down...

Yes THAT idea.

Anyone has the guts to go write it?
(I don't. Razz)

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Hats off to whoever writes this.

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Post by Nachtsider on Fri 20 Jun 2008 - 3:58

I might. Expect more than a few twists and deviations from the original formula if I do, though, despite the basic premise remaining intact.

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Post by West Nile on Sun 22 Jun 2008 - 1:18

sasahara17 wrote:Okay, this is going way back...
West Nile wrote:well, i always wanted to write about Claes getting all her books burned then the aftermath, but it's still in the works.
I've just realized I've destoryed her garden before. It's not the same thing as watching her books go up in flames, bujt it's a start. However thanks to your wee statement, I have just realized that I've forgotten to write about how she reacts to the news of the brutal mauling of her beloved garden.

Oh well, that'll be a long time coming, but thanks for the reminder. I'll have to write it sometime though, since it's inevitable Claes will eventually find out that even though the garden was enentually repaired, there was a time it resembled something out of a horror movie.

Anyway I have another 'wierd' challenge!

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One of the GSGs (henceforth Girl A) is pranked by another girl (Girl B). So infuriated is Girl A that the following night, she sneaks into Girl B's room and does something (rather permanent) to Girl B's appearance. What did Girl A do, and how does Girl B react to it?

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Remember I mentioned a certain fic back in the Idea thread? This one?

The Idea

First one down...

Yes THAT idea.

Anyone has the guts to go write it?
(I don't. Razz)

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Hats off to whoever writes this.

i got one... Claes X Triela X Hilshire fanfic anyone?

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Post by ElfenMagix on Sun 22 Jun 2008 - 9:39

That was hilarious! (Yes, I'm reading it now...)

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Post by Guest on Mon 23 Jun 2008 - 1:23

I've been too busy these days and my grades have been failing me. I might not be able to see this place as usual...

I'll try to put something in when the idea stroke me Smile

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Post by West Nile on Mon 23 Jun 2008 - 2:36

ElfenMagix wrote:That was hilarious! (Yes, I'm reading it now...)

i haven't even done it yet... but here what i may plan to do... imagine Triela minus the pony tails... im not talking about just messing her hair im talking about cutting it Sasahara did ask for a "dramatic change" Muh-m-muhahahaha!

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Post by Guest on Thu 26 Jun 2008 - 12:19

Here's a challenge to all of those who don't like Petrushka:

Rewrite her into an into a character you do like. Try to leave a little of her original personality intact, enough so that she's not a completely different character. Some of the things, like the large amount of screen time she got, or the fact that Alessandro likes to dress her like a hooker, might not be fixable by revamping Petra herself.

If it's the latter case that bothers you, feel free to make changes to Alessandro as well. As with Petra, try to keep him a little recognizable, and if you're going to change him, try to make Sandro interesting. If we are readng about him, we should enjoy what we see.

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Post by Nachtsider on Thu 26 Jun 2008 - 21:15

Hmm. That's a very good suggestion, J. I'd like to see what can be made of it.

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Post by ElfenMagix on Thu 26 Jun 2008 - 21:28

That was just too hard to absorb... Jeesh!!!
If in the very least, make Alessandro the Queen to a local gay bar and Petrushka as his female Man-Servant... so no can say that she is being played on by the Queen...

Unless Alessandro freaks up for some minor and stupid reason, and suddenly yealls- "OFF WITH HER HEAD!"

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Post by sasahara17 on Thu 26 Jun 2008 - 21:33

Hmmm... How about making Petra more like her past self? She's the only GSG whom we've actually seen before becoming a cyborg, and I thought the whole 'derterimined, fight the odds' thing was kinda cute.

As for 'Sandro... the guy's unredeemable. To be honest, I think I like this perverted S.O.B. He's a walking joke. Easy to laugh at, easy to make fun of, easy to kill off... wait, nobody's properly killed him off yet. WTF... A Roach?

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Post by Guest on Fri 27 Jun 2008 - 0:11

Making her like her past self does seem like a good idea, sasahara. Actually, I think I would like to see a truly normal person as a cyborg. Henrietta's a slave to her conditioning. She has no qualms killing whoever she's told; she doesn't ask Jose why she's being asked to assassinate someone. Also, she may be aware of her programed love for Jose, but she accepts it. She doesn't object to having her free will tampered with.

Triela is the most normal person in the bunch. She kills, but she seems to understand what she's doing. She treats it like a job, not a game. She seeks Hillshire's approval, but she doesn't hesitate to argue or snap at him if she feels that those measures are warranted. She acts like a rational mature kid toward him. Hillshire isn't the end-all be-all of her mental state.

Triela certainly has the most normal pysche, but she's a professional. There's certainly nothing wrong with being driven to excell, but it's not the type of normalcy I had in mind. I'm thinking of the kind of person who just seems out of her depth and along for the ride. Not someone who's world revolves around her handler, and not someone who put her strong and unclouded mind to the task of becoming a better soldier.

As for suggesting changes to Sandro's personality, I only did that because otherwise, you're still going to have Petra in fanservice gear. Of course, the emphasis on her personality, and the emphasis on Sandro's douchebag-hood, should keep Petra from being a lust object.

You know, Alessandro has crossed the one line with his cyborg that even Jean would never have thought of violating. When or if everybody finds out how Sandro has been behaving to Petra, well, the SWA would probably tolerate even that, but the handlers are going to be disgusted. It would be a hilarious to watch Jean, upon finding out that Sandro has been treating Petra like a sex toy, punch Sandro in the nose if Jean hadn't already started to act less coldly to Rico.

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Post by sasahara17 on Fri 27 Jun 2008 - 1:26

Y'know, a part of me who seriously wants to belive in the inherent good of all people (real and fictional) belives that 'Sandro acts like an ass 99% of the time becuase he's simply been 'conditioned' that way though his training as a section 1 agent, and therefore is more an object of pity rather than a comblete douche bag and cradle snatcher. Him reaching out to Petra might be one poor lonely sould reaching out to someone who he knows will unconditionally accept him for who he is.

Then there is this other part of me that wonders what the hell this idiot is doing when he oggled Petra naked.

Maybe if you wanted to make 'Sandro more likeable, you could play up the whole 'trained to be a secret agent, forever lonely person' thing. It also has the added irony that in a way, 'Sandro's training to become so twisted kind of mimics what's happening to the girls.

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Post by ElfenMagix on Fri 27 Jun 2008 - 15:02

Thing is, Alessandro had an ex-girl-friendwho did who knows what to him in his past and thus he is doing to Petra as the first had done to him. Who was she? Hint: Rossanna...

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Post by Guest on Wed 2 Jul 2008 - 0:55

Here's a scenario that will need a lot of good writing if it's to come off plausible:

Jean escapes the SWA, taking Rico with her. He's runnning away with Rico because he cares about her and wants her to have a safe and happy life. Yes, it's not very plausible. The trick in writing this story would be to help your readers overlook this obvious fact. Come on. Formulating this thing can't be any harder than writing a Matrix fanfic where the main character finds out that the Matrix movie is real...and the story is well-written and fun to read. That story can be found here.

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Post by West Nile on Wed 2 Jul 2008 - 6:45

J the Drafter wrote:Here's a scenario that will need a lot of good writing if it's to come off plausible:

Jean escapes the SWA, taking Rico with her. He's runnning away with Rico because he cares about her and wants her to have a safe and happy life. Yes, it's not very plausible. The trick in writing this story would be to help your readers overlook this obvious fact. Come on. Formulating this thing can't be any harder than writing a Matrix fanfic where the main character finds out that the Matrix movie is real...and the story is well-written and fun to read. That story can be found here.

Guh? it's not only highly possible... i already figured out how to do it a long time ago... just didn't have the time to write it *blows dust of laptop and begins next fic*

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