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Post by sasahara17 on Sat 12 Jul 2008 - 6:20

Believe I may have brought this up in the old idea thread, but I think as a pure discussion topic it'll be more at home here.

Simple Question;

What would Gunsliger Girl be like if, instead of morally questionable derenders of law and order, the Lorenzo and his henchmen in the Supreme World Authoritarians were instead a bunch of dastardly evildoers out to conquer the world with their new newly developed supersoldiers?

By being evil, the moral dilemmas facing (most) of the handlers will evaporate faster than water in the desert, so we can see e\/1L Lorenzo and his incidious plans!

As a side note, does this make Pino a 'James Bond' type character? Franca might make a good Q...

Also, apologies to all non-3\/1L Authoritarians out there. It was the only synonym of 'Dictator' thatb started with 'A' That I knew of.

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Post by TTIO on Sat 12 Jul 2008 - 6:45

Well for a start, how many of the handlers would actually stay? I get the impression Jose and Hilshire are only still there because they're fighting terrorists...

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Post by Danjo3 on Sat 12 Jul 2008 - 10:30

@TTIO wrote:I get the impression Jose and Hilshire are only still there because they're fighting terrorists...
Hillshire originally joined the Agency because he had no choice. I think now he stays because of his love for Triela.

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Post by ElfenMagix on Sat 12 Jul 2008 - 17:11

If you're a henchman for an evil organization, you stay. But because it pays great, but because you got prestigue... (I got me's a little girl who kills people I tell her to kill for me!!! And she's a great cook too!)

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Post by LoC978 on Sat 12 Jul 2008 - 20:19

generally, the only way out is a bodybag anyway...

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Re: Evil Orginisation

Post by Guest on Sun 13 Jul 2008 - 1:25

Hm. Maybe a situation like this is what's needed to give the more decent handlers, and perhaps even the more intropsective cyborgs, the kick in the pants they need to act. After all, their inner dilemnas won't exist in such a straightforward premise. Hell, to be frank, even Jean only works for the Agency because they're fighting the terrorists who murdered his fiance and sister.

All the handlers would need some reworking in order to fit in this scenario (well, except Hillshire), and it would probably be for the nastier. Marco the brutal, nasty commando with a well-hidden sweet spot for Angelica, anyone? How about Jose the greedy operative who would tear out the fingernails of a starving grandmother in order to become five cents richer--but who spares no expense when it comes to making Henrietta happy?

I wonder if this new world would bring any changes to the girls, or if they would still behave the way they normally do? Oh, sure, now Triela can disobey orders, risking her free will and limited longevity, and accomplish something a little more heroic than letting a horde of angry terrorists blow up a newspaper office building. Rico would definitely still act the same. After all, nothing says,'I do whatever I'm told' more convincingly than shooting someone who you befriended and liked. Henrietta and Angelica don't seem to have any thought beyond pleasing their handlers, as far as their job goes. Claes seems passive enough that she would go along with almost everything she's told to do (and she will rarely be in the field).

In conclusion, I think that this story would create some possibly intriguing twists on the handlers; otherwise, it's basically the same story we're already reading, only this time Captain Hero and the Justice Troupe could lay on some heroic smackdown and not have to worry about being self-righteous. I would love to see the altered Marco (and Jose), though. There's something compelling about a person who can walk among kneeling prisoners somewhere in the Balkans and break someone's ribs as punishment for being in the way, then come home and be a devoted, caring father.

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Re: Evil Orginisation

Post by sasahara17 on Sun 13 Jul 2008 - 6:59

...okay, maybe I should have stuck tthis in the FF section after all. Don't mind me.

Total OOC Alert!

I dream of this happening.

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Lorenzo; Allesandro Ricci, you have failed me for the last time.

'Sandro; (naked and speaking quickly) No, wait! I didn't meant to make out on your desk! I didn't even know it was your desk! Evil one, Ple-

*BANG!*

Petra; (equally naked) Aieee! San-

*BANG!*

'Sandro's corpse relives itself of it's faculties on Lorenzo's carpet.

Lorenzo; Curses! Even in death you desecrate my glorious orginisation! Ferro, be a darling and kindly dispose of these misrable excuse for human corpses.

Ferro; (in Slutty henchman clothes) Yes, oh magnificent evilness.

Lorenzo; H-A--H-A--H-A--!

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Pino; (all suave like) My name is Gino, Pinocchio Gino, I work for the Italian government.

Hillshire; (sighs) See triela? You asked me why I stopped being an
agent of justice and became a minion of a madman bent on world conquest? (motions to oh so
suave Pino) This is why I left Interpol.

Pino; Ah, you must be the esteemed Former Inspector Victor Hartman. And who might this fine young bueaty be (flashes lady killer smile)?

Triela; (frozen in horror) ... I am seriously consdering shooting myself. I am not becoming a Bond girl. I am NOT becoming a Bond girl!

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Post by ElfenMagix on Sun 13 Jul 2008 - 9:44

:lol!; @ Triela!

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Post by emperor on Sun 13 Jul 2008 - 9:56

Petra; (equally naked) Aieee! San-

*BANG!*

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Re: Evil Orginisation

Post by Danjo3 on Sun 13 Jul 2008 - 10:21

@sasahara17 wrote:Total OOC Alert!
Here’s another version that’s a little more in character.

Pino: “What’s your name?”

Triela: “Triela. And who might you be?”

Pino: “Gino, Pinocchio Gino.”

Triela steps up to him with her sultry, bedroom eye’s.

Triela: “Is that right? Well tell me Pinocchio, do you have something that grows when you lie?”
Pino: “No, I don’t.”

Triela fingered the lapel of his dinner jacket.

Triela: “Are you sure about that?”

Pino: “Yeah, I’m positive.”

Triela: “What I mean is, a devilishly hansom trickster like you can probably talk a girl into anything.”

Pino: “I don’t think I understand.”

She moved up against him and whispered in his ear.

Triela: “What I mean is… anything.”

Pino: “Like what, specifically?”

She stepped back.

Triela: “Like take me to bed!”

Pino: “Are you tired?”

Triela: “No, I’m not tired!”

Pino: “Then why do you want to go to bed?”

Triela: “I want us to go to bed.”

Pino: “I’m not tired.”

Triela pulls out her gun and starts to empty it on Pino.

Triela: “This is for all of the Bond… uh sorry, I mean Gino girls following me!”

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Post by emperor on Sun 13 Jul 2008 - 10:41

Triela: “Like take me to bed!”

Triela,you'll become an adult in one night!!

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Re: Evil Orginisation

Post by Wileama on Mon 14 Jul 2008 - 12:26

Oh man, both of those Triela's are hilarious. There's a lot of room in this for some awesome evil overlord list.

Pino: "Won't you at least tell me your plans?!?"
Triela: [Shoots Pino with shotgun] "Nope."

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Post by Tommygunner70 on Mon 14 Jul 2008 - 15:29

@Danjo3 wrote:
Here’s another version that’s a little more in character.

Pino: “What’s your name?”

Triela: “Triela. And who might you be?”

Pino: “Gino, Pinocchio Gino.”

Triela steps up to him with her sultry, bedroom eye’s.

Triela: “Is that right? Well tell me Pinocchio, do you have something that grows when you lie?”
Pino: “No, I don’t.”

Triela fingered the lapel of his dinner jacket.

Triela: “Are you sure about that?”

Pino: “Yeah, I’m positive.”

Triela: “What I mean is, a devilishly hansom trickster like you can probably talk a girl into anything.”

Pino: “I don’t think I understand.”

She moved up against him and whispered in his ear.

Triela: “What I mean is… anything.”

Pino: “Like what, specifically?”

She stepped back.

Triela: “Like take me to bed!”

Pino: “Are you tired?”

Triela: “No, I’m not tired!”

Pino: “Then why do you want to go to bed?”

Triela: “I want us to go to bed.”

Pino: “I’m not tired.”

Triela pulls out her gun and starts to empty it on Pino.

Triela: “This is for all of the Bond… uh sorry, I mean Gino girls following me!”

Go Danjo! Go Danjo!11!!!!1!

how about making something like that as a fan fiction?

Seriously, we need more Triela X Pino fanfics!

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Re: Evil Orginisation

Post by sasahara17 on Tue 15 Jul 2008 - 3:25

@Wileama wrote:Pino: "Won't you at least tell me your plans?!?"
Triela: [Shoots Pino with shotgun] "Nope."
Genre savy Triela? This is what I'm talking about!

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