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Post by Tommygunner70 on Mon 14 Jul 2008 - 9:45

After slaving to get my house done, I managed to save a bit of time to do some writing on something that I have been planning to write for a long time.

Legend of the swordsman: The beginning

Legend of the Swordsman is going to be one hell of a long Saga, suspected to be around 6 episodes, and god knows how many chapters inside each episode..

It might not seem like it in this first Episode, but this is going to be one hell of a massive crossover...

Legend of the Swordsman as I have written it so far, already cross's over with the Universe of battletech (Aka: Mechwarrior) along with hintings toward the supernatural.

I wont spoil the rest, but a later episode will also crossover into the world of GSG.

you'll just have to wait for it Wink

R&R please Very Happy


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Ok, Seeing as this story is going to be one heavy crossover. I'll make a list for the origins of some of the elements and/or characters I use, or will be using.

{Warning, Spoilers ahead. these spoilers might reveal of cross over items}
{which haven't appeared in the currently released Chapters}


Legend of the Swordsmen: The Beginning. (Final editing and posting stage)
Spoiler:

Microsofts Mechwarrior 4 and BattleTech
Dead Or Alive
Full Metal Panic

Legend of the Swordsmen: Episode 2; The Discovery. (Work in progress)
Spoiler:

Love hina
(More to follow)


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Post by Tommygunner70 on Wed 16 Jul 2008 - 22:51

Second chapter released.

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Post by sasahara17 on Thu 17 Jul 2008 - 0:38

I'm not too familiar with the world of Battletech these days, kinda stopped after Victor trounced his sister, but I think I'll give it a try. What other series have you crossed over? May be a bit hard since I might not recognise some of them when you get down to writing them.

Also I noticed you've set it in 1990, any particular reason why?

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Post by Tommygunner70 on Thu 17 Jul 2008 - 7:30

sasahara17 wrote:I'm not too familiar with the world of Battletech these days
Basically It uses a certain character from the Mechwarrior 4: mercenaries game. along with a few things like weapons and such.

sasahara17 wrote:What other series have you crossed over?

As far as I have the script, it does crossover into several things, however, sometimes its more that the story uses elements from say, Star wars.

here is a small list of things into which is crossover:
(List in random order)
[list]
[*]Gsg (one of the main cross over sources)
[*]Mechwarrior
[*]Star wars
[*]Suzumiya Haruhi no Yuuutsu (The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya)
[*]Super Robot Wars Original Generation
[*]∀ Gundam (Turn A Gundam)
[*]The Super Dimension Fortress Macross (Robotech)

Well thats the ones I remember on the top of my mind.

sasahara17 wrote:May be a bit hard since I might not recognize some of them when you get down to writing them.

I know that, but fear not. I already took into account that not everyone has seen the same things I have. so I included small descriptions along the way. Wink

sasahara17 wrote:Also I noticed you've set it in 1990, any particular reason why?

My OC, which this story is fairly based around, has kind of a hard history and his little problems as well. he was born in 1980 so the story starts at 1990.

the current story is about him and his future wife growing up. OC Thomas has to grow up with the difficulties of being meant to be a soldier at an early age.

as for OC Sora, she has pretty much a quite life, despite having had one shocking experience in which she became so traumatized, that she doesn't dear to leave the safety of her home.

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Post by sasahara17 on Thu 17 Jul 2008 - 11:18

Super Robot Wars Original Generation
Oh I'd love to see you do THIS.

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Post by ElfenMagix on Thu 17 Jul 2008 - 11:40

This shows a lot of promise, Tommy. Keep it up!

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Post by Tommygunner70 on Thu 17 Jul 2008 - 14:19

sasahara17 wrote:
Super Robot Wars Original Generation
Oh I'd love to see you do THIS.

Well, not to be to much of a spoiler but...

Spoiler:
Kusuha Mizuha and Bullet Luckfield will play a part in this story, so will a few other well known charaters.

also, my favorite Mech is from SRW is going to play a part too Very Happy

ElfenMagix wrote:This shows a lot of promise, Tommy. Keep it up!

Ok, I will.

I am projecting that I'll be able to make a release at a 2 day interval?

Dont know if I can keep that up, but I sure as heck can try.

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Post by ElfenMagix on Thu 17 Jul 2008 - 15:40

Do the best you can, no rush on our account.
I just do the comic for a weekly release... and my FF.Net story when I can finish it. Everyone else just has to wait... I'm such a dirty tease, aint I?

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Post by Tommygunner70 on Thu 17 Jul 2008 - 16:04

ElfenMagix wrote:Do the best you can, no rush on our account.

I am not rushing on your, or anyones account other then mine...

I wanted to do this so long, so I cant wait to have it out there. but dont worry, its not like I write this on the fly right before i push it onto FF.net.

I have close to 200 pages per-written already. Razz

ElfenMagix wrote:I just do the comic for a weekly release... and my FF.Net story when I can finish it. Everyone else just has to wait... I'm such a dirty tease, aint I?

Not really.

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Post by ElfenMagix on Thu 17 Jul 2008 - 16:13

Ack! I've been found out.
Better find a new hiding place to go to...

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Post by Tommygunner70 on Thu 17 Jul 2008 - 16:23

ElfenMagix wrote:Ack! I've been found out.
Better find a new hiding place to go to...


errr... *understanding of English failed to understand responce.* what the... *Logic and knowladge while processing responce failed.*

ok I'm confused...

*hardware malfunction, please insert new cyborg neural brain module.*

Spoiler:
Sleeper spoiler that one Razz

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Post by sasahara17 on Thu 17 Jul 2008 - 20:05

Tommygunner70 wrote:
Spoiler:
Kusuha Mizuha and Bullet Luckfield will play a part in this story, so will a few other well known charaters.
Spoiler:
So... we'll be seeing some people writhe in pain clawing at their throats after drinking the good stuff?

Just for fun; In my currently defunct SRW/GSD fanfic, I once had a chatacter feed
this 'good stuff' to another character via IV drip. Results were not unexpected. The wanna try
topping that?

Which mech is showing up (with Kusuha there though, I have a sneaking suspicion which one)?

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Post by Tommygunner70 on Thu 17 Jul 2008 - 23:19

sasahara17 wrote:
Spoiler:
So... we'll be seeing some people writhe in pain clawing at their throats after drinking the good stuff?

Just for fun; In my currently defunct SRW/GSD fanfic, I once had a chatacter feed
this 'good stuff' to another character via IV drip. Results were not unexpected. The wanna try
topping that?
we'll see.

sasahara17 wrote:Which mech is showing up (with Kusuha there though, I have a sneaking suspicion which one)?

Yeah, those will appear, Kusuha's and Bullets special mechs.

but the one I am rather hinting to is The Huckebein RTX-008-L

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Post by Tommygunner70 on Tue 22 Jul 2008 - 9:44

Chapter 3 up, Enjoy. Smile

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Post by Tommygunner70 on Fri 25 Jul 2008 - 11:37

Chapter 4 online.

Please Read and Review Smile

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Post by Tommygunner70 on Sun 27 Jul 2008 - 7:52

5th chapter online now.

Spoiler:
This chapter has a very sinister and dark end, but one that will influence Young Thomas his life forever...

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Post by Tommygunner70 on Tue 29 Jul 2008 - 17:47

Chapter 6 is up.

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Post by Tommygunner70 on Mon 4 Aug 2008 - 8:04

Crap, totally forgot to mention that Chapter 7 was up.


Oh well.


Anyway, Yay me!
I finished writing the whole story. (I write ahead of time)
Now I just need to chop it all up in Chapters, and give them a final once over before I post them on Fanfiction.net in 1 or two day intervals.

Hope you guys enjoy reading the chapters.

Because I am psyched about having finished writing it, I released two chapters today.

Chapter 8 and Chapter 9

Hope you enjoy them Very Happy

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Post by Tommygunner70 on Wed 6 Aug 2008 - 9:05

Next Chapter is up

Chapter 10

An alien force invades!

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Post by Tommygunner70 on Tue 12 Aug 2008 - 17:40

Damn, Haven't updated this for a while.

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Chapter 11

Thomas learns about the Alien Invaders, and beats them with their own ways.
After some R&R, he goes to Japan once more to have the left side of his face "fixed"

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Chapter 12

While being in Japan, Thomas his special talents never get any rest. the morning after he had taken care of business, the Military man finally catches up to his lost youth, as he finally plays a simple game of "Soccer"

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Post by Tommygunner70 on Wed 13 Aug 2008 - 19:48

Legend of the Swordsman: The beginning, Chapter 13

After helping Thomas regained stereo vision, Sora finally gets the confession from him that she had been waiting on for so long, though this confession is not so easily digestible.
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Post by Tommygunner70 on Sat 16 Aug 2008 - 20:00

Legend of the Swordsman, Chapter 14

A Killer glorified as a Soldier, goes to a local holy place to fend off against brutality from local Yakuza. The priestesses, who are grateful, also discover a strange and unexpected side of the young warrior.


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BTW: As this story Cross's over with so many things, I have made a list in the Initial Post. I'll update it again when the need arises.
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Post by Tommygunner70 on Sun 17 Aug 2008 - 16:50

Legend of the Swordsman, Chapter 15

The celebration of ones age is a normal event, though a lady turns a year older, it is a man who receives a late birthday present, along with some sad news.
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Post by Tommygunner70 on Mon 18 Aug 2008 - 20:02

Legend of the Swordsman, Chapter 16, part 1 of 2.

The ones with power and large numbers never seem to learn. sadly they just met the wrong Dutch guy to mess with. After the Yakuza left this Dutch warriors maid in a rather despicable way. all of Thomas his efforts have been in vain as the maid still dies. Only now, Thomas takes to war, to lay the Yakuza under siege, and free his Fiancée.

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Post by Tommygunner70 on Tue 19 Aug 2008 - 14:06

Legend of the Swordsman, Chapter 16, part 2 of 2.

Revenge is a Dish best served cold. And that certainly isn't an exception to this young warrior, as Thomas prepares to save his Fiancée, and plans to put an end to the Yakuza's who are pestering the town which he has learned to call home.
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Post by Tommygunner70 on Wed 20 Aug 2008 - 13:51

Legend of the Swordsman, Chapter 17

As the Yakuza HQ is discovered, Thomas sets off to battle, after having promised to propose to Sora upon his return. With Thomas away fighting, Sora Faces off against the town's people, who don't want a 'foreign warmonger' living in their town.

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Post by Tommygunner70 on Sat 23 Aug 2008 - 18:10

Legend of the Swordsman, Chapter 18

While laying siege on the Yakuza compound, Thomas is met with
a young woman and lover. Though they are potential enemies, Thomas is
reminded of the fact that the pair in front of him, could have been Sora and
himself.
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Post by Tommygunner70 on Mon 25 Aug 2008 - 16:45

Legend of the Swordsman, Chapter 19

Thomas reaches his goal, Sora worries, Alex and Jeffer defend
Thomas from his Grandpa Henk. Its just another day for those who serve and
protect.


BTW: YAY me, one more chapter and this story is done Wink
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Post by Tommygunner70 on Wed 27 Aug 2008 - 0:15

Legend of the Swordsman, Chapter 20

After being victorious, our hero collapsed due to injuries. after a few months of being in a Coma, he makes a stand for the first time against his grandpa. there is a first time for everything, even love in all is glory.


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And thats the last chapter of LOTS; The beginning

I'm working on the continuation now, but it will be sometime before I start posting it.

So stay tuned Wink
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