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Post by Tommygunner70 on Tue 12 Aug 2008 - 17:21

I have commissioned Dahtoudi On deviantart.com to make me drawings of my OC's for Story Legend of the Swordsman

Click Image to go to the original on DeviantArt.com, where you can get a watermarked full view.

"Just married"
This Picture is supposed to be from the last chapter where Thomas and Sora actually marry. with Sora in a lovely yukata, and Thomas in his white officers wear.


"Turn your head and cough"
Thomas comes to japan to have a prototype cybernetic eye installed.
not having slept for a while, Thomas obeys his Doctor and takes place on a table for a physical, where he lets Sora see and touch all the scars on his whole body while he gently falls asleep in that position due to jet lag.


"Trying not to worry by reading"
Thomas had run away from her home, and hasn't been seen or heard of for nearly 2 years now. though there are signs left and right of him being alive. Sitting in the living room while in her favorite Qipao, Sora is reading a book on cybernetics from our very own Doctor Bianci.


"Nemesis of The Army Of Darkness."
This artwork isn't related to the Story in anyway, it is a Parody on a poster from 'Army of Darkness', just for kicks.


"Sharing is happiness."
After lagging out as Thomas did on the medical table, he had been put to bed with the help of Sora, who just so happened to be bold enough to join him. since then, they always shared the bed like now.


"Hey Sis, meet my wife. Sora, This is my long lost sister Triela."
Speaks for its self don't it?


"Sleep well my little trooper"
Thomas is taking a nap with his head on Sophia's lap under her Favorite tree.


"Things aren't always what they seem."
Having walked all over the globe, our protagonist swordsmen was sent out to recover a ship in a far away star system, where he comes across a Clone of his mother Sophia. Though the clone appears 10 years old, she had only been created 5 years ago. but that doesn't say anything for behavior, as she is like a 40 year old in a 10 year olds body. whatever the case maybe, 26 year old Thomas is glad to have someone whom he can truly call "Mother" again.


"Rank isn't eternal."
Thomas and his half brother Alex have their differences, which is mostly fueled out of jealousy.
whatever the case maybe, when the differences clash, the ranks they carry get the boot as they argue not as soldiers, but as brothers.


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Post by emperor on Tue 12 Aug 2008 - 17:52

It's very nice picture!!

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Post by Nachtsider on Tue 12 Aug 2008 - 18:16

That's gorgeous, Tommy - almost precisely like what I had in my mind's eye when I read your story! Give Dahtoudi my kudos!

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Post by Tommygunner70 on Tue 12 Aug 2008 - 18:45

@Nachtsider wrote:That's gorgeous, Tommy - almost precisely like what I had in my mind's eye when I read your story!

Yeah, Though the said chapter where this little act happens isn't up yet, I was amazed at how well Dahtoudi was able to make this from regular pictures.


I only had to give her a picture of the pose i wanted them in, As for defining on how OC Thomas and OC Sora looked like, I linked her to a photo of my self, and to a large version of my Avatar. (lol, Miss Tsugumi here didn't want her picture taken, not that it suprised me though. so instead, a picture of 'Sora Akanegasaki' from 'Ever17' was the closest match.)

Lastly, I gave her a photo of the Yukata Sora would be wearing at that time, and a photo of the Admiral uniform that Thomas would wear.

in addition I gave her the jest of the Idea, just saying "Its a Just married Idea" and this is what came out of it.


@Nachtsider wrote:Give Dahtoudi my kudos!

I could do that, but I updated the photo to the fixed version (Thomas was missing his braid). and clicking the Photo will link you to the page where you can comment and what not.
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Post by Nachtsider on Tue 12 Aug 2008 - 18:50

Darn, I forgot to mention that my browser has had problems displaying DA links since yesterday. Perhaps I'll go post the comments myself when this mess irons itself out.

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Post by Tommygunner70 on Tue 12 Aug 2008 - 18:55

Well i don't have any trouble with it.

Maybe your computer doesn't like websites consisting mostly out of Flash so much, because DA consists for about 75% out of FLash operated additives inside a PHP HTML Frame.

and I really notice that when I am doing alot of stuff over the internet, because though its the flashiest looking kind of webpage, its not the lightest around.

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Post by Guest on Wed 27 Aug 2008 - 1:20

OI! YEHA! That's EXACTLY how I imagined Sora... except with darker hair.

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Post by Tommygunner70 on Wed 27 Aug 2008 - 6:44

@Colonel Marksman wrote:OI! YEHA! That's EXACTLY how I imagined Sora... except with darker hair.

Wow, haven't heard from you in a while.

but yeah, she was supposed to have black hair, but the brown seems to vibe better, so I'm changing that detail Smile


BTW: There is more artwork on the way Very Happy
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Post by Tommygunner70 on Sat 30 Aug 2008 - 20:53

YAY!

Dahdtoudi did it again.

As said in the previous post, there was more art work on the way.

and here is one of them:
(Image is link to original submission which has full view.)



For those who have read my Legend of the swordsmen story, you'll recognize when this happened, though one detail of the image isn't correct, which are the boots, as he would have been bear foot. But I don't really care about that.

This Image is depicted from Chapter 11; OC Thomas had just arrived in Japan, and he gets a Physical from Sora, however he is extremely jet lagged still.


BTW: creepy amount of scars eh?

BTW #2: there are 2 more on the way Wink
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Post by ElfenMagix on Sat 30 Aug 2008 - 22:54

Very nicely done. compliments to the artist!

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Post by Guest on Sat 30 Aug 2008 - 22:57

I figured Tommy's hair was shorter, don't know why. Still looks like the Tommy I knew from a certain forum story!

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Post by Tommygunner70 on Sun 31 Aug 2008 - 0:17

@Colonel Marksman wrote:I figured Tommy's hair was shorter, don't know why. Still looks like the Tommy I knew from a certain forum story!

You just hit the nail on the head there. its the one and only Tommy from that forum.

And though you cant see it, Tommy actually has a braid reaching to just above his butt.

The story is basically a Port from that old Forum story of ours. however, I am doing it my way. taking out all the details that I thought to be fail, and replacing them with better ones. but the the idea will roughly be the same.

I got some things about that to ask you, but I'll convey them through PM's.
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Post by Tommygunner70 on Sun 31 Aug 2008 - 12:35

Here's Sora:




This one is depicted from a scene in the second Legend of the swordsmen that I am writing right now.

She is currently sitting in her living room, while reading a Italian book on Cybernetics by a certain Doctor Bianci. Very Happy

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Post by Guest on Sun 31 Aug 2008 - 14:30

Somehow, I thought her eyes were black... again, don't know why.

Anyway, is Legend of the Swordsman a book, a fanstory, or what? I must admit, its a very excellent title. I normally have problems with making up titles.

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Post by Tommygunner70 on Sun 31 Aug 2008 - 21:27

@Colonel Marksman wrote:Somehow, I thought her eyes were black... again, don't know why.

No, they are brown. lol.

@Colonel Marksman wrote:Anyway, is Legend of the Swordsman a book, a fanstory, or what?

I dont know how to class it myself. I mean It has an original story line to it, well at least the First story does anyway, because if Follows Thomas and Sora since the Age of 10 until they get married at the age of 18. the continuation I am writing right now is basically what we RP'ed made into Story format. before that though, you'll see how Thomas actually Discovers that Triela is his Sister. and the rest you know from Fanfiction.net Wink

@Colonel Marksman wrote:I must admit, its a very excellent title. I normally have problems with making up titles.

Oh damn, I just cant get around Summary's.

But the Title was pretty much a no brainier for me. seeing as its a Saga and with mostly Follow OC Thomas the whole time. And Thomas is all about the Honor of his Swordsmen ship. Also because he grows into the stuff that legends are made of.

So "Legend of the Swordsmen" was the best title for this.


You can find it on Fanfiction.net.

This is a direct link to the first chapter of the story.
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Post by Tommygunner70 on Thu 4 Sep 2008 - 12:25

Dahdtoudi finished the last art work, hope you like it.




This one does nott have any thing to do with my story, it was just for kicks.

The pose is depicted from "Army of Darkness."



OC Thomas Dutch: "You guys have no idea who your fucking with!"

But i also like the one Nachtsider thought up.
Nightsider wrote:Thomas Dutch: "You motherfuckers are in for it now..."
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Post by Tommygunner70 on Tue 28 Oct 2008 - 17:48

Damn its been long since I've updated this page.


I've added all the artworks so far to the first post in the topic.

Enjoy Very Happy

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Post by ElfenMagix on Tue 28 Oct 2008 - 21:41

Very nice and well done!
Give the artists 2 thumbs up for me!

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Post by Guest on Wed 29 Oct 2008 - 3:36

I love them all... except the ones with "10-year-old" Sophia. Well, you know how I am on the subject. When I first saw her, I asked, "What is Tommy doing with another young woman?" Then I read the description. When I hear the age "10", I typically think of Angelica for a brief moment.

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Post by Tommygunner70 on Wed 29 Oct 2008 - 7:23

@Colonel Marksman wrote:I love them all... except the ones with "10-year-old" Sophia. Well, you know how I am on the subject. When I first saw her, I asked, "What is Tommy doing with another young woman?" Then I read the description. When I hear the age "10", I typically think of Angelica for a brief moment.

I know Colonel, but the 10 year old Sophia is called Tsubaki. (You might remember her from the old RP)
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Post by Guest on Thu 30 Oct 2008 - 18:51

I could never figure out what Tsubaki looked like. My mind whirrled with different images as the story progressed. I finally just gave up.

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Post by Tommygunner70 on Fri 31 Oct 2008 - 18:05

Lol, I see.

Well with 'Legend of the swordsmen', I intend to fix all that.

Which reminds me, I am allmost ready to send you a preview where Wallez is first mentioned.
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Post by Guest on Sun 2 Nov 2008 - 19:50

Eh hee, I can't wait!

.... I forgot, are you involving the Wedding Wars?

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Post by Tommygunner70 on Sun 2 Nov 2008 - 21:02

@Colonel Marksman wrote:Eh hee, I can't wait!

.... I forgot, are you involving the Wedding Wars?

With a few twists and what not, but yeah. the general Idea will be featured yeah.
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Post by ebitempura966 on Sun 2 May 2010 - 7:39

wow, its good idea and she is very sweet, but isnt she is too soft to handle weapon
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Post by Tommygunner70 on Sun 2 May 2010 - 9:07

@ebitempura966 wrote:wow, its good idea and she is very sweet, but isnt she is too soft to handle weapon

Yeah Sora kinda is at first. Thomas does eventually teach her how to use a small revolver for self-defense. which she's only fired at the firing range, and only pointed it at another person as a threat once.

She does however train to be a soldier late on when Thomas is gone, all for the sake of being able to properly defend and take care of herself and their daughter.

That said I have since had some more art made, I'll post it when I get around to finding the links.
Heck my current avatar is a crop job from the latest art piece.

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Post by Tommygunner70 on Tue 4 May 2010 - 2:03

Ok just did some digging through Deviantart and I found the art works I've had made while I was away.


Without You Commission by =Dahdtoudi on deviantART



The Living Room by *jameson9101322 on deviantART



Treasures by *hakojo on deviantART


And a freebee that one of the artists made for me.



Swing by *jameson9101322 on deviantART

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Post by ElfenMagix on Tue 4 May 2010 - 19:52

ALL Great, Tommy. I love them them all.

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Post by Tommygunner70 on Wed 5 May 2010 - 1:44

@ElfenMagix wrote:ALL Great, Tommy. I love them them all.

Yeah, Treasures by hako is was the last one I had made. I like that one better because Hako's art style is derived from that which was used in the 'Ghost in the Shell' Anime which I think is the best art style out there to date.

In terms of cost and result, I think Hako is about the best artists out there. just don't count in it being done fast though, she likes to take it easy with drawing.

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Post by Alfisti on Wed 5 May 2010 - 10:05

Despite what most of the internet says: there are some really talented artists on dA.

I particularly like the last two.

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Post by Tommygunner70 on Wed 5 May 2010 - 15:45

@Alfisti wrote:Despite what most of the internet says: there are some really talented artists on dA.

Yeah, you yourself are a prime example Wink

@Alfisti wrote:I particularly like the last two.

Yeah, that freebee by jameson actually inspired me to do a little scene. Never would have thought of something so simple yet enjoyable.

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great art work you got your own style.
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@tremec6speed wrote:great art work you got your own style.

No I don't. I couldn't hold a pen to write my own name even if my life depended on it.

I simply paid another artist to draw all those for me based on my instructions.

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Post by tremec6speed on Mon 15 Nov 2010 - 4:08

oops.....sorry. Um great instructions? Embarassed
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@tremec6speed wrote:oops.....sorry. Um great instructions? Embarassed

hehehehehe.... Indeed they are.
Seeing what artworks can be created makes me wish I had the Motor skill to do so myself.
Its strange; I cannot manipulate a pen correctly to enable clear writing yet I can perfectly work with tiny parts and pieces like miniature screws, nuts and bolts.

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